| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 20:16 CST
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aw man he should just slap her and maybe knock some sense into her head...when you f*** with people you only get f****** in the end...I cant wait for the next chapter XD hopefully they will sort this issue out
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 17:39 CST
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On my last review, MM.org wouldn't let me type the "is not equal to" sign, you know, the equals sign with a slash through it? So, yeah, dog plus cat does not equal love.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 17:37 CST
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Every time I predict a chain of events, you take it the other way! I'm starting to wonder if you're doing that on purpose. In the heat of Touran's bitchfest, I started imagining how the situation would play out if Feudal Kagura and Feudal Touran were having this discussion. The end result was not pretty; for panther-demon fans, that is. And with Dance of the Dead, Kagura can keep smackin' the bitch far after she's dead and still derive satisfaction from it. I know I certainly would. :D It's a bit surprising that Kagura even believed Super Secretarial Slut. I mean, her title is Super Secretarial Slut, for heaven's sake! You'd think that with all the messages she has "forgotten" to deliver and her obvious willingness to stoop to astoundingly low levels to achieve her aspirations, people would figure out not to trust her. Besides, Sesshoumaru sleeping with her? Puh-leeeeze! Dog + cat ' love
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be really interesting to find out what Sesshy boy thinks... great chapter!!! at least with the right answer now he could possibly get away with no damage...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things now have turned for the worse... kinda sad really... by chance would sesshoumaru's office building have cameras for surveillance - just incase he might want to know what happened... was touran speaking the truth or just her plot to get rid of kagura?... what will sesshoumaru do when he finds out - will he know the truth or the false story... so many questions now and possibilities?... hope kagura talks to kagome or someone though... what will kagura do now... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I have figured it out. She played both of them. I think that Sess bought that necklace for her in Paris and told Touran to have it gift wrapped as a surprise for Kagura, but she took it for herself. Most likely some of her story is true, but the fact that Kagura doesn't know that much about him or his family history and what happened in her last relationship its helping matters at all. She should have been able to smell the panther on Sess whenever they were together if it had been true. But what she doesn't know is that Kagura IS pg and she has already won the war its just those little battles thats getiing to her.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 18:32 CST
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OMG OMG OMG...I wanna beat the crap out of Touran...At the end there I was waiting for her to put the necklace back in its case or something since I bet that would be something she would do...man I cant wait to hear Sesshys side since he needs to have a good story to make her take him back...I cant wait for the next chapter so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 12:23 CST
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*whistle* Kagura really dodged a bullet with Naraku, all right. It is kinda sad that Kanna had to take it, though, because Kagura would have attempted to lop of his head and then stormed out before grabbing a lawyer instead of just enduring it. Man, I can't wait for Byakuya to find out about Kanna's predicament. He'll be all, "Kachow!" and Naraku will be all, "Aaagh! My spleen!" Speaking of finding out, Sesshy is gonna find out soon, no? Actually, after she read that extremely short passage of a long and complicated document, I'm kinda wondering if she will tell him at all. Perhaps drop some scathing hints about the incriminating letter, call him a few bad words, and leave in a pregnancy-hormone-driven huff? Than again, you have a way of acheiving my desired result through different means, so, who can say?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because you have set them up with 3 different adversaries. Before you can have an ever after you must get rid of them. And then theres the fact that the proposal is still on the table. Just because the two of them may have put it aside doesn't mean that everyone else involved has. I knew it would take a little time before Naraku would start to beat on her. She was not the one that he wanted in the first place. As she can see from the fact that he has been cheating on her from the beginning. Didn't she know that once a cheat always a cheat. I don't want to say that hse got what she deserved as far as him beating on her, but the cheating yes. I think that it was Touran that can in. You know just to make things a little juicy. This way we can get rid of her if Sess was to come in and hear what she might say to Kagura.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the furies.... no that's just Kagura... lol... I just thought about that after I posted...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess that dear Sesshy is soon to be introduced to Kagura's wind techniques, with added pregnant frustration and hormones... poor boy... great chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagura & kagome were having some girl-bonding especially with kagura being emotional... good that kagura is helping her sister kanna also... what was the paper kagura read about?... so it's friday already in the end... hope kagura tells sesshoumaru... wonder what reactions will occur... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 22:56 CST
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she should have read the whole thing...thats what happens when u dont get all your facts...but doing it like this makes it more interesting...so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now that Kagura is pg, Sess is coming home, Inu and Kag's engaged and Yura(?) is getting a baby as they say what else could go wrong? Can't wait to see what will happen to our four happy couples. I suspect that now that all of the players are toghether that this is the meat of the fic.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.... I cant believe I missed the chapter on the 7th!! Good for me anyway because I would have been so totally wondering what you were going to do... and that would have been AWFUL!!!!! that was a great cliff-hanger!!! (I'm fine by the way, I've just been offered a lot of work at the moment, which is good and going to pay off the car insurance and other things that are popping up right that the moment (mobile, reg(istration), insurance is due, then after that will be hell fees (school (University) the Chronicles of Lucius Malfoy I totally love how he calls the school hell...) and books for hell, and stationary for hell, and perhaps even getting a toll pass so I can get to hell if it is easier to drive... that depend on if I don't get another offer ( 3 more rounds and the first one was an early offer as well, but not the best choice of location... (Location, location, location) due to hell not being near a train station... though it is possible to catch the tram (after going into the city by train...) which would be much cheaper and less busy (traffic.... (is ****** on the two major way you can get there.... although the toll way is quicker or so I have heard...) Squeal! GREAT chapter!!!!!!!!1
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