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 Title: Chapter 32: OMFG...I think I'm speechless...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2008 08:30 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yes, I, iloveanimecartoons, lady of soliloquy and ramble-induced run-on sentences am floored. Well, the song, Sue. Dude! Too many options for comment. It's very Evan. And poor exhausted V... **sniggers** Kinda wrong to find a sorta sick pleasure in it all, huh? Well, more for the duo to chuckle over later, huh? Evan's...a trip. **laughs some more**
 Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2008 02:30 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm back to write a review, yay! I love that the title to his next album is 'V', HAWT. I'm wondering if this tour goes through where ever Val came from.... hmmm.....
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 15:39 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh, how sweet that Evan wrote her a song, too bad its raunchy right? Lol. Ah poor Valerie. And to think, that was just the first day.
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 15:25 PST
Comment/Review:
First thing: I would like to know where Evan got those shorts. Second: Poor Val, that would be sych a sweet gesture... if it wasn't from Zel. Keep up the good work, Dark
 Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 14:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Poor V, that song is quite cringe worthy. ^__^
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 13:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Evan is just being plain evil...
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 12:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Evan's song for V is AMAZING XDDDDD poor girl has to realize that he really is smitten with her, his way of showing it is just a little different to what she prefers lol
 Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 10:29 PST
Comment/Review:
:snorts: The shorts... :wheezes: I don't know if I could job behind him for laughing! Please tell me they don't really make shorts like that. Poor V. She should just quit while she's ahead. But she's too stubborn for that. It would take an act of God for her to admit that she was wrong. And the song! lol! The poor woman. He just loves to torment her, doesn't he? Wow, he really is raunchy... lol!
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 15, 2008 14:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter A friend of mine is struggling to make it in the music world and her schedule is ridiculous and she's not even famous! I feel sorry for V...
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2008 10:25 PST
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4... AM? Does that time even EXIST? poor V...
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2008 14:42 PST
Comment/Review:
Aww~ V is so spunky. But I think even I'd die trying to keep up with Evan and I wake up at 5:30 every morning just to go to school. Well I hope Evan and Valerie get to go on the tour together. It will DEFINITELY do them some good together!! :D Keep up the good work!
 Title: Chapter 31 (OMG! **hugs Sue** another chapter!!! Huzzah!): Evan's pulling out the big guns, huh?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2008 20:33 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. V, not grasping the biz the way he does, is, most likely, gonna collapse by day 3. Poor mortal she is. And I wonder if it also has to do with his stmina as a technical hanyou that gives him his vim and vigor or if it's more his dedication to the craft, the rush of the crowd, the feel of the music, the comraderie of the band and road crew, the ability to be him, in all his deviant glory, and get paid for it that gives him the get up and go to keep at the strnuous hours tha he knows good and well would tax the hell out of her. Part of me thinks "well, damn, Evvie--taht was like swatting a fly with a U-Haul truck, dude." while anothe thinks thisw experience will go a long way to establishing truths and strengths...and vulenrabilities, in a good light. I feel the experience may just be the changing point needed to get the lawyer/client aspect of their relationship on more even footing, with better results and more openness. But, damn, Evan...you sure got her good--right in the pride. Poor V... It's sad how partly, I just chuckle imagining gthe shenanigans they're gonna get into. **choked snort** Oh, sorry 'bout the caps for the last comment--Caps Lock was pushed accidentally. I wasn't shouting.
 Title: chAPTER 30: hMMM...TRUTH'S COMING OUT A TAD BIT, HUH?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2008 20:19 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
INSTINCTS. bEYOND BEING THE "HELLION" THAT EVERYONE EXPECTS HIM TO BE AND THUMBING HIS NOSE AT AUTHORITY, EVEN eVAN, iM SURE, KNOWS THAT FINE LINE...NO MATTER HOW MUCH HE TRIES TO MAKE v AND jUDGE lISTER THINK OTHERWISE. bUT, THAT WAS INTERESTING, HEARING v STATE THAT SHE THOUGHT SHE WAS AUTOMATICALLY SIZED UP AS MUCH AS eVAN THOUGHT SHE DID HIM. fOR DIFFERENT REASONS, BUT ALL THE SAME, PREJUDICE SUCKS. i SEE THEM GETTING TO THE HEART OF THE MATTER ABOUT A LOT OF THINGS WHEN v JOINS HHHIM ON TOUIR. wELL, IF SHE AGREES TO. sOMEHOW, OU TSIDE OF HER GENERAL BLUSTER AND RESTRAINT, i THINK SHE'S AT LEAST CURIOUS ABOUT THE GOINGS ON , ON THE ROAD AND, THE WAY SHE'S BEEN TRAILING HIM AROUND LATELY, WILL SHE REALLY BE ABLE TO GO NEARLY A month WITHOUT HIM? hMMM...
 Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2008 19:53 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know.. I'm just a bit curious myself just how a rock star works. I hope Valerie doesn't get punished too bad!
 Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2008 19:19 PST
Comment/Review:
iloveanimecartoons' review on chapter 29 talking about 'Evan's layers' made me think of Shrek, and onions. Now I'm going to think of onions whenever I think of Evan xD
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