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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: December 23, 2010 16:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoot no internet connection means multiple chappies when I get it for a little bit! WHOOT! *Hands the slug two pretty naked bishies who are bound facing each other and gagged and tied with red ribbon. I found these, and while I REALLY wanted to do something with them they wouldn't cooperate, I figured maybe you would like them and have better luck than I did. Happy Holidays and thank you for the pretty chappies! I love that Aya is getting his hrd ass edge back! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: December 17, 2010 11:52 EST
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wow I went away for a bit and get to come back to 2 whole chappies! Whoot! Aya is just getting awesomer and awesomer. can't wait to see him knock Yohji's ass on the floor. ooh ooh I'm reviewing! can I have present? I've been very VERY good to my characters this year Mr Slashy Clause, I promise! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: November 25, 2010 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww Yohji being sweet! Aya really is doing better, I like the way that Aya is gaining back at least a little self confidence and independence. *Huggles them both* I about jumped for joy when I read Aya had finished his plate, had I been there, Yohji and I would have celebrated. a lot. with alcohol and the hentai slug. ... what IS he doing with that pudding? and is it chocolate pudding? because if it's chocolate pudding, then it may LOOK sinister, but it will actually be brilliant, if it's something like say, tapioca... then that's just evil and needs to be stopped immediately. ^_^ thanks for the update and happy turkey day to you too! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: September 30, 2010 09:12 EDT
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Wow I am impressed, Aya did better than I expected. and Yohji, *Smack* Cuddle your pet before he worries himself into a fit about how you're going to punish him! I think the changes you have planned will work out well, and I think I know how Subaru-san got in that closet... *Takes the keys the Hentai Slug is ineffectually hiding*
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Reviewed By: Yuuzai On: September 28, 2010 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ach Youji. The poor man just doesn't seem to have a barrier between his brain and his mouth sometimes. Then again, it's hard to watch what you say for fear that you'll set someone off almost 24/7, and he did manage to make it into a learning experience for Aya. Let's just hope that Aya will take what Youji said to heart. I'm going to stop psychoanalyzing characters now. Heh.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: September 24, 2010 17:32 EDT
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XD but it's so CUTE to see Omi being snuggled like that! It's lovely! Go Yohji! Snuggle the Chibi! and Whoot for Aya starting (however inadvertently) to stand up for himself! XD my captcha is abcd how appropriate!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: September 19, 2010 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot an update! I love these updates! is Aya going to still have great arrangement skills? He needs something that he's good at and can take pride in. Oh and by the way, is it entirely the fault of you and this story that when I was at Anime Vegas 2 weeks ago that I purchased the entire Weiss Kruez collection. All. Your. FAULT. How old is the original series anyway? It reminded me of Sailor Moon animation wise. And Ken has officially gotten the 'gay' stamp on more than one occasion already. I am loving the crack and camp factors immensely, but it's still all your fault I'm even watching the series. :P
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: September 16, 2010 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! the warm fuzzies shall stay! Please let them stay! I love this chapter because they are so cute together!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: September 12, 2010 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Yohji finally got his head out of his ass, but poor Aya-pet! *huggles him gently* Yohji you need to take better care of your pets.
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Reviewed By: SDegenerate On: September 11, 2010 19:59 EDT
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After 47 chapters, this is still just as amazing and I still want to know what's going to happen just as much as I did after chapter 1! It's awesome.
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Reviewed By: Yuuzai On: September 11, 2010 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I finally found the one you regularly update! ^^ I was beginning to be afraid that you had stopped writing. Glad to see my fears were unfounded. I thoroughly enjoy this story and hope the next chapter comes soon. On a chapter related note, Youji needs to get his head out of his ass and come home before Aya does something drastic. *smacks Youji for being an idiot*
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: September 05, 2010 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, poor Aya. That pesky intrusion of reality. It's never done anyone any good, and especially not in his case. I miss the tiny illusion they built... Yohji, come back and make it better.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: September 03, 2010 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor thing! *huggles you gently* Bronchitis Sucks! I've had it too, it's awful. I hope you are feeling much MUCH better! and Yohji, I know you're upset, but you have an Aya-pet to think of! *sits gently on the bed and gives Aya-pet a sandwich to snack on, then brushes his hair.* It'll be alright Pet, He's not mad at you, his whole life is just stressing him out. he'll be back soon, he might even want to hold you in his arms. Let's make your hair absolutely pettable for him, he won't be able to resist.
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Reviewed By: allia On: August 07, 2010 18:38 EDT
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Read the whole thing in one sitting -- really interesting and tense. Looking forward to more! :)
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: August 05, 2010 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hooray for updates! well she didn't kill either of them, so I see that as a plus. Poor Aya he's terrified now. and Yohji cooling down I see as a good thing. can't wait for more! ^_^
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