| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great and happy chapter!!!! (I thought I reviewed you last time... I was actual a bit sad and surprised not to see my name....(or username as it is...) wind demon, puppy, wind demon, puppy... I'm not sure who won this time...
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that was a great chapter im glad they finally were able to get that in the open lol hopefully they will have a wonderful day in Paris I would love to go to Paris that sounds like so much fun :D well cant wait for the next chapter :D keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 19, 2008 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dang. A cold shower? I'd be mad if I were Kagura too. The thought never crossed Sessh's mind that the guys were gay, typical... I've never seen a guy detect a gay guy unless they were hitting on them. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 15:03 CST
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awsome tha was splendent, hey could you make kagura a virgin?
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 00:29 CST
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Man a Sesshy stepped over the line a little bit didn't he :(. Why dont they just realize they have feelings for each other hopefully Kagura doesn't go home and leave Sesshomaru that would be sad. Keep up the great work :D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... looks like the situation was blown out of proportion... and sesshoumaru & kagura's emotions were shot... lots of drama... will kagura go through with her decision... what will sesshoumaru do... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 20:26 CST
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nooooooo...dont go kagura...gosh somuch drama and they cant even figureout they love each other...i cant wait for another chapter so update when u can XD
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo sorry I havent reviewed in such a long time! But I was really busy with stuff. Anyways got caught up to speed and I cant wait for the next chapter! I have loved the story so far! I hope Sesshy doesnt get to mad at Kagura! lol anyways keep up the great work!! :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell waiting for the next class to start...) On: November 13, 2008 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What DOES he expect when you bring a girl to PARIS to do???? shop shop shop!!! (or drink and eat) I wounder how the guy is going to take it when he find out that "mans" sexuality... And REALLY what do yyou expect her to do sit at home like a puppy?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura is having fun... but looks like she forgot to leave sesshoumaru a note... things are gonna get a little rocky for the couple i think... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 15:50 CST
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oh boy boh boy...shame on kagura for not leaving a note...bad judgment on her part...but i cant wait for jakotsu and bankotsu to meet sesshy that should be interesting
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 10, 2008 18:18 CST
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Can't wait for the next chapter! 40 chapters huh? Great! I like a nice lengthy story to read. The other chapter when they ran into Naraku was good too. Lemons??
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... wonder what will happen in paris... the person kagura called must be jakotsu?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: bk On: November 09, 2008 08:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might be sick with the flu but it hasn't stopped you from writing another fantastic chapter. Your story just keeps getting better and better. This story is like getting a 2 for 1 deal as we are also getting a Kagome & Inuyasha pairing at the same time. Thanks for the wonderful story and I hope you start feeling better soon. Keep up the good work. I will be watching for your updates in the furture.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what Kagura normal calls this person.. and what will Sesshoumaru think... CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!
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