| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that it seems that sesshoumaru & kagura have at least opened up to each other... but looks like kagura is in trouble ryu showed up again... what is he going to do?... will kagura be able to fight him off or someone will come along... update when you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii On: December 31, 2008 00:28 CST
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OMG...you so have to update this...like tomorrow...please dont leave me hanging for too long O~O i exspect some intense stuff to come up but I cant wait to see what you have planned for it...and yay for being the 100th reviewer makes me feel special XD
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness!! I cant believe you ended it like that!! :O! I hope Kagura kicks he ass or at least gets help. Oh no what is going to happen! thanks now im going to be in suspense until you update! haha. Anyways happy New Year (in advanced :D ) and keep up all that great work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna On: December 30, 2008 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful, what would i expect from an excellent author, hey did kagura ever use birth control with sessh
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Title: Liesie, too lazy to login
Reviewed By: LazyLiesie On: December 27, 2008 11:12 CST
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"Where are you and what have you been doing?" The heck? Either he knows something is up, or he's just being particularly abrasive and chauvenistic. What do you mean, tell him? Haven't you read a romance before? She neglects to tell him, everything goes kinda smooth, he finds out, everything gets shot to hell, the rival returns, and somewhere in the mix, he finds out about my "foreshadowing abilities." *insert evil cackle here*
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 23:15 CST
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oh boy sooooo busted...that was a nice chapter though and as usual i acnt wait for the next chapter...but no asumptions from me this time XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kagura instead of punching holes in her walls, or shredding down things with her wind blades settled for enjoying a pint of chocolate fudge ice cream. (I could SO be doing that right now.... Ice creammm......... Very warm here at the moment) "Did you really come here to criticize my eating habits?" Kagura asked taking a huge spoonful of ice cream just to spite the inu hanyou. "My mom gave me her engagement ring the day after we all went to the Opera. She said that Kagome deserved it. Funny, that she would say that after meeting her once, whereas she saw Kikyou like a thousand times but never gave me her ring". "Well, Kags has a way of sucking people in and make them like her. Now let's see this ring, it better be worth it" Kagura said feigning a threatening tone. "Keh! So will my brother the pompous bastard grace us with his presence at the party tonight?" His behavior with you goes against everything he believes in, which I found hilarious…that hypocritical bastard". `I guess Inuyasha's right, I just wanted Sessh to be here, but I guess it can't be helped. Gods since when am I so clingy? I am an independent and fierce demoness. I don't need a man by my side!' `Maybe you want someone by your side because it's almost the day' her inner demon suggested. `I doubt that me being a pathetic girlfriend has anything to do with the one year anniversary of Grandma Kaede's death. Time sure flies, it will already be a year.' (oh poor thing) "I think you are mistaken" The dragon paused to gulp down some champagne "The sex part is only optional, I would of course make it worth while, but I would never force myself on a lady as delightful as you. No my proposition is purely on a business level, at least for now…. We are friends are we not Kagura? And friends help each other. I would be glad to lend you money for your little restaurant and in exchange I am sure you can think of something to repay me." (Do ANY of the bankers in this story want to keep thier balls??????) Mistaking her silence for compliance, the handsome demon added "You see, I know you have access to Sesshomarou's home office. You are very lucky, after all only a few people can roam freely in Sesshomarou's house. He is not a very trusting person and hides at his house a very interesting file that I would just love to put my fingers on and Kagura, as my dear friend to whom I have made a favor I am sure you could help me out and…" Shishinki started but was interrupted by Kagura.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is serious about kagome... nice that he will be proposing to her... seems that kagura's meeting went sour... so ryu did want to use kagura against sesshoumaru... what will kagura tell sesshoumaru... hope she tells him the truth though... update when you can... please and thank you... Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 16:49 CST
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Sorry i didn't write a review for the last chapter I must have gotten side tracked and forgot :S. But Great Chapter I liked it. I'm glad Kagura didn't listen to Ryukotsusei he is a real jerk! Hopefully Sesshomaru will be understanding if he finds out! well keep up the great work!!! Happy Holidays! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
much better thank you!!!!!!!! Was very bored though while I had nothing to do... GREAT Chapter.... Sesshy has to really silly to not realise that BAD things are ahead if he plans to not spend any time with Kagura... (was this just me or was this chapter a little shorter than the others?????) Best lines: "Oh, right I forgot to tell you after I got back I almost walked in on Kagome and her boyfriend `getting some' as you said. Needless to say I am scarred for life" Kagura said with an evil chuckle. "During the weekend? Wouldn't you rather we meet at you office on a weekday? Or even better that I meet with one of your subordinates or whatever?" Kagura asked with a frown. She could not tell why, but Shishinki's reassuring smile did not comfort her at all. "So romantic, but I'm still pissed you were so very close to Sesshomarou and did not bring me back a lock of his silver hair!" Yura exclaimed "Byakuya's sexy red eyes and luscious black hair" "I don't know, all of a sudden I just felt disgusted by it, like almost nauseous. Maybe it's not fresh, I bet you it's more than a day old. Fucking pastry swindlers! Damn, I should have stuck to my usual chocolate croissant! Or maybe I just feel nervous because of my interview with Ryukotsusei next week" (OR some thing else???? did they use protection????)
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 19:36 CST
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Well, great as always. That's great about Yura and Byakuya, I feel for her and I'm glad she's adopting. Kagura better watch out about Ryussosui(yeah I know I spelled it wrong). Reading the pastry thing I don't think Kagura's pregnant because it's too soon to tell, but is it foreshadowing of her future meeting of Ryussosayi.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 23:39 CST
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oh i bet sesshy knows about the ryu thing...i hope it goes okay but I cant wait to find out...and I am just going on a limb here based on her not wanting to eat the dessert...but i wonder if she is pregnant...i hope so XD anyway i cant wait for the next chapter so update soon XP
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 18:29 CST
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I just had a hideous blonde moment. I meant to type "discovers" instead of "discover's". *shuddder* It burns my fingers to merely write it. In case you haven't surmised as much already, I am a punctuation Nazi. Which reminds me: there are supposed to be commas or periods inside the quotation marks, like, "Your fic makes my night," or "I'm so happy for Yura and Byakuya."
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 18:25 CST
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"Fucking pastry swindlers!" XD I don't know if I'm good at detecting foreshadowing or if I'm just imagining it this time, but I do believe Byakuya isn't the only expectant father in this story. This comes at the perfect dramatic time, what with the tension already brewing between the love birds and the maelstrom sure to occur when Sesshoumaru discover's Kagura's rendezvous with Ryukossei. I can hardly wait. >: ]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that ryu guy has some hidden agenda approaching kagura?... then what's up with kagura when she was with yura & kagome commenting on her scone?... and in the end kagura & sesshoumaru's talk seemed so cold... lots of intrigue in this chapter... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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