| "Chains" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: March 26, 2011 13:43 EDT
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WHoot for the coat! maybe Yohji could explain that when he gets his code name, he can attach that killer and name to the outfit, when he take it off that person disappears, when He puts it on, Aya goes away. ... might be one way of maintaining your sanity and whatever shred of innocence you have left. I'm so glad you updated! makes me very happy, because I had a craptastic day and you just made it better. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: February 27, 2011 14:29 EST
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Hooray for a nice big chunk of PLOT! I love plot, it's really hard to have too much plot, as long as it isn't a convoluted one....or taking up precious space in a sex scene.... but this was really good plot, and needed, and HOORAY for chapter 70! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: February 25, 2011 01:55 EST
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Well Aya at least is realizing that there are things he needs to work on to get back towards 'normal' and I still want to huggle him senseless even though he would most likely still hurt me for attempting it. I'm still enjoying this story very much, hard to believe you are nearly at 70 chapters on it! large quantities of plot are good, and essential for a good story. Can't wait to read it! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: February 08, 2011 20:22 EST
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AWWWW *SQUEEEEEE!!!!* Soooooo cute! see Yohji?! Communication is key!!!! squeeeee hoooray for the wafffy fuzzy warmth, we need all the heat we can get! this chapter seriously cheered me up. it's been sucha crappy week but this made it a million times better! thank you! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: January 31, 2011 06:50 EST
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ooooh PLOT. I'm going to hold you to that. I'm glad that this whole nasty issue has somewhat been resolved... until ohji or Aya get to slit shuldig and Crawford's throats. is the team going to find aya-chan soon? I would so love that! can't wait for more! and thanks for the pretty start to my day! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: January 27, 2011 12:33 EST
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I think Omi is my personal hero right now, along with Ken who actually managed to be quite insightful and compassionate. Yohji might just get a good chance to try and make things better now, if he doesn't go and bungle them up that is. I'm super glad you updated, I've been slightly impatient. But that's because I'm dying to see what happens when Yohji eventually get his hands on Shuldig. |
Reviewed By: Cody T the Lazy On: January 22, 2011 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aya-pet you need to chill, Yohji isn't going to ask that of you. and Yohji *Headsmack* get your ass in that bedroom and talk to him before he works himself into a fit and then cuddle your cute little bishie so he gets his balance back because that was one hell of a scare you gave him! Go talk, cuddle and make up! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 16, 2011 17:23 EST
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oh and congrats on the job! While I am pretty strongly confident that you can only warp young minds of future generations in a way I would like and wholeheartedly approve of, he, *points at the slug* should probably be confined to something inescapable until you have need of him, or constantly watched and kept out of trouble. I have a second bedroom I'm not currently using, I'd be happy to hentai-sit him if you'd like! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 16, 2011 17:19 EST
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Poor Aya, I wish there was something to help him... maybe Yohji could full on spar with him to make Aya feel strong again or something. You REALLY fucked it up this time Yohji, but I can't really blam you for all of it. *huggles Aya-pet* Sigh, I hope hefeels better soon. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 06, 2011 09:31 EST
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Omi I love you a lot right now. Yohji, part of me wants to beat you and part of me just feels sorry for you. Idiot. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 06, 2011 09:13 EST
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Nonononono! AYA DON'T! *Cuddles him close* don't do it, don't do it, don't do it! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 06, 2011 09:09 EST
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Yohji I would rip valuable pieces of your anatomy off and make you eat them, but you are just a supreme idiot under the influence of both alcohol and mental persuasion. and now you have to find a way to dig your sorry ass outta this. YOU on the other hand *Points viciously at Schuldig* I'm gonna lash you spread eagle to the ground naked near a fire ant hill, in the middle of summer in the desert, cover you with honey and then sit in the shade and watch. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: January 06, 2011 09:03 EST
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THis... I don't see this ending well, Yohji becomes an absolute ass when mixed with alcohol... how did I miss so many chapters? Oh that's right, I was moving, that just means more chappies for me to read now! |
Reviewed By: knowthyself89 On: January 05, 2011 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I check this fanfic every single day because I am so invested in the characters. By the way, the chapter "Grasp Me" about made me cry. If I wasn't reading this around other people, I probably would have cried anyways. I love your story and your characterizations. They're incredibly realistic with fears, regrets, joys and likes/dislikes. Amazing. |
Reviewed By: Aya1989 On: January 01, 2011 04:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story ! I must admit I haven't read a Weiss story so gripping since a long time. It's a very realistic characterization. The relation between Yohji & Aya is enthralling. I really like Schuldig a lot too. Unlike Crawford who is perfect as a total bad-ass, Schuldig's subtlety & ambiguity are quite intriguing... And I must say I totally didn't see that one coming. You have me craving for another update now... Thank you !! And a Happy New Year ! |
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