| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: Chapter 33: Awwwah! The fluff in the midst of frustration!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 14:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was cute and funny and go, V! You've got your own edit! Can we say bootleg? I kid, I Kid! I just LOVE reading how everyone's so curious about the dealing between V and Evan and how Dieter and Evan vibe together in recording. I can't get the word Fucker out of my head, Sue, and it's all Diet's fault! LOL! So, how many times has V sighed? Lost count. But I can't help but chuckle every time. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Evan and V
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 11:35 PST
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Great Chapter as always. Its good to see V starting to enjoy Evans company even if it is just a bit. Thanks for the chap and ill be looking forward to the one shot you have in store. Happy Holidays!!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 08:38 PST
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Yeah, I second that a new chapter is a good way to start my morning! Loved it! Guess Evan really is more like his grandfather than anyone else! Keh's and all! But how would Bone know that Evan was so bonded to her already? Evan was being a little unreasonable - (just like Inu!) Loved the chapter - a little sad there won't be more until after the holidays - but I'll deal *sniff* Hope your Thanksgiving was good, and your Christmas is great!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 04:44 PST
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eeeee!!! What a good way to start my morning of day 3 of getting probably less sleep than V is XD I'm curious though, just what is in that salve? ha ha ha god I love Evan and V together
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 01:24 PST
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This has nothing to do with the chapter but I'm just curious, what's the color of Evan's crests?
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Title: Ohhhh Crap!
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 11:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOH! Evan is MAD!! I wonder why Bone wasn't watching her? Does he not like Valerie too much? Hmm... Well all I know is that Bone is in for one HELL of a railing. I hope he isn't too hard on Bone though, and I hope that Valerie can calm him down a little. But We'll have to wait and see! Keep up the great work! I have to say I think this is one of your most vivid stories yet! ~MSMND
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Title: He's toast....
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 13:18 PST
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WIth that kind of reaction, Evan is definately toast - I'd bet his youkai has bonded to her more then he would care to admit.. and though she's falling for him.. V still thinks he's out of reach.. Evan better work on chaging her mind fast before she goes back to "pickle".. he's up to his neck now! :-) Thank you Sue for another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 03:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chappie! I love this story I wonder what Evan's going to do with that temper of his. so very much like his Granpa :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 01:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so he has a bit of a temper too...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 22:59 PST
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So that's what happened at the beginning of the chapter. Valerie's been around so much lately, that it was likely that things happened and they forgot momentarily that she was only human. And, really, Bugs' bodyguards should at least try to be better at their job and not harass someone that's obviously with the party. Oh, well. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't remember ever leaving a review for you, and i don't know why. I can honestly say that you are one of the best authors/writers that i have ever come across. I love your stories so much! And Purity 9 is my favorite of the Purity series, along with Purities 3 and 6...well, i really like all of them. lol. but anyway, you are so great, and i just wanted to thank you for your regular updates and for gracing us with your creativity. I also would like to thank you for giving me somthing good to read. Really. You're great! That's all i wanted to say...Thanks again! :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 20:02 PST
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whooo!!!! update!! great chapter sue! hopefully now people are not gonna go after V cause shes always with him x: and what was up with Bone? D8
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! Can't wait to read the next chapter! That's one very evil cliffy... and I bet that the legendary "inuyoukai temper" is just about to blow. I love the way you described the feeling of being able to perform in a crowd. Is that from experience or something else? I rarely perform in public myself, but still I can relate to that kind of elation, the feeling of being able to stir the crowd. Great job. And about the fanart, I'm glad that you liked it. I actually noticed the ears when I checked out Duckie's references but by then, I've already inked and colored the fanart. Sorry! Anyway, I'll probably get it right next time. LOL.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 16:49 PST
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Ah, so the others were slightly right about how she got the bruise. It was cool to see him as he is at a concert; I'm glad that Valerie seemed to like it as well :D Have a good Thanksgiving, Sue!!!!
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