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Title: ch10
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: May 03, 2009 06:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic, the way you have shown the development of their realationship is just amazing. The way you repreent the dynamics between them, they seem to be more in sync with one another, and I think in this chapter, when Vegeta had to travel acrosss the bridgepart with Bulma on his back, really demonstrated this. I am really enjoying this story and look forward to your updates
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: May 03, 2009 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely incredible. I love the chemistry between them. it makes me shiver just to think of it.. can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Gut-wrenching is all I can say. It was phenomenal and beautifully detailed. Can't wait for the next chapter. =D
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 03:39 EDT
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Loved it - update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 23:53 EDT
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oh wow, what a neat twist! i'm very curious to see what's going on with the ship! i love it. it's a unique and interesting plot :D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 23:29 EDT
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Interesting. I wonder what you have in store for us. It's good to see them out of the room and working together.
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: April 25, 2009 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooo addicted! This is an incredible story!
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Reviewed By: Corinna On: April 25, 2009 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love this story!! i can't get enough of this, really
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 24, 2009 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote the BEST Bulma/Vegeta fics out there and still you continue to rock! This was such an intense chapter regarding their emotions, we all know Vegeta is falling hard, he just didn't realise it lol. I absolutely shook with that line: "You have no idea what I'm going to do to you once I get this collar off." The smoldering intensity of his promise made hot, wet sensation gush to the apex of her thighs. >>>Oh My God!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 23:46 EDT
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Ah, bonding. Cute chapter. I love how you're making them interact this time 'round. Keeps me wondering what'll happen next?
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 22:38 EDT
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I love romance novels to for just a brief moment to be swept away in a lovers embrace, and listen to his words of "LOVE" ok back to reality! Great chapter. can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 21:02 EDT
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Wow this was a smoking chapter! I can't believe I was out of town for this! Ack! But you know me, something about your writing gets my imagination going and then POOF! I have to sketch something out. This chapter was no exception. Although I think this pic may be too much for Deviantart *wink wink*. Another chapter well done!
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Title: Chapters 7 & 8
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not the words to describe how absolutely delicious that was. The violence in chapter 7 was dirty and bloody and wonderful. I loved the whole scenario, and especially adored their interaction at the end. Now, chapter 8 was beyond words. Aside from it putting an idiotic grin on my face, I got flutters and tingles all over from how vivid it was. It was sexy, period. Keep up the fantastic work!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 22:16 EDT
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Hoo, I'mma need a cold shower after that one. Good job, as always!
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Title: Chap 8
Reviewed By: starburst On: April 20, 2009 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-melts- :P
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