| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello its me again. You are amazing. That chapter was very good sesshy telling Kagura about himself and the relationship with his bro. I wonder what the next chapter will hold will it be a lemony, will something come up that they might have to rush back home, or will kagura want a commitment from Sesshomaru before they have some good fun and make him wait until he can propose.( i don't know i'm thinking of some suspense to through in there she has been hurt before, so there is no need on giving up her cookies unless he is serious about being with her. You getting to know one another so when the unite sexually it's like they are one. Let the sex have a meaning behind it that open their eyes to possibilties and happiness. Sesshomaru is just to cocky- always have to have it his way all the time. this is just my opinion on the turn of events you are the author and you decide? ) Bre is out until further notice and i appreciate you creativity, determination, concideration, and beautifulness when it comes to your stories. Keep up the good work!. I am waiting to fall out of my seat with excitement and elation when i read your story . Ja ne
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: December 04, 2008 07:17 CST
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YES! YES! I can't wait! Shame about Setsuna though, but yay a lemon! Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very good Sesshy chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! Spend the night with him, hmm sounds interesting lol! I cant wait for the next chapter im excited! :D keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii On: December 03, 2008 14:55 CST
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wahhhhh lemony goodness...i LOVE IT...i wasnt expecting at all how Setsuna acted but I can see how this might play out with him wanting to get back at the family and maybe going after kagura...or i could be completely wrong and on a far away planet thinking that...but damn I cant wait for the next juicy chapter so update that lovliness soon XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol great chapter... I am going to go to bed... now... "since these two were the strongest he inferred that he did not have anything to worry about after all…maybe except the strange interested looks Jacques was giving him at the time."
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 00:32 CST
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haha...i bet its to Sesshoumaru...that would be great...it has been a while since i have read this but thankfully i had a break to catch up...I can just imagine if what i think is going to happen how kagura is going to react...XD funny...i cant wit for more chapters so update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... too bad their plans encountered a big detour... and seems that the party they went to will be more interesting than it turned out to be... this professor was talking to sesshoumaru i guess... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 18:43 CST
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Hmmmm I bet it is Sesshomaru he is talking to isnt it!?! lol Great chapter loved it and cant wait for the next one :D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sesshoumaru and kagura had a nice day - they spent a day together - sweet... in the end looks like things are looking good for the couple... but your last sentence spelled doom for them... wonder who it is... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: asdfg334 On: November 26, 2008 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! why cant they have 'fun' first!!! Ilove this story by the way so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may have been busy, or should gave been doing some thing else...ie going to school or doing some thing in class... your story is still wonderful!!!! and has some great plot line too!!! And great characters!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 13:58 CST
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Loved the new chapter im glad they spent the day together doing cute couple things lol. I really hope this unexpected visitor doesn't ruin it for them. I hate to see their trip ruined, since they just started getting along "great" lol :P well good luck on finals and Happy Thanksgiving :D
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 07:24 CST
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wonderful chapter. awsome i can speak a little spanish..... lol plz let the next chapter get some what intimate
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they got things all settled for now... wonder what'll happen now in paris... update when you can... please and thank you...
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