| "Chains" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: silxcite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2012 02:31 EDT
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wow to get so far in his relationship with aya only to break him by calling him a slave..so sad =/ |
Reviewed By: CodyT the Lazy On: March 13, 2012 00:08 EDT
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Yohji I am going to beat you senseless, seriously beat you bloody senseless. Crawford is going to get frikking KILLED, but oooooohhhhhhh am I going to make you hurt. I don't care how scared you were you do not do that to an abuse victim who has just been beaten, molested, and raped again! It wasn't his fault that he couldn't fight back, how DARE you blame him! *takes Aya* I am NOT giving him back to you until you can prove to me that you have the capability of being more than just an asshole. Miko darling I am SO glad to see you again so soon, and yay extra long non teasing chapter! hard to believe there are 100 chapters to this story already. About how far into your idea are we at this point, or are you like me and just let the story and chapters form themselves? |
Reviewed By: CodyT the Lazy On: March 06, 2012 00:20 EST
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Yohji how can you expect him to trust you if you dismiss what he says when he does trust you with something? Moron. yay you are back! I missed you like woah. this was practically a teaser! more more more!! |
Reviewed By: silxcite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2012 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm thrilled that I was able to find another great fanfic that has Aya as a rape victim and Yohiji being there to soothe his pained past. I lol'd at the incorporation of the orange sweater. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: November 13, 2011 10:44 EST
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NOW we're getting somewhere! Come on Aya, you can do it! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: November 13, 2011 10:09 EST
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yay you're back! I've missed you! Darn it Omi! Quit interrupting them! And Yohji is far more patient than I am. I woul have already asked Aya what I could do to prove to him that I was never going to hurt him. |
Reviewed By: Aya1989 On: August 25, 2011 21:54 EDT
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Things get better when Yohji doesn't push. Really sweet chapter. Characters were fantastically well-portrayed. You sure know how to make it very realistic. The 'go' game scene made my heart melt. Maybe Aya will soon be able to tell Yohji a bit more about his past & the bad guys. I'm eager to know what will happen during a future encounter with Schwarz. Don't treat Schuldig too badly, ok ? He's sick but he 'loves' Aya in his own twisted way, I think. Without him, Aya wouldn't have been saved by Yohji. Please, never end that story ! I'm checking for updates several times a day... I'm completely addicted to it ^__^" Thank you !! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: August 25, 2011 14:16 EDT
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AWWWW!!! ^_^ *Melts into happy goopy puddle* KAWAII! Aya-Totoi, watashi wa hokori ni omotte iru anata wa totemo yoku yatte iru! *Shakes head* Gah too much non translated anime, sorry. Uh I mean I'm so proud of you Aya-pet you are doing so much better! and the kiss was adorable! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: August 18, 2011 12:45 EDT
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whoot more kissies! and Yohji you take advantage of him and I swear to gods I will beat you senseless. Find his sister, get the collar off him let him have some more mental healing and then see where things go. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: August 15, 2011 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He loves, sorry, LIKES you because you are Wonderful Aya pet. and well he's a big softy who want to protect you from all the bad stuff. the roguish flirt is just a sham to cover up his squishy marshmallow center. you'll be fine. ^_^ hooray for updates! I've missed this story to pieces! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: August 05, 2011 20:24 EDT
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It's soooo short but I can't even get mad at you for it because KISS OMG! I love you! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: August 02, 2011 19:40 EDT
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Oh Aya-Pet Yohji is one of the last people on earth who would ever try to demand someone be "normal" he'd be completely calling himself out as a hypocrite. But talking about your problems is a big improvement. Keep moving forward, even if the road has a lot of bumps and potholes. and HOORAY for upcoming plot! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: July 28, 2011 06:37 EDT
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Wow, MASSIVE progress. Not EASY progress, but progress nonetheless. Aya I'm so proud of you, look how far you've come! *huggles Aya* *Huggles you too.* Thank you for the update! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: July 17, 2011 00:40 EDT
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Oh Chibi, you are so densely clueless it's almost adorable. Do you really think Yohji would keep Aya in there if he didn't want him in there? You are silly, that you are. YAY for really quick updates! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: July 12, 2011 14:59 EDT
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Very good Yohji, a happy Aya can only be a good thing. *Pets both Yohji and Aya. I look forward to more Aya kicking bad guy butt, it seems to be doing him some good. |
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