| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it WOULD STILL BE ALL HIS FAULT, no credit limit or any thing... that guys asking to make him go bankrupt... all though their may not be that much clothing in that shop to do it...
|
Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapter! I cant wait to see how much fun Kagura has haha. ^_^ keep up the great work!
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagura and sesshoumaru have plans of their own... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp ( Inuyasha Baby_bre) On: September 21, 2008 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fine, but it was a litle short there wasn't enough action or comedy (a little weak). Get Sesshy to try to kiss Kagura in public, and get her to pull back or refuse to kiss him. ooooo have him to look at her with hungry eyes of want. lol that would be good.
|
Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this story so far! its so cute and funny! I love how they are toying with each other lol. Keep up the great work!! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't think that "Lunch Date" really counts as a very good date... Sesshy has to bad the girls off with a stick doesn't he...
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That sort of date doesn't require chocolate, it requires calling the nice people with the white jackets that make you hug your self...
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that sesshoumaru is serious about kagura since he mentioned his proposal... a very natural reaction from kagura... what will she do next... will she talk to kagome about it?... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: September 16, 2008 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is the first Sess/Kagu fic I've read. I have to say it's really good. Can't wait for more.
|
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i shall wait like a loyalist for you to come back with the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would be pretty pissed off lol Ochoko, kind just like what Sesshoumaru wants Kagura to be...
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really what is up Sesshoumaru's ass? ("Why is the cable on the microphone so long? So its easily retrievable after I've shoved it up your ass!"-Prisilla Queen of the Desert (Australian (Gay(two words... Drag Queens...) comedy movie...)
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!!!!. plz update soon. i like the fact that they faught on they first met.hopfully the next chapter is steamy, exciting,and flat out exhilerating
|
Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
good chapter!!
|
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ] |
