| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 10:09 CDT
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Rin is so cute! "What does horny mean?", priceless! And asking if she can call Jaken horny! Wahaha, I loved that line! * Anyway, yey, Kagura is moving in with them! I'd have to go with Rin's question... will she be Sess' wife? ^_^ * Looking forward to your next update. I wanted to leave a longer review, but I gotta run, darn it. Cute chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that kagome & yura talked to kagura... nice that kagura spent the day with sesshoumaru & rin... liked the interactions between rin & kagura - really cute... seems that kagura will be moving in with sesshoumaru & rin now... they make a nice family... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Squeal!!!!1 loved the horny part!!!! oh god Rin... I cant wait to see how InuYasha takes it!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 20:45 CDT
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oh boy...i agree...poor sessy had to deal with shopping...but man he would look so hot trying stuff on. Cant wait for the next chapter as usual...this one was nice and sweet XD
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it soooo sorry again for not reviewing :P I have been soooo busy :S. But I loved the new chapters I read :D. I bet Rin Is going to freak seeing Kaguras big belly haha and I think she should move in with him I know I would haha jk anyways ya I think that would be awesome for her and the baby :D keep up all the great work
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a question. Is it safe to do it while the woman is pregnant? *just thinking, since I've encountered those before but never tried to find the answer* I think moving in is a good thing for the both of them. [although, I still think they would lie on Sesshy's carpet then.] Erm.. perfect family? well, i think so too. Kagome and Yura want the juice eh? hahaha! nice new chappie [ooh! lemony...] and waiting for the next one. cheers! :]
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 15:50 CDT
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Well I would think that she would just at a chance to move in with him. One she would get a chance to see him everyday and like he said she would be settled in before the baby was born. Two I don't see her living in that small apartment with Sess, Rin and the baby. And last I don't see Sess wanting to spend his time drive between both home just so that he could spend time with his family and keep them all safe at the same time. I can't wait to see what the girls will say to Kagura now tha t she is back with Sesshoumaru. I would think that they would be happy that she's not going to raise the baby by herself. But I guess that will see.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 02:01 CDT
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that was a nice chapter...short and sweet...and I am glad that things are working out for them but I wonder what other drama u have in store...cant wait for next week thanks a bunch
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I might be... I've never been pregnant (only 21 years old..), and so far none of my friends (my high school ones at least) are not pregnant as far as I know... so no comparison... other than people who are MUCH older than me or only recently made friends with. (her daughter is so CUTE!!!!)( the poor fish us getting cased by the males and you just want to yell at them to leave her alone...poor thing) GREAT chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 23:20 CDT
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Oooh, terrific lemon. Gotta admit, that was the first lemon I've read where the girl was pregnant, and I had been interested to see how it would go. I'm such a perve. :D * I happen to think that Kagura was right in hesitating to move in with Sess at the moment. It IS a big step, and they just got back together, it would seem rushed. * I'd like to see what kind of "third degree" Kagome and possibly even Yura could have in store for Kagura. If I were them, I'd be all "ooh, girl, DETAILS!!!!". And I've finally figured out how to turn that pairing in that fic of mine around. I dunno if many people would like me after I do that, though. :D Wish me luck!? * Looking forward to "His Girls"!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that sesshoumaru & kagura are together again... seems that sesshoumaru is thinking ahead for their relationship... what will kagura decide... what will kagome & yura say?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now thats what I'm talking about. I'm so glad that are working things out and I know that this is not the end just yet. With Ryu still on the rampage and seeking revenge on Sess, Kagome and Inuyasha wedding still in the making, the baby being born and you have yet to say anything about Naraku really in a while there are a lot of loose ends left to tie up. And what about the girls' dream for teir own restuarant?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that sesshoumaru explained to kagura mostly everything... glad that kagura finally gave in to her feelings as well... very sweet that sesshoumaru & kagura are together again... hope they stay that way... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 03:07 CDT
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Yey! lemon in the next chap~~ LOL. I am now totally into Sess/Kagura fics, thanks to you. :] I love Kagura's confession... It was totally natural and corny, but definitely true. Thank God, they finally got past their differences and faults and decided to go on with their relationship. wee! Go Sesshy and Kagura! [You''re welcome, by the way, and you deserve it.] Cheers! ^^,
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed so hard when Kagura called Sess an "insufferable control freak and an annoying jerk". And yeah, you have totally converted me. Now I'm wondering how to turn one of my old-and-yet-to-be-finished fics into an Inu/Kag with Sess/Kagu. It used to be a Inu/Kag with Sess/Rin, but now I'm starting to think it's just wrong! * Anyway, great chapter. At least some of the things about the entire will thing have been cleared up, and the two of them finally spoke! And he said "I love you" to Kagura! Yey for love, haha. * I'm looking forward to the Western Mansion thingy. I hope Sess has cute kiddy pics there, hehe. Update soon, please! ^_^
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