| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story it keeps drawing me in with each chapter Bre'Auna Kemp
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at least you have some one that you know that would be able to help you out... I bet the car just drains petrol though... great chapter... Even Sesshy-boy is doubting if this is a good idea..
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... so sesshoumaru's emergency was about rin... cute little girl... so kagura knows about rin now... what will happen with inuyasha & kagome's date... what does sesshoumaru have in store for kagura now?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 15, 2008 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. This story keeps getting better with each chapter. I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin is AWWW!!!!! I bet they will get along well!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... at least they had some fun at the fair... nice that inuyasha & kagome are seemed to get along... and kagura & sesshoumaru seemed to have a sweet moment also... i think sesshoumaru's emergency might have been about rin?... wonder what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter... she is a sneaky one that Kagura..
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 09, 2008 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura is slowly discovering that sesshoumaru has lots of skeletons in his closet... and kagura is caught in the middle... it's only just beginning... wonder what else she'll find out... and what about kagome & inuyasha - arguing already... what's in-store for them... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh If I was Kagura I'd ask him to win me a prize... by playing to most difficult game for him... (If it was for InuYasha some thing that required delicate concentration lol.. )
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they really don't like each other... at least Sesshoumaru is looking for motherly instincts as well... it could be very good for the child... instead of being raised by a whore...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that this party will be full of surprises... will be lots of action and/or drama?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what the other guests will think of his "date"...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagura & sesshoumaru were enjoying themselves and getting along... until their arrangement was brought up... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't let him name the children either... they'd be named blade or fang (in Japanese of course) or some thing similar... (or Porcupiney, Rabbitty, Squirrelly, Beary, Mousey, Racoony, Beavery, Skunky, Foxy, Deery, Woodpeckery, Chickadee-y or any of the other cute, yet pure evil creations of Cartman, from South Park...) which would be very funny as Sessy has captured the hearts of many girls, yet is not the best personality wise...
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