| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that time past and kagura is back and showing... good that kagome and the others are supporting kagura emotionally... looks like even inuyasha is trying to talk some sense into sesshoumaru... hope sesshoumaru & kagura at least settle something... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 22:46 CST
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I hate the fact that they have to suffer so much. From Naraku to Ryuu to Touran they have been through so much to say that Paris was the high light. Of course something wonderful came from that but just think about all the time they have missed out on. She could have been pampered with all of the chocolate they she could ever wanted and spend as much with Sess as she wanted. You so he could make-up for being gone so long.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 21:36 CST
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awwwww man I gotta wait another chapter...well then you gotta update soon...I got confused in one part when sesshy said he went to the doctors appointment about the baby...who???? I will smack him again if he knocked someone else up...well i will wait for the next chapter then...XD it was a great read as usual
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHH NOOO!! this is not good! I cant belive it! I hate touran she stinks!! I cant belive it I really hope they get back together. This is insane wow I really want to keep reading lol but loved the new chapter I just cant belive she actually left. I hope she knows what she is doing :P well anyways keep up all that great work cant wait to read the next chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 18:18 CST
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Sad face! :( Sesshoumaru isn't supposed to give up! Curse you and your unanticipated plot twists! The story is now fully at your mercy; I have no idea how you're gonna put them back together. I just know that it had better be soon. Oh, no, I'm going into Sess/Kagu fluff already. Don't leave me like this! I can't do this cold turkey!! D,:
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome should have just kept out of it she's only making matters worse. I know that friends are there to try to make you feel better, but when they don't even know the whole situation and they're in a happy relatioship they should just butt out. And things are not exactly good between the brothers and what Kagome is doing is putting Inuyasha in the middle of a mess that she herself should not be in. Kagome knows that Kagura is pg and should not be under too much stress. The best thing would have been to talk to Inuyasha's mother and not girlfriends. I just hope that Sess finds her in time before she does something stupid. Why should the children suffer for some one else's stupidity?
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 22:49 CST
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*slaps sesshy* he needs a little wake up call to his emotions...but he will get there eventually XD cant wait for the next chapter though since you leave off at the most cliffy times so update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sesshoumaru knows what touran did... and the necklace was for kagura... kinda sad that they'd split because of doubt and misunderstandings... both are so stubborn that's why... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 00:55 CST
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By "suggested," I meant predict. I was in no way attempting to dictate the plot of your story. I'm just a passenger along for the ride who happens to be typing at the computer three hours past her bedtime.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for Sesshoumaru to open up a can of whoop-ass on that Super Secretarial Slut. No one screws with Fluff Daddy's love life. >: D I still wonder what Sesshou meant by "pretending." Normally, I am completely, 100% positive that the accused lover is guiltless, but, in the dead-pan daimyo's case, I'm not so sure. What did the whole document on his desk say?! I can't wait until the next chapter. Hopefully, we get another glimpse into Sesshoumaru's mind. . . . One quick thought. Would I be too off base if I suggested that you have a Cassablanca-esque climax scene? You know, Kagura about to get on the plane, Sesshou there waiting for her, etc. Oh, well. 'Til next you write!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 00:10 CST
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awsome and you're still killing me with the suspense but i'm loving every minute of it. keep up the good work. and if you don't kill Touran i will. that b.i.t.c.h is on a oneway ticket to H.E.L.L!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't let her leave now that Sess is about to find out just what happened while he was gone. Think that she should at least give him a chance to defend himself. I just hope that something goes wrong on Kagura's end that she won't be able to leave until Sess has a chance to see her. Maybe some way some how they run into each other and she is forced to listen to him. That way she will have a chance to explain what she said.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I am back! loved the new chapters! but hate the cliff hanger you put in the last one!! I hope you update soon. Sesshy better not believe her I cant believe she is trying to separate them :( They are such a cute couple and Kagura had such good new too :( I hope it turns out well in the end. Keep up the great work! :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so the real question is did she plant the letter or is the old man as miss informed about what's going on as Britney Spears is with her sister ("my Sisters not pregnant"... when they just publicly announced that she is... must of missed the memo... or cant read... poor thing...)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... it seems that the damage has been done... glad that kagura spoke with kagome & yura though... will kagura go with her decision to leave?... looks like sesshoumaru had a busy day on that friday... and he came back just when kagura left... so touran did have a plan but sesshoumaru might be on to her now... he saw the necklace she's wearing - intriguing? what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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