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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:29 CDT
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Loved this chapter. And the development between IchiRuki. I think this series is your best so far. And thank you for not having Momo make any comments about what happened at the hospital, i was afraid that might happen. love her, but I personally think their relationship would be kept to themselves, even if they have best friends. How did someone get a picture of strawberry hugging rukia? I must say, this chapter has me begging for the next update! *hint, hint* ;]
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:21 CDT
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so glad you did't kill off my byakuya but very nice but sad chapter
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Title: Truly a wonderful piece
Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. I really appreciate the fact that you are allowing them to develop the relationship slowly, more realistically. This story has me addicted and I can't wait for the next chapter! It really is the best piece of Ichigo/Rukia fanfiction that I have read. Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:29 CDT
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This story is so great!! I love how you are developing the romance slowly and it just 'feels' real. I know it's only been a week, and you're in college and all, but I will be very very sad if you don't update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 15:32 CDT
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Gahhh. Awesome chapter! So much looove!^__^ Ichigo's POV. Mmm. I laughed with the creepist three minutes of his life bit. Externally, Aizen may seem nice, but, inside, he's a demon. I'm glad Ichigo's finally realizing that side. That way, he can protect Rukia when the time comes ... if it IS Aizen behind the whole scheme. Lovely chapter, dear!=]] As always, update soon!
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 14:24 CDT
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aaww bless your heart, you updated xD Nice chapter...really cute IchiRuki moments, especially with the sandwich scene (it suddenly made me crave one myself heheh) Great chapter and can't wait for the next =)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Poor Rukia and Byakuya, but Ichigo is such a sweetheart, I cant possibly love him more than I do now. And Momo, giggling about Ichiruki when Rukia's brother is in surgery, I loved it. Aizen is getting creepier, I wish he was the one that was shot...I dont like him one bit. Also seeing Renji was a very nice suprise, although the distance they expressed in their meeting was saddening. I can't wait for more Ichigo and Rukia interaction, this is soo good!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 06:27 CDT
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ok i must say that i'm been reading this for a long while and the only reson why i didn't give a review is because my home internet was down and at school i can review so i'm doing it now. i really like the characters in this how rukia is all bussiness like and ichigo i laid back and momo is just so sweet i love her in this story and i really do hope that you don't kill off my sexy byakuya lol
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 02:43 CDT
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This story just keeps getting better and better. For the first time in the story, I can definitely see why a woman like Rukia would fall in love with a man like Ichigo... he was supportive in a non-cloying, non-pitying way, he cared about her and what was happening to her (and her only family) but he never showed in a way that would have pissed her off or threatened her own strength, and he made sure she had her bestfriend with her... For anyone who's ever waited in a cold hospital (with uncomfortable chairs) for word on the condition of a loved one, I think this chapter is pretty spot on. You really did capture the scenario and the feelings brilliantly... which was why Ichigo's simple concern, that soothing hug, that was such a relief to read... So well done. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great new chap! i hope the Byakuya will be o.k. and that was SO CUTE how Ichigo comforted her and stuff. well another great chap! i can't wait to see what will happene next! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--this was exceptionally well. I was very pleased you updated. I loved the IchiRuki interaction, and now I'm off to join that group you mentioned, because I have to read anything you write. Thanks for the brilliant fic.
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 19:45 CDT
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the way you described rukia's comfort from ichigo was dead on to real life comfort. it was beautiful and heartwarming. i loveeeeeee where you're leading this
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 18:58 CDT
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I am in total awe every time I read your updates. Everything you write is so crisp, original & brilliant. Your introduction of Renji's character was perfect. It is how I would have envisioned he would be doing. I loved how you eased the feeling of unease Ichigo had toward Aizen. It was like Aizen was trying to see if there was anything going on between the two to see he had a clear path to her...creepy indeed. I can see Ichigo going into overprotective mode. My absolute favorite part was the seen where Ichigo turned Rukia around into an embrace to keep her sheilded from mental picture of all the blood her brother lost. You have laid excellent ground work for the "falling in love" aspect of Ichigo and Rukia's relationship. It is no longer just lust between them. Ichigo immediately went into concern mode with even thinking about it. I've known quite a few womanizers in my time and they do not willingly go to a woman's aide without thoughts of how they would benefit from it. You, subtly, took that aspect away from Ichigo where Rukia was concerned...I don't know if you intended for it to be that way...but it was brilliant either way. This was another AMAZING update. Oh and before I forget...THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for not killing Byakuya immediately. I pray you don't kill him off at all. However this is your story so I won't complain...if it makes the story even better, then go for it...I'll cry and get over it. AGAIN, GREAT JOB and I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 18:54 CDT
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You choose the least convenient times to update - last time I was in the middle of cleaning my room, this time in the middle of a Lit assignment >.> My parents and teachers do not thank you. I however, do thank you for another brilliant chapter! =D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 21:31 CDT
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wow.... You got me, i picked the wrong Kuchiki. Love the story and the new plot twist!
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