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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 20:42 CST
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wow..another intense chapter and I was sort of expecting that with Momo and you handled it really well...I know toshirou will be there for her cause he is the sweetest thing ever but this is a touchy subject for any couple so i cant wait to see what you do...and i was hoping rukia would get the L word out but I guess its too early int he story XD but I wuv it anyway so update soon pweezzzz
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 16:40 CST
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Okay. So, Ichigo pretty much became my favorite person in this entire chapter. When he told Rukia about his mom's death and then about the rain, I nearly died. The fact that it was different yet so right with the actual series. And then ... when he told her that she was the one to make the rain stop, my heart sputtered when hers stopped. THAT. WAS. SO. AWESOME. And he's questioning his feelings! He's totally in love with her, Ihave no doubt in my mind. He just needs to realize it first ... Great great great chapter! I really loved it ( as you probably already know ). As always, update very soon! Have a great week and weekend! -Liz
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 16:27 CST
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That was a very good, emotional and touching chpter. I thought the sexual violence was written with poise and respect towards victims. The love brewing between Ichigo and Rukia is so palpable and I really cant wait until they say something to each other. Also I hate Aizen and hope he gets his ass kicked! Cant wait for the next chapter! Love them all!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I very much enjoyed this chapter. I think Ichigo saying the rain stops with Rukia was adorable--irrestiable, and I think Renji and Ichigo meeting again was perfect and humorous. And you handled the suggested sexual/rape crime well. I look forward to further progress with Ichigo/Rukia--and always the next chapter.
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Title: might be spoiler but...
Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this might be a spoiler, but is that 'slut' Matsumoto? *eyes bug out* anyways, keep up your great work! i look forward to reading the new installment! :]
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Title: AnimePrincessInuLover (signed out)
Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH CRAP!!! Aizen drugged Momo! oh what'll happene now?! and Ruki wen wild! lol. i wonder if she's going to ask him about that woman again. who was she anyway? well can't wait for the next chap!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! U DID A GREAT JOb!!!
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: CoolGuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this since it first came out and I must say your work is remarkable. The way you develop the drama and keep that sexual tone is truly art. Plus this masterpiece pushed me to register just so I could comment on this. Great Work, keep it up.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: No Control [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story. The thing that I enjoy most is the pace of the story. Even though it is long it allows for the realtionship to develop more which is something that not many other fics do. Also, even though this storyline has essentially played out in one of your other fics I still enjoy this one immensly and check back religiously for updates. Keep up the good work and please update again soon. One more thing. That was freaking hot when Rukia gave Ichigo that blowjob. I was waiting for some descriptive oral sex(for Ichigo) ever since the chapter where Rukia was taunting Ichigo by mentioning having a dream where she sucked a guy dry. That was awesome.
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Reviewed By: Kylara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thaaaaaaaaaat shuts him up. Well, at least it stops his interrogation. That's very like her to do. I am very very entertained, and soo happy to see you updated. I check every day if I can! And poor Momo. -_-; nothing good happens with Aizen.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 12:35 CST
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Ack! Who was that slutty McSlut with Ichigo, well after that steamy argument he wont be thinking of any other girls anytime soon. Thanks for such a great update!!!!!!!!! But what happened to Momo, what is Hitsu going to do???
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 23:21 CST
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hmmm...is the blond Orahime??? dun dun dun gonna have to wait and find out...and i definently cant wait for the next chapter to learn more about Momo and what she is feeling...i have to admit this is an amazing story and to make an AU fic like this is awesome...i bow to your greatness keep it up *bow*
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:17 CST
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Interesting chapter, I'm not exactly sure why Ichigo would do that at all, it's kind of stupid really if infact it is how Rukia saw it, kind of hope it isn't :<
And poor Momo I hope it all works out for her, pretty good chapter, hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 20:46 CST
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Ichigo was SO dominated in this chapter. Girl. Freaking. Power. XD. Update soon! -Liz
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 18:01 CST
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OMG WOW OMG OMG NOOO! Rukia = Teh Uber Pwnage. Love love love the jealousy, love the angst, and LOVE the reversal of positions! Yay, Rukia kicks ass. Aww, Ichi! But... Momo. =( AIZEN you BASTARD. She's so STUPID! Shiro... Momo. =( Need I say it? You're like the best friggin' writer ever. XD
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 16:56 CST
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I'm glad that things are staring to take a turn for Ichigo and Rukia. I wonder how long it will take for Ichigo to admit he feels anything for her at all!:) With that said - Orihime is sooo annoying!! I feel kind of bad for Uryu! I'm glad that Rukia and Momo made up too!!:) Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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