| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 10:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHH Happy New Year, great chapter... squeal ( I know what I want on the album cover... a close up of his chest and belly-button..lol(I only just got home from work and its now morning (the birds are up) and I've been working all night (It would have been nice If I knew a lot more earlier that I could have work... very tired because I got up at like 10am in the morning at it is 5.30am the next day...))
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thios was a great chapter - awesomoe srtart to the New Year. I can't wait to read the next one V's gonna be either really pissed or slightly amused. I'm going with pissed though LOL. Thanks for a great chapter.
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Title: Hot damn!
Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 05:08 PST
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I really loved it when V said "I love my Maddy". I can just imagine her pouting so cutely. And I think I can imagine that last scene. Awww.... so sweet. You're giving me anough fodder for a couple more pics. Haha, I hope V won't kill him when she finally wakes up. Awesome chap, can't wait 'til the official cover!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 10:05 PST
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I am craving some Evan :( I can't wait until you update this cause I will be muy muy excited! :D Hope your holidays were enjoyable! we love you sueric!!!! --'-@ swtheart @)-'--
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 02:08 PST
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Wickid awesome so far! I recently had to re read the whole series...took me a couple of months..but I am so inlove with the detail and absolute work you put into your work. What an inspiration! I soo hope you update soon. I'll be waiting!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 17:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your Purity series! Please continue writing! You have such a wonderful gift of such an expanded imagination is uncanny!
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Title: Chapter 35: Oh, the reasons to smile sappilly and LMAO!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 08:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But, before all that, poor Bone. He was about to get straight walloped! V to the rescue! PHEW! Now...Main reasons to LMAO: 1. The running commentary on the reek factor of the salve Evan made; my PERSONAL favorites are: It smelled like feet . . . or death . . . maybe dead feet . . . AND: "It smells like . . . like dirty armpits!" she complained then shook her head. "No, wait. That's just you. You absolutely need a shower, you know, but that stuff really does reek . . ." AND: "Your mama can swear by it all she wants," Valerie asserted. "It stinks!" 2. His youkai snorted. `If she realized it, would we really be having this conversation?' (I love the bluntness of Youkai Voices) Main reasons to smile like a sap: 1. "Baby, I'm sorry," 2. The dual tender applications of the dreaded "stinky salve" by Evan and V 3. Further cuddle time with the emergin lovebirds (especially V cuddling up on Evan when he picked her up) 4. OMG, he licked her! I almost melted on the SPOT, SUE! I loved this chapter, Sue! Happy holidays, too!
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Title: **waves my lighter right to left** Zel, you RAWK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **tosses thong up onstage**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 07:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, laughing at myself here--ignore the major fangirl moment, plz **sheepish grin** Wow, I loved Evan's impromptu concert and his showmanship was so cool and funny! Gawd, I LOVE Diet and Bugs so much! And, can I just say I nearly swallowed my tongue when V went under the crowd. I was OVERLY relieved Evan pulled her out so quickly! All I can say is GULP for poor Bone.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 05:58 PST
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Whoa.... Evan SERflipped. Not that i'm surprised. But I bet Val will be when she learns the whole story behind that tattoo...
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 16:48 PST
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aw no more chappys for now : ( i guess im just gonna have to wait like everyone else lol cant wait for u to start posting again!! im ready for V to realize she loves Evan!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 05:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chappie - I knew his temper would flair up, but it was for a good reason humans are pretty fragile. I can't wait for the one-shot too :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! getting a new chapter from you is like going on a sugar high... you go up so quickly only to go down when you find out that you don't have any more...
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 22:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! Evan is sooo cute! I wish I could find a guy like him in real life. He's a little dangerous but he's a big sweetie pie underneath! I love He and V's realtionship... and I think she likes it too. I know Evan likes it. I'm glad he didn't totally rip Bone a new one, But he really should have thought about what Evan would've wanted. I laughed when He locked up the house after breaking a glass door. It seemed ironic. But I can't wait for the Christmas Special! Oh and I cited you as an inspiration to my writing of fanfics! I hope you don't mind... But your stories are what got me to want to write a fanfic. I have a few chapters up but... I'm stuck again. My sister is supposed to help me over christmas break. but anyways... GREAT STORY! Keep up the amazing job! You never cease to amaze me! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 21:51 PST
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Dr. Brown's Burn Ointment. Yeah, I know the stuff and love it for it's miracle-like properties. Though when we make it, it becomes more of a brownish color... though I did see a batch turn out brown-grey before... Evan's such a sweetie licking her scrape like that! Though Val would have likely killed him if she was awake for that! Heh, I predict them both being a little late tomorrow morning! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 17:21 PST
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Hmm....what is in that salve?? Now that Valerie asked that I can't remember if you've ever said what was in it before or not lol. I'm kinda glad that Bone fought back with Evan and that Evan didn't light into his head of security despite the fact that he probably wanted to. I'm looking forward to the Christmas one-shot; and so, until then :D.
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