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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot! I was literally at the edge of my seat waiting for ichigo to make his move and ws completely satisfied with the outsome, that was incredibly amazing!!! I am glad they didn't go all the way, leaves room for more awkwardness and sexy stories. Ack I want the next one already, when those two are together in your stories my day gets 10xs better. Great chapter loved it!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 17:58 CDT
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Tatsuki and Uryuu? Intriguing. Let's see how that develops, will be refreshing to see you pair Uryuu up with someone else. That elevator scene.... clever. I almost thought that was going to be a full lemon but then you have Rukia exert some control which is perfectly within the character you've established. And yeah, trust me when I say that there are ditzs who hang off of old rich men who aren't blondes. This I know from personal experience. -_-;;;; Glad to hear college is treating you well, though see if your college has an anime club. Most universities have one, check it out it would definitely be worth your time to join one.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 16:45 CDT
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You know what, I am going to be honest and tell you that you seem to have an issue with blond girls. Maybe you would like to diversify a little. I find it that you lay it a little thick with Rukia, but that is not surprising since you have stated before that she your fav character. The elevator scene was nice but Ichigo should work a little more to get Rukia in his bed. I really hope she insist on a new mattress.
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was a good chapter, especially since they didn't go all the way in that oh so wonderful elevator scene. Tatsuki only knows about fashion because she's a journalist, right? I can't imagine her knowing about it just because. And I am curious about Tatsuki and Uryuu, did they leave together, or just before Ichigo? Well, i guess I'll find out. I am drooling for the next update to come out.
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 15:08 CDT
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I bow to your greatness...that was a truly amazing update. The elevator scene...totally hot. I can see Ichigo steadily picking away at her hard exterior until she can't take it any more that is when it will get really interesting. Uryuu and Tatsuki...maybe...that would be an interesting pairing his knitting needles and her martial arts...it would be sick and twisted and quite wonderful for him to get over Orihime or at least make her jealous...especially if she caught them in his office in a compromising position, right after catching Ichigo and Rukia of course. You have to rub salt in the wound (or rather grind in her case). That was bad of me...bad, bad Isabella...Oh sorry for getting off subject. Anyway, I CAN.NOT.WAIT. For your next update...But I will. Because greatness take time. Now on a more personal note...I am so glad you are adjusting to college life. See I told you, you would find other Bleach nuts. So, no go forth become their queen, let them bask in the glory that is Tituba...oh and have fun, learn lots of stuff and enjoy life.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 13:03 CDT
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And the hotness begins! Definitely an enjoyable chapter (that elevator scene is classic Tituba!)... I really enjoyed how your described the party and the surroundings. I liked that Tatsuki had a part in your story and that you acknowledged Ichigo's friendship with her... Aizen is really turning out to be quite creepy, eh? I can't wait for more of him... And I can't wait for the rest of this story. Please, please, please update soon... And on a personal note, it's good that you're enjoying college. Glad you found fellow Bleach nuts :-)
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 12:23 CDT
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Wow. OK, that was a very mean cliffie. But still, very well done. I actually felt myself exhale when it was all over. Then I laughed. You are such a great writer!! Poor Ichigo... LOL
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 10:56 CDT
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hhhaaiiiiii o__________O HHHHAAAIII...ahaha, I'm giggling like a scary fangirl right now. oooooo. Oh my...oh my oh my...oh my my my. The elevator scene...ahah...poor Ichi. Aaahhhh I loved this chapter. There is no way either will be able to brush this off as they did the first kiss. There shall be fun mufufufu =D uupppddaattee ssooonn...Navi craves more xD
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 10:54 CDT
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you know.... you're rather evil, that cliffhanger... OMG but it was sexy as hell
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Reviewed By: Sato Miki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 23:30 CDT
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OMG! kissy-kissy ichiruki!! I loved it and you know it! hahaha so please...update soon..I might not be able to spend more time in my lap,there is a lot of homeworkI have to do...and I want to now what will happen after this!!..if I read chapter 15 I can survive with that xD..this is getting super coll,interesting..I want more! hahahaha (that sounded relly perverted xD.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter. Ichigo didn't sound like his usual pig self. I am glad to see you are reverting him to his usual nice guy state.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I want to second the reviewer who said thanks for not having Rukia stick her tongue down Ichigo's throat. I love how you handled her, so totally right in character. And... I have to say "Go Momo! Yeah!" :) Rock on! Don't be worried about college... how many other students have their own fans? :) I hope you will find time to continue writing this story and not leave us hanging on! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 21:07 CDT
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Also, I reeeaaaallly want to know more about the assassination plot.
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Title: MinatsukiRukiaChou's review
Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been able to focus on anything, I keep on daydreaming about this story and what might! P.S. i'm not exaggerating, i think i spent 7 out of the 10 hrs. I've been awake doing that. i love your work, and this story. Your plots are intriguing and engaging, the characters are pretty much in character, though personally, since my views of orihime are different...but this is your fic, so whatever. i think this is the only one of your fics on MM that i haven't finished reading, considering it's not done. your are currently my favorite ichiruki fanfic provider.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:44 CDT
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*shakes head* Sometimes Tituba, the way you handle Orihime you make me wonder if you were picked on by big-breasted girls in high school... Anyway onto this story. Lots of good dialog, most especially the dialog between Uryuu and Ichigo, essentially cutting Ichigo off at the knees. Feel kinda bad for Uryuu though I don't think he's going to get the girl with Orihime creeping for Ichigo pretty badly. Anyway, mission accomplished great chapter and don't let college intimidate you, it's not as bad as you think so enjoy yourself.
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