| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: Words escape me
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 19, 2009 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. All I can say right now is... wow.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: FroggyBIZ On: April 19, 2009 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best sex scene ever
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Title: this is the best fic ever
Reviewed By: starbrella On: April 19, 2009 22:47 EDT
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Like i said. i'm hooked onto this fic like crazy, i love the story line! i love how original it is, i love your writing style! i love not knowing whats going to happen next! i love everything about this fic! Please update this sooN!!! i've done a great job so far! keep up the amazying work!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: NetteTeTigress On: April 19, 2009 22:15 EDT
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"Are you putting a barrier between us and death, Vegeta?" "Impossible. I am death," Fucking awesome..you are a genious writer..beautiful chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 21:18 EDT
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Once again, a wonderfully delivered chapter. It's good to see them finally indulging in each other. Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 19, 2009 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Impossible. I am death," he told her ominously. "And right now, even the Gods wouldn't dare get between me and your tight little body." That was the sexiest thing I've ever read. Again you amaze me with your delicious writing. I think you are absolutely the best writer ever, especially when it comes to smut. Vegeta is simply lethal in this one, it makes me love him even more.
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 20:49 EDT
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I'm glad to know, that for a small moment they felt heaven. Great chapter. Now the sorrow begins.
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Title: Hot!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: April 19, 2009 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome awesome chapter! I am so completely in love with this story! I cant wait for more!!!! >___
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't quite know what it is, but there's some quality to your writing that isn't really found anywhere else. when i read other fanfiction i've actually thought "this would be better if it was written in tempest's style". great chapter. the events were very much a pleasant surprise, haha. can't wait til chapter nine!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 18, 2009 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Lord! This was gut-wrenching in the most beautiful way! She created a distraction so that Vegeta wouldn't die, knowing full well what would've happened if she hadn't succeeded. I like their dynamic, Vegeta in denial and Bulma being stubborn.
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Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 18, 2009 09:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off, I must say I am VERY glad that you're writing again :). This story is absolutely rivetting and I look forward to what you have in store for us next. PS, I love Bulma's profound quote at the end where she says: "We try to banish the darkness with laughter or jokes. Or fill the silence with the sound of our voices, but only the truly courageous acknowledge the shadows at the edge of the light." -- That's one I'll be remembering. :)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very, very dark and powerful chapter. I was on the edge of my seat with this one. I loved the last line of your first paragraph: "Saiyans were war personified" - a quite concise and definitely fitting statement. I also liked Bulma helping wash Vegeta's hands at the end. It was all she could do for him, so she did it. Well done; I am very much looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: NetteTeTigress On: April 16, 2009 00:33 EDT
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Beautiful Chapter, love the dark side of the prince, the imagery of the fight and ending scenes were terrific..i patiently await the next chapter.. P.S: i encourage all to take a look at kinky typo's fan-art..its really amazing :D
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 23:46 EDT
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Very nice, glad to see the brutal side of Vegeta coming out again. Nice fight scene too. I'm interested to see what happens when Frieza and cronies learn what happened to Thorn.
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Reviewed By: DJ pepper On: April 15, 2009 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.M.G. This was soooo good! I'm so happy you updated! I swear it's been a long time since I was so enraptured by a story, I practically hung onto every word! Please update soon. I can't wait for what's in store next! ;)
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