| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: RoronoaEmi On: February 26, 2011 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story is hilarious! The toilet scene was great. I adore Vegeta's character and you did a wonderful job at writing not only his witty responses, but also his thoughts, inner colflicts and hidden emotions. And you really captured the character of our favorite spunky, blue-haired scientist too. I immensely enjoyed chapters 1-3 and can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. |
Reviewed By: KisaraGirl On: November 22, 2009 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You can write!! I always love your stories. They are the best. Never stop writing these amazing stories!
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Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this piece. I also can't describe the feeling I got when it ended xD It was absolutely beautiful and ... well, made me cry, quite honestly. Going on to read your sequel to it; please keep at it! IT'S NICE TO SEE YOU'RE WRITING THEM AGAIN !! *__* ♥
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 16:54 EDT
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and by update i meant free my soul xD
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 16:53 EDT
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update soon? prease? it's so good.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 05:25 EDT
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That was such an amazing story! And Vegeta is just as I would expect him to be. I can't wait to read the sequel! I'm sure it will be just as amazing as this! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: July 06, 2009 23:50 EDT
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Awww, this is by far the best vb fic i've ever read in such a long time. I've done an excellent job with the the way you wrote and the style. I ending was so heart breaking but at least i can look forward to the sequel!!! :) I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Serenity6891 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I appreciate the way you ended the story. It was raw emotion conflicting with, not pride persay, but certainly Vegeta's understood destiny. Besides, if there was a happy ending at that point, no one would have a sequal to look forward to. While the violent plot in your previous stories was well written, I've enjoyed your use of the character-driven scenario immensly. It shows your versatility as an author. Have you ever thought of tweaking a few details and sending in your longer pieces to a publishing company? Just because your loyal fans know where the story originated, doesn't mean it would be any less favorably received by the public in general. On the off chance I'll sound slightly fanatical (as all fans tend to do) I admit... I might have started looking for the sequal on a habitual basis, holding my breath in anticipation of the wonderful number 35 popping up when I load your author's page. Alas, I might pass out soon from lack of oxygen. Best of luck with those obnoxious muses!
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Reviewed By: sue On: June 23, 2009 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to say that you are an amazing author and i so enjoy the privilege of reading your stories. also it's finally summer! yea!! (hint hint)!
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Title: FuzzyToad
Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD I LOVE YOU!!! You rock on the Vegeta/Bulma front! Perfect angsty goodness as usual, never a dull moment. I love the way you keep the characters "In Character" and the story line is amazingly original, and well written. And to think there'll be another installation eventually...WooHoo, something to definitely look forward to. I can't wait to see how the story develops with Vegeta possibly taking the "Universal Reigns." I'm dying to know how the orphaned Earthlings are going to make it in such violent alien galaxies, and exactly WHO are the survivors??? Keep up the awesome work, you NEVER disappoint!
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: May 12, 2009 08:21 EDT
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my gosh, that was amazing, I didn't expect that, that chapter was so raw, you really depicted the characters well, I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel, there are so many different possibilities, just wow. You really portrayed Bulma's anguish well, I wonder how she will react in the sequel, just finding out about the loss of her planet, and then Vegeta leaving her. I'm also interested in your gohan and videl story
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the sequel. That was a perfect ending to a fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: May 11, 2009 10:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was mind-numbing!!!!! I thought the ending was completely prfect for them. They won't budge, they're too proud, even knowing they will suffer for it. You are magnificent as per usual! I'm definitely going to wait for the sequel! Thank you for another amazing story!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What? That is the end? But…but…Goku didn't find her yet. Man, it is going to be torture waiting for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 13:13 EDT
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I was almost expecting there to be a happy ending. But, I think its fitting, sometimes you need a story that makes you go :( I felt bad for Bulma cause she has nowhere to go and just Goku to watch over her. I bet you anything Vegeta will come back for her and she will have probably moved on. Its time she broke his heart! Nice job!
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