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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 02:53 CDT
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ive been addicted to this story like the last one but i have notbeen reviewing :/ shame on me but that is besides the point...i love the whole not kissing on lips part. i was thinking pretty woman before even reading the pretty woman line. i am glad you are writing a humorous piece after your other story. good luck in college. don't worry you will be fine if you don't become an alcoholic ;) hopefully you will find time to write with your new busy schedule!
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Title: Goodluck!
Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 01:43 CDT
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Love the chapter...I really do, it's becoming one of your best stories, and I hope you do not rush it at all. Don't know if you remember me saying about I hope Rukia makes the first move in this story, and you laughed and said who knows, anyway I still don't think her 'accidental' kiss counts by the way, so don't make Ichigo 'jump' her :P Good luck with college by the way, you will be fine don't stress :)
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 01:19 CDT
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Wow--really awesome chapter. So many things I liked. I have to compliment you on keeping Rukia in character during/after the "accidental" kiss. I was really happy you didn't have her give in and shove her tongue down his throat. Inoue Orihime (ew) is troublesome... And as always, I can't wait for the next chapter, I was really happy and surprised to see this updated. Good luck in college, hope it goes the way you want. If you get discouraged, don't be--I hated my first year, but it gets better after that.
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 01:08 CDT
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YAY! That was great...I loved the Ichi/Ruki moment. I now think Uryuu and Momo should go into practice together...they would make great psychologists. My favorite parts where the 'clinically insane' part with Uyruu and Momo putting Orihime in her place...that was priceless. I can see Momo taking her out. That would be fun...or at least putting her in her place about Ichigo's feelings. Maybe Mom and Uryuu should meet and join forces...that way Momo could really be justified in putting Orihime in her place. That would so rock because someone needs to... This is such an absolutely great story...I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH! Great Job. And good luck with college...You will love it, just sit back and have fun. You might finds some friends would like writing fanfiction as much as you or maybe even teachers, I know of a few who do.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:27 CDT
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Can I just say I love you. this was magnificent. This chapter was so tense, that almost maybe kiss was the sweetest/awkward thing I have ever read and I love how I feel their emotions when I read. Momo is the best and once again Inoue is freaking crazy. Poor Ishida!!! okay seriously the sexual/emotional tension is so high it is fit to burst! I cant wait for the next chapter and dont worry, college isnt that scary. Its fun and challenging but you'll do great!!!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 23:28 CDT
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["You've finally discovered that you're clinically insane?"] && ["Oh, well then that's so much better."] Are the best two lines of Ichigo's part of this chapter! I looove Ishida. He's so flippin awesome.=]] I love how both Ichigo and Rukia were like, "Bad! Bad sign! Stop, stop!" yet niether one of them pulled away. Except Rukia, but she doesn't count. XD. And then, they both go to their friends to ask for advice! Haha. Oh, and poooor Ishida. It must be tough liking the creepy girl. haha. Thanks so much for the chapter! Have a wonderful time at college! As always, update soon!!^_^
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 23:20 CDT
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Oh wow. This chapter totally rocks! Loved loved loved the detail with which you wrote the "almost" kiss. As I was reading it, it felt like I was watching a slow motion film clip. Well done on that... And I also loved how both Rukia and Ichigo ran to their best friends -- and the different and similar reactions they got... The Momo - Inoue interaction was also hilarious! Momo would be the kind of girl who would be able to put someone like Inoue in her place, that's for sure... Momo giving Ichigo Rukia's private contact details -- that was a winning move from her. She may be bubbly, she may be annoyingly in love, but I am loving your Momo more and more!... And lastly, I can wait for the big reveal on Rukia's past relationship that you have been foreshadowing -- and how that would play out in Ichigo and Rukia's relationship.
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 21:34 CDT
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I must say...its my favorite chapter too xD oooo, I love this...and right when it gets to the good part ttooo. I don't know, even though I felt as if they hated each other enough to kill, their nervousness and growing attraction to one another seems so natural. I'm enjoying this immensely. The 'kiss' OH HO HO! too cute xD I can't wait. I know you have college, but pwease update whenever you are able to :3 Good luck with your studies!
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 10:48 CDT
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This story is great... The interactions between Ichigo and his family are really fun to read. I love how you are building the tension between the two of them! I can't wait to find out what happens when he sees her in that dress! Update soon... please!!!
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Reviewed By: Sato Miki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 22:08 CDT
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I didn't expect that...I was expecting something like, "not worth to see.."..but she was really honest!!..and I loved it!!..why do you have to be sporadic right now???..I want the next chapter T_T...I can't wait T_T... so please...update soon!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 20:18 CDT
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I can't wait to see Ichigo's reaction to seeing Rukia wearing that dress!!:) Tension is building nicely!!:) I can't wait until the party - seems like a lot is going to happen!!:) Also loved the interaction with Ichigo and his family!!:) Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful. I wanted to be there at the park and see Ichigo without his shirt on. I think Rukia will get him back when he sees her in that little black number. Good luck in school, I hope they dont torture you too badly because its torture without updates. Great chapter I cant wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: Sean Wright [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally. I have been a fan of yours for long time, but I have never left a review because of problems I had with site earilier that made it difficult to leave reviews. I just wanted to say that I love your stories, I enjoy your style and charactizations and each time I read you, I feel like a hack. For this story, I am pleased that Rukia and Ichigo have finally noticed each other and I can't wait to see how they react towards each other. Sean
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 20:50 CDT
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oh my, Rukia's dress o____o I so want to see Ichi's reaction to that, esp. after what happened to him last time heheh. Very lovely chapter, and the tension has started! From both ends! mwahaha. Ichi shirtless...that made my morning =D I want to be rruukkii... heh, good luck with your college term.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 13:14 CDT
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Turnabout is fair play, eh? This chapter was super hilarious. Rukia being all speechless and red-faced at seeing a bare-chested Ichigo was just too funny for words. I'm glad to finally a crack in Ms. Kuchiki's well-crafted armour... The interaction between the Kurosaki siblings was also very well-written, especially when Yuzu jumped into the Ichigo-teasing... And that dress Rukia bought. From your description, it really seemed to be very high fashion and classy but sexy at the same time... I am so looking forward to seeing Ichigo see Rukia in that dress... Well done on this chapter and again, I can't wait for more of this story... On a personal note, good luck with college. I hope you have a wonderful time there.
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