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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 15:08 PST
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I really liked this chapter. I could feel everything that was going on. The performance although written was a palpable thing. And I wanted to say thanx for posting my fanart for morio (gmonique89). Hope you liked it. Update soon
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there it is. I just knew something happened at a show. I hope he's not too hard on Bone, but this is his mate we're talking about here. No Purity man has ever been able to keep his cool when it came to they're other half. The next chapter should be very good. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 13:25 PST
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im so ready for the next chappy!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! V's trying SO hard to keep up with Evan and Evan is enjoying every minute of it! I think this one and the chapter before have been some of the cutest chapters!! Keep up the good work! I LOVE this story the most out of the Purity series so far. My second favorite is Purtiy 8: Vendetta. Can't wait for the next chapter, Oh, and if I don't get to review before Thanksgiving I just want to wish you and your family a Happy Thanksgiving! :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 01:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... (reading this while setting up my new laptop that I just got today... updating every thing...) sound like V is having fun.. at least she has some thing to do...
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 21:23 PST
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Yay for granting my wish for V/Evan fluffiness!!!! All I can say is MORE! WE WANT MORE! Aaaa... the things love can do even to miscreants... kidding! And I finished the fanart and sent it to suericfanfictions@gmail.com (I hope I got the address right).
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 14:36 PST
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CandyEars- Marvin is a tweeb who is ALWAYS away. THAT is why Evan always gets to jump in her bed with her =333 This chapter made my heart happy, your V/Evan moments are getting cuter and cuter, and makes me love them more and more every chapter. I was thinking Evan would have used V's mix on his CD xD or maybe he will, just not tell her XD I look forward to your next update Sue!!~
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 13:46 PST
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Yeah!! 2 updates this week?! You're spoiling us! They are sooo cute.. V is so falling for him (Evan was already gone).. so where is Marvin during all this time? I thought they lived together, but Evan is sneaking in to sleep with her... when she left did she get a new place for herself? Little confused.. Another fun chapter, thanks for the update! LOVE the fake tatts!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 13:25 PST
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Ah, so Valerie is actually starting to see that there's more to Evan's job then it seems, and is actually having fun, that's good! :D Thanks for the second chapter this week, Sue!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 11:47 PST
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Fake tattoos? And really good ones at that, nice! I bet the ones that are covered with the fake ones are actually pretty decent. I bet before this bet started, Valerie wouldn't have even thought about helping Evan with them. It's amazing what lack of sleep does! But I hope that she doesn't get sick from this too. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 09:45 PST
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YAAAAY! I was away for ages... stuffs happening... and when I get back, there's TWO chapters! Man, but this week's gonna kill Val... But I like that she's loosening up around him. It's kinda sweet.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 09:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She's got to crack soon, right? No one can go that long with that little sleep. She is sneeking in naps, but that can't be enough. I just can't imagine either of them giving up, unless Evan starts to feel extremely bad for her. Thanks for the update.
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Title: Love this
Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 07:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so impressed ith the entire purity series. I adore your work, Sue, and beg of you to keep on writing. The way evan thinks V is hot when she'd angry keeps reminding me of the song "When you're mad" by ne-yo. I don't listen to many pop-ish songs, but I think that one is cute.
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 00:19 PST
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Hi Sue! Totally have not been able to keep up to date with this and it breaks my heart to know how much I've missed. What's worse...still quite busy. Either way though, I needed a break and Evan and V totally lifted my spirits. Thanks so much for the wonderful updates and especially the great interaction b/w the two characters. Love them and you! Hopefully I'll be able to find some free time soon....Thanks, Sue! =^.^= (I'll drop by the forum in a bit too)
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 18:29 PST
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Wow! I can't wait 'til they hit the road! I think its gonna be LOTS and LOTS of FUN! I hope the sweet side of Evan would come out more often... but then again he wouldn't be the wise-ass that he is right? This chapter has been pure Evan Zelig evilness... *cackles* Yay for the road! And I got inspired a few days back so I'm making an Evan fanart ^____^. I hope you'll like it when I get it finished.
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