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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 05:35 CDT
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Cocky Ichigo mixed up with a bossy Rukia is always fun to read. Great job, keep the chapters coming !
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so this is two reviews in a row... I suppose I should have put this all in to one but.... either way really good chapter, I was hoping they would have to work together! Congratulations on your finals and graduation! Thanks for the early chapter!
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack I am behind in the reading and reviewing but the first chapter is really really good. I got all giggly when he put the card in her pocket. I am glad you are continuing this because its great! Now to get to chapter 2!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 21:21 CDT
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congrats!...very very nice fic! ^-^
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 03:47 CDT
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Ichigo will be a freaking demon in his adulthood...Oh how I would love him to exist in reality!!! The only word that came to my mind was FUCK too...I cant wait to read more of it. congratulations on your graduation!!! And no you are not a perv, I write like that too because I cant think of Ichigo being not sexually active in a sense after passing that teenager stage =)
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 02:02 CDT
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First off, congratulations on your upcoming graduation :-) Secondly, I think it's awesome that you write Mature fiction. You're really good at it -- great at blending fluff, humour and hot sex into your stories. And lastly, this story is really going great so far. I love Rukia here -- I particularly love how scared people are of her. And I love how Momo interacts with her... As for your Ichigo, I can't wait to see more of him in the story. What I've seen of him so far is pretty hot :-) I loved how they literally crashed into each other's lives (so very much like Bleach canon). I can't wait for more of this.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 00:27 CDT
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hehe wow, a pleasant surprise when i woke up this morning to see another chapter, what a great story honestly, I can picture how a few things are gonna play out already I think and I cannot wait to see it happen, the amount of talent you have as a writer is incredible. I love the ineteraction between Momo and Rukia, be funny when Ichigo is the topic of conversation between them. As far as your question in your last ""is the fact that I only write Y and X rated fics weird… or perverted? I mean, I enjoy writing these types of fics. Do you guys think it's… odd? "" It's funny you ask that, because I go straight to this section to see if you have updated anything hehe, that story you did that wasn't rated X, I completely missed it for ages, and for a month or so wondered what happened to you and your stories :( awww Anyway love it, love ya stories, look forward to the next chapter.
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Title: xD eeeeeee
Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an excellent start to what I know will be a very delightful read. The relationship between the two in the beginning reminds me a bit of Murder My Heart, which is my absolute favorite from your work, so am very excited to see these two meet up again. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ghost of Yesteryear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next confrontation between Ichigo and Rukia. When they finally have sex, they just might injure each other, the bad feelings between have increased I believe, more so than your other fics. God, it's hell waiting in anticipation like this! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I LIKE IT. I LIKE IT!!!!!!! Sounds like so much fun, now Ichigo and Rukia can have sex on a desk!:D I don't have much to say to your question, you have read my fics. None of them are safe for kiddies.:D I enjoyed writing them as well, mostly I enjoyed the plot but I write for the smut. They are writen for me and then the rest of the population.:D I can't wait for the next update. I am so excited!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 12:40 CDT
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finally, something new and good to read! it has been a while since i read something that instantly amused me. i love it. career driven girl meets up with another career oriented and probably ruthless, but definitely handsome guy. and that meeting was absolutely fabulous. well we are talking about ichigo and rukia here. it was very ichiruki, if you know what i mean. ichigo presented an air of confidence, and smuggness in that moment talking to her, leaning down and putting a calling card in her pocket. i wonder what made him change his mind about actually asking her to pay for the ruined shirt. he must have saw something in her at that time. though i think he'll probably still use that as an excuse to get to her. i am really excited about reading ichigo's thoughts. anyway, so, both are lawyers huh? and corporate lawyer at that. i am guessing that the company ichigo is in is one of the leading competitors of rukia's comp. yes, they will definitely meet once again. oh i will definitely wait for your updates.
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Reviewed By: mipku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 00:16 CDT
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This chapter was pretty funny...Can't wait to see other conflicts between rukia and ichigo! :)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 18:58 CDT
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I like the way this fic is going. I am excite to see how it will play out.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 15:15 CDT
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Finally they met! and in such a Ichiruki way that it was almost too cute be true. Ichigo is such a nasty player =p God help him if he gets on her wrong side. Update soon my dear, I shall be waiting in my corner...Cheers!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: YuyuKawai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Their first meeting n.n!!! that was awesome!! I loved it, so IchiRuki! I was waiting for yout update, and i was so happy when I saw this chapter!!YAY! lOVELY CHAPTER(sort of XD) anyways congratulations Tituba n.n, hope you update soon *3* all my support and hugs, Yuyu°
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