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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i havn't reviewed in forever. well anyway, great chaps so far! i just love how u write! ur REALLY good! and Ichi/Ruki is my one of my fav couples. oh and i know wat u mean about the whole Orihime thing. i'v never really liked her either. idk y i just really really don't. but anyway, great chap! update soon!
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Title: Don't Fret...You Rock
Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for psycho and putting her in a mental hospital. I dislike Orihime as well. I felt the same way about Kikyo when I first began watching Inuyasha and you see how that eventually turned out...Kagome got her man...which I am praying will happen to Rukia and Ichigo. Anyway...GREAT CHAPTER, I have always loved the Ichi/Ruki dynamic of your stories. You have taken them both to entirely new levels...in a very AWESOME way. I love how you had Byakuya tell Rukia she needed start looking for a husband...I sort of got the impression he was doing it so she wouldn't end up like him...trying to be a brother without letting down his guard. He needs to have a revelation in the form of a beautiful female. Byakuya needs to get laid...again. Which brings me to the subject of your lemons...OMG they are the best and they are not there just for the sake of being their they fit naturally into the story. I look forward to your next update...Awesome, Awesome job and keep on keeping the Ichi/Ruki love Alive.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 16:47 CDT
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Wow, my friday just got a whole lot better, that was such a good chapter. Ok where to star...Momo and Aizen, please dont let Aizen ruin things for them, Hitsu and momo are so wonderful together if Aizen gets in the way I just dont know. I have a good idea since Aizen is effin crazy and Inoue is effing crazy just put them in a room together and they can creep each other out for ever and ever. The lemon was wonderful as always but sex without benefits....mmm that wont last long but thats good because I think it gets better when they are emotionally involved too. I love how she goes in and shes like now! Cant wait for next time...and for Orihime to get the pics of this rendevous!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 02:36 CDT
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loved it, good chapter...I hope you update again quicker then last time =p
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 18:05 CDT
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Ichigo's side! So, I feel really bad for him. Like, this was the first girl he actually WANTED to wake up next to - *squeals* - and then she's gone!=''[ Of course, he's just making plans for the next time ... Haha, next time. Let's see what RUKIA has to say about that. XD. Excellent chapter! And, as always, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 12:39 CDT
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Hey don't sweat it...college around this time can be maddening. As long as you try to remain calm things will be fine...and don't forget to have fun. Now on to your review...this was an amazing chapter, I'm glad you had Rukia leave the morning after, Ichigo needed to see how it felt to be the one left...even if Rukia felt uneasy and scared about what she was feeling and how things would be between them at work. This will make Ichigo appreciate wanting her more. It should make him want to work harder to get rid of his womanizing ways. I can just imagine him coming to work before her to be there to see her when she arrives. He'll keep up his original demeanor and try to act like it didn't happen to help her save face, but that will only last a little while until they both get tired of it and they end up on his desk during lunch with Orihime catching them (I'm so mean and so anti-orihime...she needs to go down). Anyway Great update...please update soon...when you get the chance. Fall break should be coming up soon, so you will have a chance to actually breath...I know this because my starts tomorrow (Yeah). I soooooo love your Ichi/Ruki stories...they make me happy. Again GREAT JOB!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 00:28 CDT
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Another good chapter. Rukia was very much in character all -- which I loved...Getting a glimpse of Ichigo's perspective was also good... I can't wait for more! Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I was kind of hoping MOmo wouldn't find out, so sooon at least... Anyway, as usual, dying for your next update, especially considering the context! :]
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a good chapter! Dont worry I could never be mad at such a good writer. Plus I completely understand, school is a butt kicker...right now I should be working but eh.... I loved how she freaked out and left because it was so realistic,she was scared and ran I also love that he was hurt because usually he is the ditcher. I wish she would have stayed and there would have been cuddling!!! Momo is such a good friend! I really can't wait for more, this was so good, not to mention hot!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 23:31 CDT
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I was distraught when you didn't update last week, but I'm in college--I understand. I loved this chapter. It was totally in Rukia's character to leave before Ichigo woke up. I really can't wait to see how things play at the office. I'd really like to see Ichigo try to take her in the office. hehe--but I'm torn because I think they're both too professional for that. I dunno I think you could flip a coin. Anyways, I really loved this chapter. I love the detail, style, and development. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope, even though I've been dying for more plot development, I hope there is not too much Orihime in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 22:47 CDT
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bwhahaha. *puts down angry daggers* Only because this was a delish chapter. haha Ichigo, what goes around, comes around, I suppose but aawww...I can't wait to see how she faces him Monday. bwahahah *keeps angry daggers nearby* so you better update soon, miss...yay for cushion chapters!
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Title: ARUGH!
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 20:35 CDT
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YAY! An update!! And a lemony one, at that... Thanks for the lemony fluff chapter...you are a master of lemons. :) ACK! Rukia!! If I could, I'd slap her silly. And...is Ichigo falling in love? Can't wait to see him scanning for her at the park and then how they interact at work on Monday! And Orihime... will she figure it out? Hehe. I hope so, but only because I'm mean and anti-Orihime. Sorry you've been so swamped, college will do that to you, especially now with midterms (ARUGH! I feel your pain.) Take it from me, though...just make sure you take time to write something non-school related every now and then. You'll be much happier with a stress outlet. And we'll be much happier with more updates... it's win-win! :D
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 13:27 CDT
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Finally, finally, finally!!! I wanted to smack Rukia silly for all those times she got close to bedding Ichigo but pushed him away! And cookies for Momo for pushing her friend along!! =D
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 22:43 CDT
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Sorry I've been gone for so long - college tends to take up a lot of my time now!! Great chapter and I agree - Finally!!!:) I still can't wait for Isshin to meet Rukia - I think that will turn out to be hilarious!!:) I definitely can't wait until the next chapter!!:)
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 13:27 CDT
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HOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! Aww, finally. Now we have to deal with crazy Hime. Where's Uryu? My birthday's on the 30th!!! (Halloween baby!!!) Thinking of any trick or treats, where Ichigo plays a trick, but Rukia still gives him the treats.... It sound preverted, I know,lol.
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