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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 21:02 CST
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WOW! This chapter was freaking fantastic, as usual! I reallyyy, again, don't want Momo to cheat on Hitsugaya! That'd be sooo bad! Thanks for the chapter and, as always, update soon! Have a great Thanksgiving!=]] -Liz
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 16:09 CST
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uggggggghhhh...Momo, you IDIOT! OMG i just want to beat her...but Aizen has always been a coniving jerk so u got him down pat...and damn i wish i was rukia cause I, would like a piece of Ichigo yum yum thanks for the update though and i cant wait for another chapter its been forever but i love it XD
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 14:22 CST
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I loved this chapter, especially how you incorporated Momo's thoughts into it. She seems to be mistaking the fact that the sex between Ichigo and Rukia is so good because they, even though they do not realize yet, care for each other deeply. She and Toushiro can have that kind of relationship too, but someone has to initiate it first. I just hope she doesn't go running to Aizen and sleep with him searching for what Rukia's has...when she already has it with Toushiro. I have a feeling you've already thought of that...I can't wait to see where you take this...As always this is a fabulous chapter update and a phenomenal story. Keep of the terrific work and I hope you and your family have a very Happy Thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 13:19 CST
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NOOO Momo don't fall for the gorgeous but crazy Aizen...poor Hitsu!!! Icecream eh, talk about chills. This was a really good chapter, I love that Rukia loves his family. But what is Momo doing, I hope Rukia can knock some sense into her. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Happy Thanksgiving!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--that was insanely hott...Loved the chapter. I think in the way you wrote it, with Ichigo's need to kiss her and have his mouth on her, and how he kissed her, I think you did a fantastic job showing how he's slightly caving, and having feelings for her (that he doesn't realize yet). Gotta say, I really hate this whole Momo/Aizen thing (did in the anime too), it's depressing. And I feel horrible for Toshiro...He's so hott and doesn't realize his fiancee is being led to stray...He should take her roughly against the wall and make her remember him before all other men. But you're doing a really good job at writing Momo's fickle side...I'm hoping you don't wreck a happy home...
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 10:15 CST
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Ahahahahaha. Stupid stupid stupid Hinamori. That girl is completely GONE, in my opinon. Just waiting for the point in the manga where she turns. Brilliant portrayal-- damn you know how to write! You've like totally manipulated my opinions for everything in Bleach. First it's like, okay, she's best friends with Rukia, she's not that bad (even though I hated her before), and now it's like, wtf you doing you silly girl?! Though, I am an avid HitsuKarin supporter myself, but you just write brilliant. Haha, strawberry ice cream! That's gonna turn into a freakin' theme now. Awesome, keep updating! =) --Caz
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Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 19:55 CST
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Oh, my Goodness (O_O), It's been so long since I've signed into mediaminer (freakin' college)! Your story was the first one I clicked and it is AWESOME! You have completely outdone yourself, Tituba. Especially because you've been able to keep up with your writing even going to school. (I can't say the same at ALL (-_-;). I love your older Ichi, he's soo smexy. But I have to ask this...why do you keep inflicting physical pain on my Byakuya??? LOL You killed him in MMH and now he's laid up in the hospital....(T_T) Why?? *Sniff* LOL. Great work!
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Title: hail the great tituba!!!(^-^)v
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 00:06 CST
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oi,...been a long time since ive read your work, and i must say, i missed it. dont you think this fics turning into a book...anyways very nice work. kipitup
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 12:57 CST
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Yay yay yay yay yay! Die, Orihime! You know, your stories have affected me so much that it confuses me when in Bleach canon Hinamori and Rukia aren't that close. =/ Awesome, man, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 21:20 CST
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The picnic scene was hilarious :) I was grinning all the way. So... is Rukia going to find Isshin first when she's pregnant? I have my fingers crossed. I really hope our favorite Ichiruki have children [I know this sounds cliche.. but I've got to spaz this out.] so there will be more drama in the story and she can complete Byakuya's will. But after all, this is your story. I will just sit back with my mouth shut and continue to be amazed by your awesome fanfic. There's one problem though. I kept on stabbing my computer screen when creepy Orihime came up. My finger really hurts now...
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 21:10 CST
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Hahahaha... Ichigo and Rukia are slowly falling for each other :) I luv the way how u describe their feelings
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 12:07 CST
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Die Orihime. Great chapter as always, the karin thing was hilarious, and yay for the development of some romance. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 22:19 CST
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That was terrific. I will always love it when you write Orihime any way you like...as long as it is NOT with Ichigo. You can wrap her in a straight jacket and chuck her off a bridge and I would absolutely LOVE it. So the whole psycho bit it awesome. I love the steamy office scene and Orihime being there to here it. I giggled like a little girl holding a cute puppy. And the whole Ichigo's family and Rukia was great. I can't wait to see how things play out on that end. I, also, can't wait we start seeing how much Rukia is falling in love with Ichigo. I only have one question...where is Uryuu? I can't wait until he finds out about Ichigo and Rukia. Or does he already know? He so smart I wouldn't put it passed him. This is such a great story. Thank you for your wonderful update. This has to be the BEST ICHIGO/RUKIA Fanfiction of all times.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a good chapter. The moment Ichigo and Karin started fighting I couldn't stop grinning and then when Rukia giggled I was just as happy as Rukia. Oooo I love picnic time! Woah Inoue heard the whole thing...ewww, can't wait to see what will happen. I hope Momo and Hitsu are still ok. And the little office tryst was hot!!!!! Thanks for all the updates, they make school less stressful for me! Once again can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 21:11 CST
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man..i hope she does get pregnant cause that would be a whole lot more drama to deal with...plus thanks for updating...orihime is CRAZZZyyyy...i cant wait for another chapter so update soon please XD
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