| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 16:13 CST
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Old love nver dies????? uhoh but i still cant wait XD so update soon cause its soooooooo good
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the opera date went ok despite the confrontation... so sesshoumaru invited kagura with him on his paris trip... wonder if what kagome thought is gonna be true... looks like the proposal will end in paris but what will happen... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 22:20 CST
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poo...wanted the marry word in there...but i guess we've got time...XD...should be interesting being with him alone for a week..heaven knowns I wouldnt mind update soon cause i need dome more lemony goodness ohhh mile high club?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!!! (as always) I'm not sure If I would tell him to "come help" or to tell him to wait... If it was Miroku I'd tell him to wait cause all he would pack would be underwear... lol... I doubt that Sesshoumaru would do that though...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kinda cute how inuyasha & kagome act... seems that kagura got a blast from her past... she seemed to handle herself well before sesshoumaru came... nice confrontation... looks like sesshoumaru is trying to tell kagura something in the end of the chapter - what will it be... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Looks like I'm not the only in the running for the next Academy award" And "Kagura," Sesshomarou asked "Will you…" great lines and great cliff hanger... although that COULD be some thing totally innocent...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 18:00 CDT
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AHHHHHhhhhhh...dont end there...although knowing sesshy it probably wont be the words that I am thinking but who knows...i hope they really do get together...a good jusicy lemon just for them...but i wonder what naruku is going to do cause as usual no one can be happy without him...dun dun DUN cant wait for the next chapter so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: October 29, 2008 12:14 CDT
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Close protection, that one sounds real good. Anyway, your story is freaking awesome. I'm glad Rin's there too, I wonder who the mystery demon woman is and definately can't wait for more AU, but IC drama!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 23:42 CDT
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Wow...that was awesome...i am super picky about the inuyasha fics I read but I am glad that I came across yours...there is no OOC and i do like that you kept Rin in there...i think it added to Sesshoumaru's charm and we got to see his inner feelings...but I cant wait for the next chapter so update soon ok XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagura told kagome & yura that she's falling for sesshoumaru... but someone overheard - spells trouble... what'll happen at the opera... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY CUTE!!!!! I guess It sucks to be Kagura... she has dated some pretty bad boys... I like her brother though...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At lest you know she eats well (I've been told by Italian friends that traditionally, they give you so much food that you think you are going to be sick.. and they think you are not eating enough) AND she isn't afraid of putting on weight (chocolate cake) the only problem is... his kinda being read *****, at lest his conscious is giving him a hard time...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura & sesshoumaru are getting more personal... what about the proposal... what will they do about the feelings they are starting to realize?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura and sesshoumaru are getting closer... but both are in denial of what they're feeling... hope things turn out good at the dinner... what will happen after though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... DRAT! Story IDEAS!!!! I want to read them!!! (both will make great stories...) If I had to pick I would pick.... Winds of change to be done first...
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story it keeps drawing me in with each chapter Bre'Auna Kemp
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at least you have some one that you know that would be able to help you out... I bet the car just drains petrol though... great chapter... Even Sesshy-boy is doubting if this is a good idea..
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sesshoumaru's emergency was about rin... cute little girl... so kagura knows about rin now... what will happen with inuyasha & kagome's date... what does sesshoumaru have in store for kagura now?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 15, 2008 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. This story keeps getting better with each chapter. I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin is AWWW!!!!! I bet they will get along well!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... at least they had some fun at the fair... nice that inuyasha & kagome are seemed to get along... and kagura & sesshoumaru seemed to have a sweet moment also... i think sesshoumaru's emergency might have been about rin?... wonder what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter... she is a sneaky one that Kagura..
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 09, 2008 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura is slowly discovering that sesshoumaru has lots of skeletons in his closet... and kagura is caught in the middle... it's only just beginning... wonder what else she'll find out... and what about kagome & inuyasha - arguing already... what's in-store for them... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh If I was Kagura I'd ask him to win me a prize... by playing to most difficult game for him... (If it was for InuYasha some thing that required delicate concentration lol.. )
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they really don't like each other... at least Sesshoumaru is looking for motherly instincts as well... it could be very good for the child... instead of being raised by a whore...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that this party will be full of surprises... will be lots of action and/or drama?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what the other guests will think of his "date"...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura & sesshoumaru were enjoying themselves and getting along... until their arrangement was brought up... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't let him name the children either... they'd be named blade or fang (in Japanese of course) or some thing similar... (or Porcupiney, Rabbitty, Squirrelly, Beary, Mousey, Racoony, Beavery, Skunky, Foxy, Deery, Woodpeckery, Chickadee-y or any of the other cute, yet pure evil creations of Cartman, from South Park...) which would be very funny as Sessy has captured the hearts of many girls, yet is not the best personality wise...
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