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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:22 CDT
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This chapter was awesome! I loved the part when Rukia met Orihime ... wow, Inoue was jealous, eh? Haha. I'm loving this! Keep up the aweeeesome work!!=]
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 15:01 CDT
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Rukia is a smart girl...way too smart, and Im sure Ichigo is not that calm. I think she wouldnt be the one to run away but she will return back with a better plan, to drive the other one up the wall. Damn it I really dont like the Ichigo in here =/ The stupid bastard does not know what he is into. Well keep writing...you are as good as always, dont keep us waiting!
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... I wanted to see Rukia smacking Ichigo's face but I guess she still needs to keep her cool after all. Inoue sure gives me shivers -__- you sure made her a creepy woman. How will Ichigo and Rukia end up together though? Rukia sure hates Ichigo like hell, this leaves me wondering what the twist in the story will be?? Hmm...
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Orihime is super creepy, I just imagine one of those creepy dolls that follow you around the room with their glare. Oh no Rukia i leaving I want interaction!!! and possibly more....this is really good cant wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 11:38 CDT
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Once again, another wonderful chapter! Ichigo is such a bastard, but I hope he soften up to Rukia soon. I want some IchiRuki smut! LOL XD Keep up the excellent work on this story. I look forward to reading the next update.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 10:36 CDT
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Yay! New chapter! Happiness :-) I really felt for Rukia in this chapter. She cleaned up the office Ichigo left like a pigsty to piss her off, she has to wait for him to arrive late, and just when she thought she was able to intimidate him with her outburst and glare, he totally ignores her! Gaaah! I can feel her frustration... and this is why your writing in this chapter is so great. You were able to get Rukia's frustration across so well... I can't wait for how she'll get back at Ichigo... If there's only thing I'm not enjoying now in this story, it's that lull between chapters... I want more! Please keep the rest of this wonderful stories going.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 06:23 CDT
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Love the story haha, I want another chapter already, gogogogog!! I think the attraction between them is already there, the whole Ichigo research Rukia did and the sexual aspect of that, pretty funny...it's obvious what she is telling herself and what she is probably feeling is a bit different. And the whole Ichigo womanizing isn't that bad in my view, I think obviously the woman in the story have to agree to it, so it's not like they arent willing, so if your single, why not have fun :) I'm looking forward to more one on one situations between Rukia/Ichi, alone in the office...hehe, I kinda hope Rukia makes the first move, just because it feels like every story Ichigo has to make the move, oooo i dont know, i'll love it either way. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 23:58 CDT
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Woah, I have no idea how they are going to make it work. I mean he is such an ass, though I do love the description of his eyes. I have no idea how Rukia is going to like him one bit.=/ But I am eager to read more, just take your time writing hon.:)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 23:58 CDT
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Woah, I have no idea how they are going to make it work. I mean he is such an ass, though I do love the description of his eyes. I have no idea how Rukia is oing to like him one bit.=/ But I am eager to read more, just take your time writing hon.:)
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 23:55 CDT
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*blushes* You updated! *squeals in delight* Hahahah, wow, I feel so sorry for Rukia. They haven't even started working together, and she is already ready to kill the guy xD and then there is Hime...haha, love Rukia's interaction with her...so much tension going on. If looks could kill o.O I want IchiRuki interaction! Its so much ffuun! x] I'm almost tempted to poke and prod for another chapter. I'm dying to know what is going to happen! Please update ssooooonn! xD
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter once again, cant wait until they actually have to work together! And a proposal how cute!!! Inoue is going to be jealous...cant wait to see that either actually!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 20:51 CDT
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Why cant Rukia fight for Ichigo's attention!, why does it always have to be the girl who gets to choose lol...ahh well they both stubborn one of them will have to crack. Love the story by the way, awesome job..cannot wait for update :(
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 05:28 CDT
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I have to say that jazzjackrabbit has expressed my thoughts wonderfully! I would also LOVE to see that Ichigo has to tussle for Rukia's affections! (cue Renji) Another thing that's nice to see in fanfics (besides a cocky Ichigo) is really a jealous Ichigo!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 16:00 CDT
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Your "Love" for Orihime couldn't be expressed so wonderfully!!! Well what can I say, she touches my nerves again!!Normally I dont mind her existence as long as she keeps her paws away from Ichigo(in the real plot), she is a needed character to balance some things in the plot but oh dear god how I hate to read her as the potential rival(I never write her as the potential rival, I hate Senna too so I prefer other females in the plot if its too necessary), However I know that you are going to bash her head open in one way or another *grins evilly*...Good Chapter and I cannot wait for the "fraternizing" between the "elitist bitch" and the "corporation dog". Oh, on a lighter note, I like to read about rivals when it comes to Rukia, Ichigo shouldn't be the only guy for such a wonderful woman(considering the original plot and the fanfics)...Keep writing my dear...cheers!
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 11:09 CDT
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Well, I was reading what Nowshin said about Ichigo's character and I think that since it is an AU fic, you've probably taken some of the cocky and arrogant parts of Ichigo's character and exaggerated it. But nonetheless, I think that your characterisation of Ichigo still seems like a decent person and based on your other fic, I believe that Ichigo and Rukia are going to undergo some major growing up. So I believe (and hope!) that the really decent and mature side of Ichigo is going to be revealed by Rukia soon! Next, I have to say that I love the snappy dialogue between Ichigo and Rukia, not to mention those jibes about her height, they've already got a fiery chemistry going so keep that up! And I also like the way you've brought out Rukia as the little tough girl with a lonely inside, so hope to see more of her inner world too. Most of all, you've kept the momentum of the fic going so really looking forward to the new chapters!
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