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Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: May 09, 2009 09:38 EDT
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Oh shit I just realised I didn't actually type in my nickname when I reviewed... that was me on the review titled 'Ohnoes Dx' (I accidentally typed in 'Chapter 11') as my username. Haha ths is why I should't review things at 2am. Just correcting that error xD. Cheers, and once again see you at the sequel xD
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 05:45 EDT
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Holy shit. I actually found you. I've been looking for your stories "At Odds" and its companions for a while, but I could never remember what they were called. I've read most of your other DBZ stories and I have to say I like you. For this story alone I was a little disappointed that there wasn't a little more of the usual violence, but I maybe there will be more in the squeal. On the other hand, though, I liked that this was just a get together for B and V. You don't see many of those these days.
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Title: Ohnoes Dx...
Reviewed By: Chapter 11 On: May 08, 2009 04:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:( That conclusion was a lil' depressing since everyone loves a happy ending (glad to know there's a sequel though!). I've come to expect behaviour that from someone like Vegeta, but not in this instance... the way you made their relationship progress kinda made the ending all the more shocking. Now that I'm a little unnerved by this cliffhanger of sorts, I can't stress how much I await the sequel to this enough xD. I'll be checking your profile like a maniac for updates now :) PS: As for the Gohan and Videl fic, I'm strictly a V/B fan - so not really too keen on it at all I'm afraid; sorry. Anyhoo, seeya when the sequel comes :D
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Title: review for Free my heart
Reviewed By: gammachan On: May 08, 2009 03:01 EDT
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Wow, another great one, dear! I loved it... your style has become one of my all time favorites for V/B fan fiction! Your 'against all odds' and 'at odds' were absolutely fabulous as well! (those have become one of my personal favorites of all fics) I will look forward to this summer... I know you won't let us down! *love*
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Reviewed By: sfdfdsdfs On: May 07, 2009 20:01 EDT
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omg, perfection.
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 18:46 EDT
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I really want to say what a "BASTARD" but i know that's who Vegeta was. Wow! I can't wait to read the next sequel. As far as Gohan and vidal write it. I still would like someone to write and please don't scream at me a vegeta and chichi story. runs before someone finds me. Wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 18:32 EDT
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Oh! How could he just leave her like that? Well... we know how, but poor Bulma! Very nice job on this. I want more, yes, do hurry on the sequel! As for Gohan and Videl... *yawn* I'm sure it would be an equally fabulous story coming from you, but I am a B/V junkie and very rarely read anything else. I say, more B/V!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 18:02 EDT
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Awe I'm very sad to see this is the end (for now). How could Vegeta leave her like that, it breaks my little heart (and no doubt his and hers as well). What is poor Bulma gonna' do? She can't read or write in that foreign language, she has no money, no idea how the technology works, and no place to go. Ack I can't want until the sequel already! I hope this next story picks up were this story is dropping off. I truly am excited to read more! As for the Gohan X Videl fic...I'm not too interested. I'm such a snoob that I'm a V/B only fan =P But I'm sure whatever you write will be good. Plus I love drawing V/B *wink*
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 17:18 EDT
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Oh wow, what an ending. I knew they would have to part and expected it to be on bad terms despite their growing relationship, but you still managed to make it complete unexpected. A beautiful fic through and through. What will happen now? I can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 17:04 EDT
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holy crap, that's the END AH. pleaaaase write that sequel ASAP for the love of god. haha, in case you didn't pick up on it, great chapter and fabulous story. i love it. oh and HELL YES TO GOHAN AND VIDEL. that would be such an interesting story and i'm sure as amazing as your others!!
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: May 07, 2009 15:39 EDT
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What a great ending! I swearing reading an update of your stories brightens up my entire day!! I think a Gohan/Videl story would be great! Oh and I was wondering, are you still updating your story website?
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: strawberry_router On: May 05, 2009 10:10 EDT
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I love love love this fic! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 12:41 EDT
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I'm sorry I haven't made anymore "completed" artwork for your story. I'm still very much in love with it though! I have a couple of sketches and concept art if you are interested ;) I just can't help but doodle something after I read your work! http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Works-in-Progress-120667142 and http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Free-My-Heart-IV-concept-art-121428123 I can't wait until I have some free time to finish one of these! :D
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 09:46 EDT
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Action packed adventure! I know I've said this before but I swear so far this is my favorite chapter. I just love how our two escapees interact with eachother and have to rely on one another for survival. It could be easier if they seperate but they refuse to leave the other's side. They just HAVE to be near each other. I just love it!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: May 03, 2009 11:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing escape scene!!!! What happened!! You're killing us here!! I love the way they trust each other.
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