| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: pantrieze On: April 05, 2009 02:07 EDT
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this story is absolutely amazing, very original,ive never seen a fic done like this..please upload the next couple of chapters asap
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 23:51 EDT
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OMG joygasm. I didn't realize you were writing again. Wonderful beginning, though of course I wouldn't expect any less from you. Terrified and thrilled to see what happens next.
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Title: In Love
Reviewed By: Kuroi_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my laptop got stolen leaving me with no internet. I find this while checking my email on campus. You're alive and you updated! Four chapters at that! This made my day. No, my week! I hope this is a lengthy one. YOu're making me tempted to read your other fics all over again too. This will highly cancel out the horror that the new DBZ movie will be which i am only seeing for comedic value of course. Vegeta is so talkitive and soo protective this early on. I'm glad they didn't shag yet, reading this is public is making me paranoid enough. So can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 07:08 EDT
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Loved it again. To watch them fight this together..really really interesting and also it sounds real twisted and sick..it's really fun to read too! *hungs her head in shame..never thought I'd call reading about torture fun* Anyway, good job again and I'm waiting for the next one! Lovies EV
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Title: Intriguing!
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 23:13 EDT
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Wow, I am really starting to enjoy this story. I'm disappointed at the end of each chapter, but only because it's the end. You're really leaving me wanting more story! I agree with Nintendocat- the interaction between Zarbon and Jeice IS creepy. :p
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Reviewed By: sihnya On: April 02, 2009 17:54 EDT
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This story is almost a character study of both Bulma & Vegeta... awesome !! I'm glad you updated but can't wait to read what happens.. :)
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! Poor Vegeta. I love the way he protected Bulma. Update soon! Love it!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 02, 2009 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely fantastic! Vegeta's struggle is almost palpable. It's always been about love and hate with them! Do I sense a super saiyan coming up?
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Title: ouch
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 16:15 EDT
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Wow so powerful. i'm so happy with this story, you have no idea!!! More more more!!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 15:47 EDT
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Poor Bulma. I love how you're developing their characters this time around. (Though I'm honestly getting more and more creeped out by Zarbon and Jeice each time XD) The developing tension is great, as always. I can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 15:32 EDT
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Wow wonderful chapter. Really putting depth into the story. I can't help but love this!
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Reviewed By: Roar On: April 02, 2009 14:43 EDT
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Uuuhhh.... what might happen next time...??? update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: sihnya On: April 01, 2009 13:09 EDT
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I like your kind of stories, you always keep good characterization... looking forward to an update !
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Title: More!!!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 20:21 EDT
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I like the way they are with each other! I truly can;t wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad Bulma has become a little less frighten and is able to socialize with Vegeta more. Update soon! Love the chapter!
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