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 Title: about damn time!
Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2008 07:55 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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about damn time they got it on and it was hot too!!!! nice job
 Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2008 01:51 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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W-O-W. That was... Well... Damn... It's a shame my boyfriend doesn't come back home for another twenty days, because that chapter really got me fired up! Wow. That was incredibly hot. I really like that it was Rukia who saught him out--basically, I mean, after all the pushing away she did. I'm sure Ichigo plans to remind her of that--a lot. Wow--I hope the next chapter picks up where this one left off. Wow--can't wait for more scenes like that. Perfect job. I couldn't tare away from this one bit.
 Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2008 00:54 CDT
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Very very hot. Nosebleed-inducing, for sure! Good job! I found Rukia's obsession about Ichigo's "You're not even worth it" hilarious... Only someone like her would never be able to let such a statement go... And how you set up the sex bits surprised me. I was sure (dreading it) that the flirtation and frustration would have been extended ... but all of a sudden, there was kitchen counter and Ichigo and Rukia were having sex on top of it! But it was not out of character, at all. So good job on that surprise and keeping them in character... I can't wait for the next chapter -- perhaps we can get Ichigo's perspective on things?
 Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2008 00:01 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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yes indeed, finally. That was amazing, and i think my dreams will be infected, not thst i mind. ...and now i have to die another week, i am desperately looking forward to your nect update.
 Title: OMG another great Update
Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 20:18 CDT
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WOW...That was like...WOW! It was awesome, it was hot and it was incredible. I hope the morning after is even better the night before. I can not wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. I so hope that you let Orihime see them having an intimate moment. It doesn't have to be them having sex, but maybe later when Ichigo declares his feelings for Rukia or they could be doing both...either way, Orihime so deserves it for taking such a stupid offer. Great Job...I look forward to your next update.
 Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Im not going to lie, that was magnifico! That was the definition of hot. Thanks so much for such a great chapter!!! It was the best study break! Can't wait to see the morning after, and does their door at work have a lock...because if not sucks for Inoue! s foa
 Title: odalisque
Reviewed By: leila307 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow.. *fans myself*.. that was very nice as usual you have a great imagination and you transfer it very well to your stories.. every single details *cough*.. im still getting over it, keep updating.. please! side note: regrets I have a contract..
 Title: BEST Bday Present EVER!!
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, my dear! That was definitely the best birthday present ever! You're awesome!
 Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it when a man can cook ... well. *wink* Awesome chapter! &&, as always, update soon!
 Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2008 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
oowwaa I didn't post my review for the previous chapter! aaww they got into a fight again? pppuuffuu...haha, Rukia not liking Ichigo saying that about her. She really does care for his opinion. And zee most recent updated chapter (ffuuuuuu) my oh my my my....I love it when Ichi's assumptions are right mwahahaah. So...delish xD Good job, can't wait for the next chapter mwahaha
 Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay an update!!!! This was a good chapter as always. Ugh, why are they fighting again? Ichigo sounded kind of like a little girl(i wanted to slap him and tell him to stop whining- yeah Rukia is stubborn but that was so unmanly), and saying she wasn't worth it was mean. mmmm I hope they make up soon cuz that was silly. orihime is a creeper.
 Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the idea of Orihime becoming "evil" (even if unknowingly). LOVE IT! But, I am tired of Rukia!! Even if I do understand that she's an emotional wreck right now...ACK! When will she wake up??!! If she doesn't want Ichigo, I'll take him! :) As always, please update soon!!
 Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 02:03 CDT
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as always i love your fic. ^-^v
 Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2008 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens. loved, as usual, and as always, update soon!
 Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2008 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
\"Hooker dress?" Ichigo chipped in from the other side of the room. "How come I've never seen this dress?"\ Oh gosh. That made me laugh. The fact that Ichigo, one, believes that online dating is not good enough for Rukia was amazing, and two, how he started kissing her was hot! I loved it. Karin made me laugh in this chapter like when she said "here, here." XD. I was cracking up. Hmmm. Oh. Inoue. Can. Go. Die. that's all I have to say on that matter. XD. Amazing chapter! As always, update soon!
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