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| "Chains" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ] | Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 04, 2010 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW! Good Yohji! You are doing much better, I'm glad you are finally starting to catch on. Well Aya-pet will catch on soon too, then we can start making some real progress. and WHOOT for the fast update! I loves you Miko!
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 04, 2010 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Yohji, you make a LOVELY knight in shining armour! Hey Ken! Get your head out of your ass! Omi, lighten up, seriously, and Aya-pet *cuddles and brushes his hair* It's ok, Master won't let anyone hurt you, he really likes you and wants to protect you. It'll be okay.
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: April 28, 2010 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Oh, Yohji could call me several things, most of them I wouldn't let him call me in public.^_^ But Aya I'm just gonna call 'Aya-Pet' for the moment." *Glares at Yohji.* "He's been trained out of most of his decision making free-will you Bishonen-baka, so you're gonna have to take your oh-so-lightly assumed role seriously! Have patience and make compromises and give him a set guide of rules so that you don't always have him in fear of messing up and being punished!'sigh.' Watch." Has Aya-Pet strip to his briefs and sit in the tub and gives him a warm gentle bath, trims his hair, then washes and conditions it properly before wrapping him in a fluffy warm towel and combing his hair out.* "I'll give you a proper manicure next, oh, and give me that!" *takes the collar from a startled Aya who was trying to sneak it back on.* "Training you to bathe with a collar, it's gonna turn into a cracked, smelly, unmovable piece of ruined junk. Sheesh, and it's caked with body oil, sweat and blood too. Did they NEVER clean this since they put it on you?! Those bastards have no respect for leather. I would LOVE to get them in my torture chamber and teach THEM a few things!" *Takes out collection of brushes and rags, along with leather soap, conditioner, touch up polish and stain, oil, suede brush, and metal polish.* "This is gonna take a while Aya-Pet, so you are to change into those warm dry clothes, eat every bite of food on that tray and then lay down on your bed until I'm finished." *points to a service tray sitting on the floor with a plate of fresh fruits, veggies, cheese cubes, and deli meats, two cookies and a glass of water. Just behind it is a huge over-stuffed pet bed with 'Aya' embroidered on the side. Glances at Yohji as Aya immediately obeys without hesitation or fear.* "See? Be clear with him and it's a piece of cake." *Huggles Miko* Thank you for the chapter it really made my awful day a million times better! XD my capcha for this chapter is CEXY! XD how fitting!
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: April 25, 2010 16:14 EDT
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PRINCESS?! Oh Yohji you really are just gonna confuse the man to death if you can't even tell he's been programmed. *smacks him upside the head* well, the rest of weiss is certainly gonna have a field day with this, I can't WAIT to see how this goes! Thnaks for the update and ooooh that notch looks promising!
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: April 23, 2010 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aya! Noooo you need real rest! It's ok to sleep in the bed if that's where your Master puts you! I wanna kill those bastards sooooo much. You have a new Master now, so that means new rules! Much easier to follow and better for your health rules! Oh well, Yohji will tell you the same when he wakes up.
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: April 21, 2010 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It shouldn't be so cute and sweet for Aya to be that helpless ...in Yohji's arms... being carried gently and saved without a word of protest... GAH! no no no no no no no! Bad Cody! Stop enjoying misery and angst so much!... ahh what's the use, I never listen to myself anyway. ^_^ Apron!Aya?! Really?1 for ME?! I LOVE you soooo much! *SQUEEEEE!*
| Reviewed By: kat716 On: April 02, 2010 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a lazy reviewer, I admit it. I like it. Please write more. Did you notice that it switches to bold print in the middle of chapter 6? It gave me a serious Whoa! moment. So, Aya just watched Yohji kill someone. I can just see him saying to himself in his head "No matter what, no matter what, no matter what. What the HELL?!?" Can't wait for the next bit. There's bound to be an akward moment... or twelve. N PS I like author's notes.
| Reviewed By: Noizchild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 22:49 EDT
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My mistake on the post crazy part. I confused you with another writer. But don't post author's notes in the chaps.
| Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: March 27, 2010 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's been a long time since I've read a WK fic, and this was nice to stumble across. As the others have said this site doesn't seem to get much in the way of traffic. I'm thoroughly enjoying this so far. I'm always a sucker for Aya in distress. And Yohji's pet care line/thought, ah god. He's such a special boy. I don't know how it will carry into later chapters, but I like the stark, to the point nature of the early ones. It's a nice fit for me. (I personally enjoy author notes, as I like hearing what's going on inside their heads in relation to chapters, etc. Provided they're not inline and marked as such, I say it's completely up to the author whether or not they're included)
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Reviewed By: Noizchild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oddly attractive. Aya being submissive is just foreign to me. But, you had my attention sold with the prompt. I noticed that you go post crazy with the chapters with your fics. I suggest posting a chap and then waiting for a little bit (Like a day or so) before posting the next one. Also, don't do author notes in the chapter; I find them very annoying. Follow my advice and you will do good.
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: March 27, 2010 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh hell yes! Yohji you rock! I loved loved LOVED the mental image he had of asking Omi if he could keep his new 'pet', but when he got that guy with the wire, I sooo cheered out loud and startled the cat, it was great!
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: March 23, 2010 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEE! oh you just gave me such a lovely mental image, Aya kneeling and Yohji clipping the collar on...oooh I love it! And you're gonna throw lovely naked men in a bed together just for ME?! ^_^ I feel just so lovely and special right now, you have NO idea *is rapidly turning to goo* You know my readers seriously owe you some thanks, because I just got inspired for my third chapter of 10 minute break (AKA Master. Executive.) because of this chapter. It's an original of mine, the first two chapters are already posted on AFF.net but I've been stuck on the third chapter for over a year now, so thank you! It's under my regular pen name if you wanna read it, but it might not be your thing, what with all the hardcore male on male sex, kink and S&M running rampant like PWP... oh wait it IS a PWP! But let me know if you check it out, because I would love a critique beyond 'add more chapters' and 'I loved it!'
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: March 20, 2010 11:34 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh Slavefic! Nice! I can't wait to see more, seriously I love this and if I could I would marry your brain. Although the images of the villans is mentally escaping me at the moment, so I'll have to check out pics when I get home tonight. *sigh I hate being so bad with names. by the way, you're giving me many wicked ideas of my own, so thank you! I only hadn't reviewed yet because I haven't been on for a few days *has inconsistent internet access* so I got to read all of the pretty at once! Whoot! Another reason you might not have as much traffic and therefore reviews here is because, well this site isn't nearly as popular as FF.net or AFF.net. It kinda used to be, when FF.net first started being a douche, but not so much anymore. You might have better results at AFF since I believe you are still boycotting FF.net and their stupid 'no NC17!' rule that no one follows. I know you have a profile there, I tried poking you on it a few times. Please update more I loves this!
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