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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 11:50 CDT
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Jesus Christ Tituba, how do you know so much about business mergers? I thought you were still in high school? That or else it's your best guess, but either way major points for making it sound believable. Anyway, this story is great. I like how you've used Momo in this story as well as Orihime in, dare I say, a more antagonistic role than some of your other fics? Great job Tituba!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot that was a great chapter! Ha so last chapter Ichigo got his little victory and now in this chapter Rukia got hers. Oh ho ho heads are going to be clashing soon huh? XD! Even though they are starting off on rough terms and seem to very much dislike one another, I can sense that deep down they might actually enjoy each others company in a weird twisted sort of way. I'm also wondering how and when you'll actually try and get them together when it seems like they can't stand being in one anothers' presence XD I really can't wait to see how they work together and deal with each other as the story progresses because they are definitely at odds. Also Rukia filled out her online profile so I wonder how that will play a role as well. Will she meet a new guy to date? Could that person end up being Ichigo? Hehe that little tidbit is quite important. And you said something big is happening in Chapter 8? But we don't even have Chapter 7 yet! Gah, the anticipation just might be too much to bear XD Oh well I await patiently (though I'm still very much anxious) for your next update. Keep up the great work! =]
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Reviewed By: Sato Miki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 00:55 CDT
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Hello,I'm Sato Miki from FanFiction.net..I love you're stories cuz they have so much hot sex in there xD..in fact...I was the one who 'introduced you' to zapenbits xD..I love this fic..but it also scares me..cuz I think I'm a cat lady..T_T I just know few men and I don't have cats.. you certanley like anything about laws don't ya? xD
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 23:07 CDT
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Haha. I love their staring-to-the-death-litterally contest. That made me laugh. XD. It's not dragging AT ALL. I love how you're taking your time, letting us get to know all the chacaters. That's what makes you so great. How well-balanced everything is. The character development is going great, as usual. I'm looving this storyyy! Update soooon!^_^
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:46 CDT
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Rukia rules and wins! I really loved that... I hope her winning streak continues because I believe that is the only way someone like Ichigo would actually learn to respect her... The first part of this chapter frustrated me a bit though. I felt that Momo should have been more sympathetic to Rukia, less judgmental. Momo reacted to Rukia's rant like she knew Ichigo, like she was mediating between Rukia and Ichigo. Which I felt was slightly out of character (in the context of your story). Momo here seemed like the kind of person ruled by her heart -- and her reaction to Rukia's rant was very "logical" and seemed not consistent with how she behaved towards Rukia in the beginning of the story... Although Momo's advice led to Rukia's win over Ichigo in this chapter, I felt that it would have made more sense for Rukia to figure that out on her own... That being said, I enjoyed this chapter very much. And I can't wait for more of this story. I hope you update sooner!
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:18 CDT
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OMG,you updated! I'm ssooooooo happy! I have been waiting for so long to read this, and you definitely did not disappoint with this chapter! I love Rukia to pieces, so was grinning the entire time she and Ichigo had their little battle (with her winning this time hehe). It was just awesome!! I must insist to poke and prod you to continue! Please update sooooon!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, This cahpter added to the story the way the other 4 didn't. Wow, I am exicted about this fic once again like I was n the second chapter. Wow, I am enjoying this. Wow!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man Ichigo that was cruel what you did to Rukia! Wow it had to suck to be in her position being their for 3 hours and him acting like a complete jerk when he arrived late. You've put Rukia in a tough setting here! I wonder how she'll be able to work through this. I wonder how you'll be able to write their interaction more with the way you've written both their characters as pretty hard headed individuals. Oh well I await your next update! This fic looks really promising and its been really fun reading it so far. Hope to see more because you left us on a horrible little cliff hanger which just pains the reader because they want more XD! Either way great job and thanks for another epic story! =D
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I wont keep saying it but the HitsuHana scenes bothered me so I skipped them. Just don't like it. Otherwise it was a good chapter. Rukia is stuck working with Ichigo. Oh ho the fireworks are going to explode XD! And Ichigo has his own plans as well. Hehe hes a conniving bastard huh XD! Lol well it was another good chapter that progressed the story and plotline.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Lol well this is an interesting take on Ichigo's character. He's arrogant, smart, and a womanizer. Hehehehe I guess I can sort of imagine him acting like that. I mean he is one of the strongest and best developed characters in the series so the way you have written is believable to an extent. I just hope he doesn't become a total prick or something and Rukia gives him a good kick in the ass and fix him up XD Oh another thing that I really like about this fic is that you made it in a corporate setting! OMG do you know how awesome that is since that's what my education and current job is centered around. I mean I feel like I can totally relate to the setting which is just freaking awesome! Anywayz, I think I'm getting off topic. An interesting take on Ichigo's character and he's sure in surprise with Rukia starting to work with him XD!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah tbh I cringed at the HitsuHana scenes. I just really don't like Momo and her with any pairing, so yeah those scenes were hard to read. Otherwise it was a good chapter. So your going to get the IchiRuki relationship in the works by having them work together eh? Hehe I await to see the interaction and the hell they put each other through and whether they can make it work. Not a bad chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot this was a good chapter! I like how you've set up and explained Rukia's character so far and it gives an in depth perspective about her life, very well done! And her first interaction with Ichigo...I could totally imagine that happening XD Seems they may not start off so well and tempers will flair. Ah just the way it should be XD! Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm this seems to be an interesting fic. Longer than "Murder my Heart" you say? Oh man if you can pull that off I'll truly bown down to you XD Well I like the premise so far. I'm not a big fan of Momo (she's actually my least favorite character, but I can tolerate her) and HitsuHana isn't one of my favorite pairings so that's the only real downside. However, since you are an exceptional writer, I'm sure I can put my bias aside and still enjoy the fic because you do a great job with them. Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: HavenC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, your writing is awesome! This fic is awesome! I really like the plot you have create here. It really drawed me in, fastly, if I might add. I have no complaints on how the characters act. It's funny the way Rukia is towards Ichigo's office. I loved her reaction when she came upon the mess he had in there. "Oh... my... God..." That made me laugh. Also, I love the way you "love" Orihime in this fic. She kind of reminds me of a obbessed physco-banana. Yes, like a banana who is obbessed with a strawberry, in this case. So you really need to update! Because I'm dying to see what happens next. What does Rukia do after she stalks out of her and Ichigo's office?! *hypervinaltes* GAH! MUST... KNOW... O-O Well, keep up the awesome work and update soon. :]
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Reviewed By: burdened soul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 14:47 CDT
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Personally, I'm not a big fan of cliches, so expermint all you want ^__^ it's refreshing to read something new around here, and yes, since I'm a big fan of asian drama, and since the main character in those dramas is usually mean, I totally love where your story is going. I love mean womanizers( only in fic but not reality) impatiently awaiting an update, and please please make it a quick one. I'm gonna bring a friend of mine to read this. it's a must read!
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