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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 10:57 CDT
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["Hold the elevator!" Rukia's thumb came out and jammed the button to close the door. "Mr. Kurosaki!"] I cracked a grin at this part. That's a lot coming from me when I just woke up fro a five hour sleep too. XD. Haha. Anyway, this chapter was wonderful, as usual. I love all of your detail that's written wonderfully but it's not boring like some stories I've read. So, yay for detail!!^_^. Awesome chapter and update soon!!=]]]
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 10:23 CDT
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Very good chapter :-) I like how Ichigo and Rukia are starting to get along -- and I absolutely love the fact that the reason is their common regard (or disregard) for Inoue! Hilarious twist. And the last bit -- I'm guessing someone wants Rukia dead... and it's Aizen? I can't wait to see what will happen next: if Toushiro will propose, if Ichigo and Rukia continue to "get along", and the hot smex I'm sure you'll be serving up in this story :-) Thanks for this chapter. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooot that was a quick update! Thanks a lot! Man this chapter was really something else. As I read it I started to notice an attitude change with Ichigo. He seemed to have a different opinion of Rukia and dare I say like some of her qualities? It seems as if he's changing his mind from absolutely loathing her to being able to stand her presence. And Rukia also is taking a new stance. By acting different then she usually does she may stir up things (in a good way) between them. I like it. Good and slow development. Your doing very well with it so far through the fic and I eagerly anticipate when one of them makes a move XD Alas through the fic you hinted at some things. Rukia apparently had someone she was with (no idea who it is, so I'm curious to see who you use) and her trust was broken. Could this be why she keeps such a hard shell and not open up? Also, Ichigo and Orihime aren't on best terms and Rukia didn't exploit that even if she could have, showing act of kindness possibly? Also, the last part in the end really got me wondering what you have up your sleeve. You didn't give away anything st all so my imagination can only think of what crazy plot you've come up with. Damn it, you need to update now! You know the rule about leaving evil cliffhangers. You have to write twice as fast now! XP Either way great chapter, great fic, and update as soon as you can! =)
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Reviewed By: Amy_corE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mhmm... It's been a long time since I last read your works, Tituba. I finally have a time... ^^' I love IchiRuki AUs. And you are definitely a master of this genre. "Odalisque" has already captivated me even if it's not in a "hot stage"...yet. Hehe, I'm also in love with your style of writing... and writing hentai scenes. xD Looking forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(ratings-stuff: 'kay, so I put '9' instead of '10' for enjoyment factor because I'm just waiting for BIG CONFRONTATION OF ANGRY UST 'cuz it's gonna be freaking GREAT. lol. But I always love your stuff ['cept for that angsty one you're writing at the moment, I refuse to read angsty IchiRuki a.t.m.]) YAY, OMG I LOVE YOU, you gave Ishida the best lines, lmao.......! ;DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD! Can't wait for the next chapter.... *stalks next chapter*
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot another update and good chapter as well! I really enjoyed reading it! Well what to make of it...Hmmm I see you've taken Rukia and Ichigo to stop completely hating one another and trying to get it to work. Even though its not like their best buddies, its a start XD! So far you've gotten them to not be able to stand one anothers presence, to sort of trying to work it out by having two separate desks. However, I do feel that they will eventually have to cope with one another and make it work. And could Rukia have found a temporary ally in Ishida? Hehe well I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens. Can't really predict what will happen next chapter so I eagerly await your next update. The story is turning out very nicely! =]
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Reviewed By: Sato Miki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 14:38 CDT
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C'mon! you gotta be kiddin me!..you a cat lady?..I mean..the way you write...anyone would think you're a true sex goddess! xD Anyway,great chapter..and that damn desk..I hope it can be used for more interesting things...you know...like...sex desk? xD Update soon!
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter once again. I love his " all your opinions are rejected" line, it was absolutely perfect!!! It makes me sad, and kind of excited that they hate each other so much. Ishida was great too, and what was up with Ichigo wanting a sewing needle! It was all wonderful! I cant wait for the next chapter, and for those two to start the lovin!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 13:09 CDT
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I'm glad that they finally reached an agreement! Well ... sor of. XD. I loved this chapter! There was one part that I laughed out loud ... it was when Ichigo said, "All your opinions are rejected!" It was Bleach only ... AU Bleach! I thought that was soooo cool!!^_^ Keep up the great work! You're doing an aweesome job on this story! Update soon!!=]
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I made him my bitch." HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! I love that line. Ichigo is Rukia's bitch. HAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! Perfect line, I like how they are both trying to have some semblance of a normal office relation. I wonder how that will last? And now that the annoyance for each other is established I supposed we can move on with plot. I want to read what will move this fic forward.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 02:41 CDT
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Good chapter. Good to see that they are finally coming to some sort of agreement, or at least some way of co-existing for the time being... Bringing in Rukia's desk was so much like Ichigo waving a white flag at Rukia. Brilliant move... All this about desks makes me think some hot sex desk sex will happen for this two... Loved seeing "All your opinions are rejected". Nice nod to the Soul Society arc... Momo was so sweet for commiserating with Rukia by joining her for lunch everyday. Totally something a best friend would do... I hope Toushiro proposes!... And Ishida. I really like him here. I enjoy his and Ichigo's friendship. And I like how he interacted with Rukia... I almost feel like Ichigo would find cause for jealousy at how the two are so civil with each other... So "torturing" your readers, eh? Oh well. This story is proving to be the kind to be worth the wait... And I reckon no amount of begging will get you to update sooner. *sigh* Must keep checking this space for updates then :-) Great job so far. Can't wait to see how this relationship will pan out.
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 01:51 CDT
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LOL at Ichigo and Ishida's convo...it seems Ichigo and Rukia are more alike then they would like to be. Too bad they can't stand the sight of each other at the moment. The entire scene with the desk move and Ichi's arse was hilarious. I'm wondering if Rukia really didn't enjoy it as much as she was making it out to be xD The things Rukia notices xD I loved the entire scene where they negotiated a treaty to put up with one another. A wonderful chapter and *poke poke* please update soon...yes, I read you will be slow to update...evil xD Please update soooonnn! ^^'
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good chapter, I love the way Rukia turns the tables on Ichigo. Cant wait for the coming chapters!!! dont worry about the MMH thing it doesnt seem similar at all, all of your stories are unique and wonderful!!!! Sorry my reviews have all been late, its not due to a lack of love for your writing!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 11:13 CDT
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love your stories!!! Your on my favorite authors list =] hurry and update more! XD
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Reviewed By: RogueAmazonBoo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I love the way you write Ichigo and Rukia, but of course you already know that. = ) I can't wait to see how all that pent up frustration is going to combust. It will be a beautiful, beautiful thing, I'm sure. Orihime is a little disturbing. She's got that nice stalkerish vibe going. Willing to concede poetic license for that and hell it's kinda amusing. Let's see what else…kinda wondering if the merger is really on the up and up, but that's just my natural Aizen is a rat bastard reaction. Basically love the whole thing and I've said it before and I'll say it again. Although I don't loathe Orihime I sure as hell don't get how people are pulling that ship out of their butts. Ichigo would freaking eat her alive. Rukia is the only one that stands a snowball's chance in hell of keeping him in line. So here's my review, two thumbs way up, one from Ebert and one from Siskel's ghost. Man, I miss Siskel, Ebert and Roeper just doesn't have the same excellent pop culture ring as Siskel and Ebert.
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