| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 23:59 CST
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Yay i get a cookie XD wonderful chapter as always...i am always looking forward to it...plus it should be interesting to hear why sesshy wanted a baby so bad...hmmmm...nope cant think of anything but i am anxious for the next chapter...XD yay
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagura is pregnant... so what will happen before and after friday... how will sesshoumaru take the news... hope kagura tells seeshoumaru the truth though... things are getting interesting... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it came out wrong. I meant that he knew some poeple that knew of her and they might be in the area and would have told him about the sneaky dragon. But now onto the new thing going on. Please tell me that she is pg so that Sess, Inu and Tai(?) can beat the living tart out of tal dark and scaly. I'm going through somethings in my personal life and this way I can relieve some frustration with out going to jail. Still can Kagura beat Touran just for the heck of it??? Please?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome are engaged... seems that inuyasha smelled something or someone on kagura... but what was he gonna say... also looks like kagura is showing signs of being pregnant - is she though?... what will she do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 00:02 CST
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Muahahaha! I win! I predicted this the chapter after Paris! I got so excited when Inuyasha sniffed her because that totally confirmed my suspicions. Squeee! Mini Sesshoumarus! :D Wait a minute. . . *gasp* Here's the story's conflict! Noes! Sess is gonna find out, and he won't react well, and Kagura will get mad, and then she'll think about the original agreement, and then she'll question the validity of their relationship, and then they'll have a huge fight, and then you'll get angry reviews! *cry*
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 18:36 CST
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OMG OMG OMG no fair...you so have to update...like right now XD I hope she is though XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great Chapter!!!! (Today I had a car accident (I side into the gutter on my way to work (dry, dry, dry, then light rain today in the morning so sticky road...) when trying to turn (the only damage is to the pushed the wheel into the guard) SO it is SO nice to come home (after work) to have this...) SOME VERY GREAT lines too!!! "Do not be mistaken I will do much more than merely touching you" He said with a dark chuckle before extending his hand in her direction, aiming for her neck. But what Shishinki was not expecting was for Kagura to whip her fan open in front of her. The wind sorceress was grateful to have tucked her fan in her belt. One of the major self defense advices her brother had given her `if you go out by yourself, better have your fan close by'. "Have you ever been ripped to shreds by a `Dance of blades' coming from a wind demoness? I can assure you it's pretty painful, especially if she is as pissed as I am right now!" Kagura said looking straight into Shishinki's eyes. She started making faint movements with her fan, making the winds swell around her in a protective manner. The winds she called forth also started slowly pushing back Ryukotsusei. "You wouldn't dare touch me! I would have my lawyers rip you to shreds" The dragon said confidently, even if he did pull away his clawed hand. Even if his facial expression did not show it, the dragon demon was amazed by the force of the winds pushing him backwards. Who knew wind could provide such resistance? "Is that so? Looks like you don't know me very well. I'll just say it was self defense." Kagura said smirking, as she twitched her fan, whispering a quick "Fujin no mai". (GO GIRL!!!!!!) "In these hard economic times I wonder what a newspaper would do with a piece of information such as `Young art teacher pressing 111charges against CEO of Ryu bank for assault, and asks for a restraining order because he is a fucking creepy stalker!'" Kagura hissed at him, positioning her fan for another attack. "Eww gross you guys, I told you before I don't want to know what you do behind closed doors. Why does everyone insist on letting me know about their sex life anyway?!" Kagura said shaking her head in disgust as she walked towards Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 21:44 CST
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Awesome chapter and im glad Kagura got the message clear to that dragon. He is a jerk! Sesshomaru would definitly hunt him down and would show no mercy. But oh my goodness I hope Kagome says yes thats my favorite couple next to Sesshy and Kagura. Keep up all that great work!!! P.s. I hope you are having a good new year so far! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 17:19 CST
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Lizard Man is lucky he got off with such a light warning. At least Kagura got to say, "Fujin no mai," though I miss the "bitch." "Bitch" makes everything better. Oh, well. Bakayasha is about to propose! :D And Kagura forgot something important? Does it have anything to do with my 1337 foreshadowing skills? ;)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagura was able to fend off that ryu guy... but not sure if it was a good idea not to tell anyone of what happened though... at least she still went to the party... hope things work out for inuyasha's proposal & kagome's reaction/answer... the incident happened at the apartment so being demons / half-demons they can still smell the scent of the person who was there or maybe his blood also... so kagura's secret fight will be found out... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No dragon steaks, Dang it!!! I was really hoping that somebody would end his existence. Maybe there was a spy around so to speak to make sure that the girls were ok. Mainly looking out for Kagura, but Kagome is benefitting from it also. I just need Sess to come back in the picture. He's been gone for a little too long for me. People like Ryu get in the middle of things thinking that they have the right to do so. And what about the cat demoness? I want to see Kagura beat the snot out of her.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 22:11 CST
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OMG she better say yes or I am gonna hit her upside the head..but knowing those two i am sure that it will be ok...right? Thanks for the update...short but good XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL chapter... I had to go to work halfway threw this (sad) but am currently reading this at nearly 3 in the morning... (which is why I don't have so many favourite lines for this new chapter.... I just wanted to finish it...) "Wow! Was that a compliment? Does that mean I'm forgiven, or will I get punished?" She asked him in amusement, glad to see he had forgiven her. (what no kinky punishment???lol oh no I was proven wrong... he IS a Kinky )
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 17:00 CST
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What's this? You dare defy the set path of the Inuyasha romance? *gasp* Although, it will be an interesting change to the formula to which I am accustomed. When Ryukossei first popped up on Kagura's doorstep, I thought, "Keh. Where are Yura and Byakuya when you need them?" After that last paragraph, though, I'm definitely wishing they'd show up. That, or Kagura remembered to pack her fan in her purse for the party. Fujin no mai, bitch!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He just needs a good old fashioned beat down. First when a woman says no thats what she means. And second of all people he just had to mess with Sess's girl. Can you say BARBEQUED DRANGON STEAKS???
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