| "Tales of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chapters. story and all o.o. and i agree with ladynorth76. the characters are definately not OOC. but the question still stays. you'll probably have to have kurama find out sooner or later? haha maybe maybe not. but keep writing. your chapters are beyond good =]
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 28, 2008 02:09 CST
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Of course I enjoyed it!^^ I think the characters are acting in character. I'm guessing you're going to have Kurama find out about Kagome somehow or no? Update soon! I look forward to your updates. No one seems to write good Hiei/Kagome fanfics anymore. :( Thanks.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 23:59 CST
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Yet another great chapter, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 22, 2008 13:47 CST
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You could never disappoint!^^ Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 23:58 CST
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It seems that Hiei is finally coming to terms with the fact that he has feelings for Kagome. I liked the part where he thought about being willingly kissed by a Miko and rubbing it in Kurama's face. That was amusing. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for another!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 17, 2008 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. I look forward to your chapters.^^ Is Kagome going to get really powerful and while Hiei is away learn her new abilities that have been granted her? Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 10:03 CST
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poor kagome she thinks hiei doesnt like her and now that he's going to be gone she'll blame herself
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 01:51 CST
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I loved the emotional connection that they shared when they were looking at the stars, it was very touching. Oh, and they KISSED!! YAY!! Ok, so technically SHE kissed HIM, but it was still sweet. Thanks for posting, I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 22:37 CST
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I really enjoy this series of one-shots and hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 04, 2008 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new update. I loved how she went looking for him. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 10:41 CST
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Those two are just so cute together. It was amusing sending a sick Kagome after Hiei, very funny and very Kagome-ish move to include. Loved the chapter, love you lol. Look forward to the next chapter, keep up your awesome work and good luck on anything else you work on.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 06:04 CST
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Heh heh! First Kagome thinks Hiei has upset their routine, then I thought YOU had upset ours. LOL! When I started reading, I went "Hey! Kagome had a chapter LAST week." So, see? I had the very same expectations for his appearance. (And I'm not even feverish. ^_~) It was fun to have a chapter where the action took place and we got a look at it from both sides. I have to say, I am completely embarrassed for her for not realizing it wasn't TIME for him to show up yet. We'll chalk it all up to the fever, though, and not mention she was extra-anxious to see him because of her growing feelings. Kudos for mentioning her perfectly healthy reaction to him. And I had to laugh when Hiei's reaction to having to hold her and carry her was that he didn't want to have to because he knew he liked it and he didn't want to like it, and Kaogme's reaction was "Oh! This is nice! He's all muscle-y!" Hee hee hee! She'll be falling down and twisting her ankle all the time now. ^_~ Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 21:17 CST
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Again an awesome chapter. It was a nice approach- the mom, outsider view to have. It's always when you have someone else say something to you that you just barely recognize yourself, to go, 'oh wow that's right'. Once again I'm amused by how it ends with Kags trying to steer clear from the idea of possible emotions and falling back on that safety net title of "friend". Cute chapter and well written. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 02, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They're finally starting to fall in love!^^ Yay! Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 03:22 CDT
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What? No Hiei? *stuffs piece of dark chocolate in mouth and pouts* Heh heh! You can't fool your mother, even if you're trying to fool yourself. And it is often easier for someone else to see something that is so close to you that you can't. I really enjoyed the way you had her mother let her know that it really wasn't a secret. And the bit about inviting him to come around in the daytime was cute. The poor woman probably doesn't have a clue that Kagome's "friend" is a demon. She went looking for him to tell him off for not showing up? She must be feverish. Most gals I know, (including myself!), would pay him back in kind and not be there the next time he DID show up. So glad I'm older and wiser now and know that guys don't realize you're purposefully avoiding them to teach them a lesson when you are. LOL! But she's going to corner him, huh? Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. ^_^
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