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Reviewed By: S.Degenerate On: July 27, 2010 02:10 EDT
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Y'know, that's something that's always irked me about WK, why no one ever recognises them, because surely Aya was all over the news and Ken was a freaking soccer star. Anyway, I'm really impressed with this story still, even after this many chapters it's still just as good as it was at the start. Your updates make me happy :D
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 26, 2010 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Manx! be nice to Aya-pet of I will rewrite the universe so that you will never be allowed to have chocolate again! ...or something. Whatever I think up as retaliation will be unpleasant, I can guarantee you that, so be nice!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: July 23, 2010 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh that was almost a teaser! I wanna see what happens hen Manx gets there! it is sure to be an interesting meeting.
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 14:44 EDT
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It took me a while to start reading this one, because I'm usually put off by stories about slavery/rape/torture, etc, but I really really like how you write and since this story was so long I couldn't resist giving it a try. I've been impressed at how well you're handling such difficult topics. Aya's response to the abuse seems very realistic and I'm glad you're keeping the pacing slow. If you skipped over much of the healing process it would have lost a lot of its believability for me. I'm relieved at how responsibly Yohji has been handling things too. I'm enjoying this and looking forward to finding out what you have in store for them and seeing Aya when he's more recovered (though don't rush anything, keep it up just like you've been doing!)
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 17, 2010 20:57 EDT
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heh I don't think a review would ever be enough to stop him from having fantasies about the tables, and I think I'm in agreement with him that Yohji should maybe go check to make sure he's ok. ^_^ I like this chapter, I think Omi is right that Aya will like it in there. What I'm curious about is when Ken and Omi will finally get to see Aya's favorite sweater for the first time.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: July 16, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strawberry Ensure?! Omi that's downright cruel! how could you give that to Aya-pet?! Here Aya darling, you are going to need something to help get that down. *gives him a mixed berry, apple, banana, and yogurt smoothie with added ginseng, honey, bee pollen, vitamin powder and whey protein.* Healthy stuff doesn't have to taste horrible Omi, and fresh foods are better for him anyway, give him more protein if you want him to gain weight. (peanut butter is a great source) And sorry Miko, you cannot successfully chase me off just by not updating for a while. In fact I doubt you will ever be able to get rid of me, I'm too hooked on your stories, so you might as well just accept the fact I'm gonna stick around. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 20, 2010 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this chapter just completely made my day, awww yay for Aya petting! *petpetpet* I REALLY hope Aya doesn't fall back into former habits, Yohji keep going with the trust building, you have a lot of damage to undo.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 17, 2010 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooo! no, Aya- pet you were doing so well! don't listen to that bastard for a second! Yohji!!! help him quick or it will be just like the first day all over again!
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Reviewed By: Degenerate On: June 16, 2010 05:39 EDT
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Epic cliffhanger ending FTW!!! I know I should hate Schuldig with a passion, but there's something about pure evil that's just...awesome!! I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 15, 2010 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww I didn't get a chance to try the limrick, darnit! next time hentai slug, next time.
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Reviewed By: Cody T the Lazy On: June 15, 2010 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh SHIT! I totally didn't see that coming! Oh crap how did he even FIND them? or get in? oh not good not good not good. how long will it even be before Yohji goes upstairs to check on him? Oh I hope you plan to update soon because this will have me fretting about Aya-pet until it's resolved. Yohji! get a feeling of something amiss! I know you are swamped down there but PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 15, 2010 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! continue! keep going, please? you KNOW how much I love this story, and you haven't kicked badguy butt yet! there NEEDS to be more!!! poor Aya-pet, he needs some tea and probably a few more Yohji hugs, crazy fangirls, they had better not have scarred Aya-pet for life!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 15, 2010 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I like that bloom of hope,I like it a LOT. The flower shop will do Aya a world of good I think and I also think that as the hope grows, so will the trust. lovely chapter! and now I'm off to the next, I'm getting spoiled, three whole chappies all for me! *huggles them tight*
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Reviewed By: Boadicea On: June 14, 2010 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'd BETTER keep writing, or the Evil Hentai Slug is going to meet Super-Frustrated Yaoi Fangirl! Trust me ... (evil smile) ... the Slug will lose. (hehehehehe) Seriously, good story! Keep writing1
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Reviewed By: Degenerate On: June 12, 2010 05:47 EDT
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Ahh, the fangirls. They probably just scarred Aya for life (well...more scarred than he is already...) Please, continue!
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