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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 21:44 CST
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whoops, double posted by accident
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Title: xoxo
Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hope you'll be updating on Valentine's Day!!!
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so excited for the next installment! will you be updating on Valentine's day? ;D
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Reviewed By: No Control [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 12:18 CST
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Another great chapter, the snowball fight was a great idea to show a different sde of Rukia. Can't wait to see how thy handle Christmas. Also, 700 pages wow! If you changed the character names you could probably get this story published as a novel. It's that good.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 11:22 CST
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Oh no the end is coming!!! I love this story so much tho! Okay I am so sad for Hitsu and Momo. But Ichigo and Rukia are getting cuter by the moment and the way she bolted when she saw the snow! This was a really great chapter! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 10:55 CST
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Great update. For a second, i thought it was orihime who was in the restaurant. Christmas is gonna be fun for the Kurosaki's. And Ichigo, wake up already! Update soon. *there are a few typos in the beginning*
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Title: This Was...
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 04:37 CST
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such a cute chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 02:07 CST
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awwww didnt want it to end, great stuff...nice job
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 22:28 CST
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another amazing chapter as always...I just want them to admit that they love each other already...but i can wait XD and i loved the jinta part...so funny...as well as the snowball...well acutally i loved it all so i cant wait for the update...keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kylara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 13:26 CST
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"Rukia was with him, he was with Rukia, and together, they'd .." Awww. Isn't Ichigo adorable. I like how he completely forgot what he was trying to interrogate Rukia about in the office, too. As always, I look forward to more.
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Title: First
Reviewed By: pollyhi5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
How come the chapter came in twice?
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Title: unfortunately perfect
Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a touching chapter for me. you did get some for the aftermath right unfortunately. i what it was like to be there for a friend who was raped and the way you wrote rukia's and momo reactions was good.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 04:54 CST
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You are amazing girl, haha the bed thing was awesome, as soon as the rain stop it made me think of the anime, good connection, and always a great chapter...what else can I say, and I'm sure i'll email you soon begging for a new chappie :P
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Reviewed By: No Control [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh man, that first part where they are in bed was intense. That was the highlight of the chapter for me although the rest was still very good but that first part was so damn romantic that I didn't want it to get interrupted. Can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:47 CST
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oohh!
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