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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 01:10 CST
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1st of all... Happy Eeeeaaarrrrlllllllyyyy b-day :) 2nd-ly You're going to Japan to see the movie??? my gosh... im so jealous... 3rd-ly Muhahaha. We have a new roadblock Renji here :) Yes! I love the drama~ [shower flower pedals] 4th note I
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 15:50 CST
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haha, that was hilarious. I wonder just how long it will take them to fully realize that they're falling in love. And I love possessive ichigo. And pity, but still, love renji. Awesome update. Can't wait for the next one. And i wish i could go to japan with you!! It'll be too long before i can get any access to it... Also, this chapter needs a few edits, e.g., what does this mean "Rukia was actually on a date, and Rukia's date in general."? And a few others that i can't find by scanning, need to do hw...
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 05:32 CST
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Firstly, AWESOME chapter-- love the angst and possessiveness, playing with emotions... fucking fantastic. XD But, now onto more important matters, you're going to Japan to see the movie?! I am so JEALOUS! You're so unbelievably amazingly lucky! ARGH! I will be doing all within my power to try and see it, but the internet stretches only so far. =/ Still, Happy early Birthday! =D Hope you have an awesome time-- I'll be saying this again in the next chapter review, which I'm assuming will be within 11 days, so yeah. You ROCK, never stop writing. =) --Caz
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 00:40 CST
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I loved the chapter update...I wonder when Renji will realize Rukia only sees him as a friend. Poor Ichigo...He's in love and in denial. I felt so bad for Ichigo. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 23:44 CST
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Really you don't like this chapter? I really enjoyed it. It was funny, sexy and serious all in one. She bit him!!!! That is sooo funny, I love how you write Rukia. And Ichigo being all possesive is really great too. Can't wait for the next chapter, this story is awesome. PS Happy Birthday in 11 days!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. I thought Ichigo was perfect, and hilirious. And I like how Rukia stood up to him (even though I look forward to seeing her give into him). And I'm a December baby too! I just turned 21 on the 5th. ^_^ And even though I'll say it again, I'm going to wish you a happy birthday early, now, and I can't wait for your next update...Seriously...Especially since schools out till the second week of January for me...
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 21:09 CST
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Oh gosh. Rukia was like so awesome in this chapter. I was glad that she took charge against Ichigo - in public! That was great. And nice kissing scene, *wink*. I liked when she shoved him back and bit him. I was like, "Haha! Take that!" XDDD. Thanks so much for the chapter! And, as always, update soon!!=] -Liz
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh snap Rukia is pissed! lol. well another AWESOME chap! i really like it! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT'LL HAPPENE NEXT!!! oh and happy early birthday!!!
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Title: THANK YOU!
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 20:08 CST
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Wow... this was a GREAT chapter! I feel sorry I haven't commented in awhile, school's been nuts... but I've been reading faithfully and loving the story! It's finals week... and I am soooo happy I checked my email before settling down to write my paper. I was wondering what was going on with Byakuya's shooting. I have got to say, no matter what you think was wrong with this chapter... it wasn't. :) You rock! I
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 19:52 CST
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Much as I like some good old-fashioned IchiRuki lemon, I must say I've missed the less pleasant aspects of their relationship in past chapters, so this was most certainly appreciated =D I don't know WHAT you think is wrong with it; I personally loved it ^^;;
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 19:21 CST
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damn i could feel the tension in the air from those two guys...it was writtend perfectly...XD but still Ichigo deserves what he got...I cant wait for more yum yum and happy early Bday mine is next week...hells yeah for winter babies
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:06 CST
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sry :( i got realli high after I read ur update.... Please bear with my previous over-dramatic review.
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:04 CST
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Oh.My.God. I never knew eating strawberry ice-cream can be so ~hawt~ This is definitely my top 1 favorite lemon XD Yeah. Momo seriously need to get a brain... she can't do that to shiro-chan. But I do kind of agree with Momo on the ichiruki relationship thou. It's gettin a bit too wild. (smirks, it's realli hawt thou).Just purely out of pleasure. [in a opera singing voice] "Where is the lloooovvvveeeee~~~" [gets attack by reviewers' tomatoes n shuts her mouth] [wipes of the splatted tomato] well..ichiruki better realize their feelings for each other sooner, or else Inoue might...--- [gets squashed by a giant pumpkin] [writes dying message on floor-board]... please... update [and she fainted]
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 13:54 CST
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tsk, tsk Momo...seriously, get a brain And damn, ichigo and rukia!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THE STRAWBERRY ICE CREAM THING!!! IT WAS SO KINKY AND JUST WOW!!! It was just SUPER GREAT!!!! i really loved the chap! and I hope Momo doesn't do anythng stupid and messes things up with her and Tochiro! they're too cute for that to happene!!! lol. well it was an AWESOME chap!!! hope you update soon!!! oh and HAPPY THANKS GIVING TO U TOO!!!
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