| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. Your character development and use of details is riveting. It's all so wonderfully descriptive and well put together. I think both Bulma and Vegeta are well within the possibilities of their respective personalities. You're doing a wonderful job, and I'm glad you're going with your gut. Keep the story true to what you want it to be, and I'm sure that it will keep being outstanding. As always, patiently awaiting another great new chapter.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: NetteTeTigress On: April 12, 2009 00:32 EDT
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OMG..your cliffhangers have me dying here..In response to your A.N...i dont feel Vegeta is to talkative, i feel he is just right and totally in character..please please update asap
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: April 12, 2009 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am pretty much in love with this story. I really like the way that it is unfolding, and I don't mind Vegeta's loquaciousness at all. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 21:14 EDT
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Wow that was amazing! I think that's my favorite chapter thus far. I think you're doing the right thing by being true to your heart and writing this the way YOU want it and not what other people want. It makes the story unique and interesting. Oh and thank you so much for the kind words in the beginning of the chapter! You are too kind! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 12:47 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Things are really heating up *fans face*. I drew a fanart highly inspired by your fic if you'd like to check it out. :D http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Art-Jam-Watched-118543998
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: Ankhnaton [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 23:45 EDT
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brilliant..your keeping the both of them completely in character, and the sexual tension between them is delicous..continue to upload plz ;D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 23:10 EDT
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Another great chapter. Good to see Bulma and Vegeta 'bond' in their unique way. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 21:53 EDT
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I want to cry right now!!!!
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Title: Oh my!
Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 20:27 EDT
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I am so glad that you are back! Thank you for brightening up an otherwise crap day!
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Title: Oh my!
Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 20:24 EDT
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I am so glad that you are back! Thank you for brightening up an otherwise crap day!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 08, 2009 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools at sexyness* Woah! Give me some Bulma/Vegeta sugar! This is a fantastic story! I can't wait to see where you're going with this! There's only so much our beautiful Prince can take before he rams her against the cold walls!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was she going to tell him about the dragon balls? ^__^ Cute chapter! Love the way Vegeta was playing with her hair while she rambled on to him! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sweet19bluesx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ so creative and well written~ I like the fact that its not a happy ending too :D Thank you for writing again.
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely adore the story so far. It is imaginative and very interesting. I really love your style of writing, because I feel it is not only mature but also absolutely captivating. I cannot even begin to tell you how much I look forward to the continuance of your wonderful fanfic.
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Reviewed By: purple_streams_of_star On: April 05, 2009 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story so much so far. I'm practically checking your account everyday to see if you've updated! haha no lies. This is getting so good, please update soon!
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