| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!! Great chapter... But really sad to see it go... Will continue to be a dedicated reader though!!!! Good luck to you on you other fan fictions!!! Congratulations on keeping your story interesting threw out the entire story!!!! (I knew that you could do it, but some people (sad) start off very well and start to tumble down...)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 13:19 CDT
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amazing story...you did it really well and even though i am sad that it ended i loved every minute of reading it...I look forward to all your other works so keep it up XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... nice ending... really liked it... the children are all so cute... and kagura & kagome finally got their restaurant... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aweeeee... I can't believe it's over...It was soo good!! I applaud you.. I loved every chapter!!! Awesome work.. I've been reading your other story..Special Delivery... soo good! Can't wait to read more of your work:D
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 23:52 CDT
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Yay, marriage! She actually agreed! Wow. Now I;m excited for the Epilogue. Will you show any of Kagu/Sess or Inu/Kag wedding scenes? I want wedding scenes!!! Haha! (OMG, I'm losing it) Please update when you can!
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: April 23, 2009 22:51 CDT
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*clap clap* Bravo once again another amazing chapter...but we are already on the epilogue!!!! OMG i am gonna miss this story soooooo much...but its been well worth it so i cant wait to see what you do for it update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You still have "the birth", "the Kagome/Inuyasha wedding", and "the Sessy/Kagura Wedding" to do.... if you want!!!! This Claire doesn't want things to end so SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will you write another story after this one??? or concentrate on 'Special delivery'??? Fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sesshoumaru did propose to kagura... guess like inuyasha & kagome they won't be themselves if they didn't argue also before kagura said yes to sesshoumaru... and rin is still cute... looking forward to the epilogue... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagura & sesshoumaru are back together again... they can be a sweet couple sometimes... although kagura was kinda double checking on the lipstick and perfume issue... seems that the family dinner went well... it's good seeing them all gather together... rin still with her cuteness... but looks like sesshoumaru's talk with his father got him thinking... will he do something?... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 01:04 CDT
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Yeah, what is up with Sesshy?? The proposing issue? Hmm... Anyway, Inuyasha is one dag that's hard to control, eh? XD And I love Sesshy's line: "When Sesshy Jr will see his baby pictures and curses the both of us, I will tell him you were to blame." HE SAID SESSHY JR!!! LOL. Aww, no title given for next time... No speculations whatsoever. *OH YEAH??* still have to wait... T-T See ya next update! :]
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic Chapter!!! I don't think she should be eating ice cream as I know Cheese, while not cooked is a big NO NO! for pregnant women (looking up and they say no to soft serve ice cream as it puts you and your baby at risk of a listeria infection which can be harmful. and another link puts these # Any unpasteurised milk or foods made from unpasteurised milk # Soft serve ice-creams as high risks of listeria) but normal ice cream is fine along as it has no egg 'Mayonnaise, ice cream, salad dressing - as long as they haven't been made using raw egg. Generally, mayonnaise, ice cream and salad dressing you buy in shops will have been made with pasteurised egg, which means it's safe to eat. But it's better to avoid home-made versions if they contain raw egg. If you're not sure about any of these foods when you're eating out, ask staff for more information' I REALLY went too much into this didn't I??? thanks to: http://www.mumzone.com.au/forum/viewtopic.php?p=2303 http://www.eatwell.gov.uk/agesandstages/pregnancy/whenyrpregnant/ http://www.health.vic.gov.au/ideas/diseases/listeria_facts
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 22:30 CDT
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yay for ice cream...makes me want some now...lovely chapter once again...but whe you mentioned kaugra getting hot at one point i was like 'oh crap' is she going to faint or something like that happen then...but I am glad it didnt and i am happy that shei s trusting sesshoumaru more...yay yay..cant wait for another good chapter so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aweee I loved this chapter soo sweet. I'm loving your story..and I can't wait to read more.. Keep up the amazing work woot woot:D:D
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter it was cute. I'm glad that Kagura is moving in with them. This way she will be giving the baby the one thing she didn't have growing up and thats a real family complete with both parents. I know that the way that Kagura thinks she will not think about marrying Sesshoumaru just yet as she would want to get use to the fact that she will be living with him. Hopefully after Inuyasha and Kagome's wedding she will at least within herself she will start to think about it.
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 22:35 CDT
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The question "Will they be a happy family?" still hangs. What't the I don't know of Sesshy for? If Kagura will marry him? Hm... something to ponder on. Rin is the best! She asks the cutest questions, is very observant, and thinks of the funniest things. Sesshy's reaction was priceless! XD "Can I call Jaken horny?" LOL but Sesshy really is a horn dog, huh? XD *i can't believe I'm saying these things* O_O waiting for the next update... Cheers!
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