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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: June 08, 2010 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm this made my morning! I'm bound to have a good day now no matter how ungodly early it's starting. Yes I'm ready for the next round, these are FUN! and I'm so proud of Aya-pet, and I hope he noticed that look of pride on Yohji's face! The other guys are worrying me. A Lot. I hope when Aya-pet is doing much better he can slit their throats himself.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: June 03, 2010 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yohji, you are doing the best you can, but I really think you need to explain things better. Where's Omi when you need him? Oooooh another challenge. lets see... Ah, Bishounen, you're quite a sight With those pants so deliciously tight Let's get out of the bar And go back to my car Where I can Fuck you all night!
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Reviewed By: anon583 On: June 01, 2010 17:32 EDT
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You know, I think that Yohji's plan to make Aya part of Weiss is not a very good idea. Aya seems so emotionally and mentally fragile; would it be wise to turn him into an assassin, where he would be killing random ppl right and left and where he would constantly have to endanger his life? If he was made more normal, then isn't it possible that putting him into these extreme circumstances might trigger a regression or just make him berserk? Maybe they should just let him run the flower shop without the killing?
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Reviewed By: anon284 On: May 31, 2010 22:36 EDT
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Oh, that's so sweet of Yohji to make so much effort for Aya. I guess that when Aya said "thank you"...was that a break-through? A very, very tiny break-through? Maybe he's beginning to realize that Yohji isn't sadistic and horrible and actually is very caring and generous?
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Reviewed By: Cody T the Lazy On: May 30, 2010 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this chapter just filled me with warm and fuzzy feelings all over, and was that a hint of trust I saw from our dear Aya? Ooooh I'm so happy I could burst! ^_^ The prudes all tell me I'm sick Because of the things that I lick I just love to love boys And to handle their toys I'm expert at sucking a PRICK! XD love you Hentai Slug, truly I do.
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: May 29, 2010 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your chapter format, I guess you could call it, where you have Yohji saying or doing something and Aya immediately getting sucked into a bad memory, and then ending with that one sentence in present time... it's really, really effective. Gah.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 28, 2010 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that... actually went better than I had hoped. Way to go Yohji! *babys Aya-pet* shhhh there, it's ok, you did wonderfully, it's alright, you are being so good Pretty Aya-pet, you are so good.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy On: May 27, 2010 11:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor Aya-pet! gimmie that wavier!... shall not cause undue or unnecessary harm, shall not cause irrevocable and untimely death to the undersigned... wow you left a lot of loop holes in here didn't you? all the better for me! *signs eagerly* I hope Aya gets to realize that Yohji won't do that terrible stuff to him. I hope this goes better than my imagination is dreading.
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Reviewed By: anon275 On: May 26, 2010 21:49 EDT
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The more I read the story, the more I get sad. The way you portray Aya is actually very realistic, considering the enormous amount of trauma he underwent, but it's kind of depressing. The stuff he went through won't go away no matter how much Yohji feeds him or takes him on shopping sprees or talks to him; it's stuff that'll last forever imprinted on him, and he'll never be normal again even if on the outside he might one day learn to act like any other person. I dunno if that's the way I should interpret it (it's taking a long time for Aya to heal, I guess, and it's making me think like this), but I just can't get these thoughts outta my head.
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Reviewed By: Amyeyl (haven't logged in in years) On: May 25, 2010 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Has it really been 2 months since I've read this? Apparently it has... but it left me with a large chunk of story to read, and that's always nice. I'm enjoying the slow, transitional period they're in so much so that a part of me doesn't want the inevitable return of Schwarz. Ah well, I'm sure I'll enjoy it when they do show up, too. Thanks so much!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 23, 2010 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Chibi definitely has a sweet tooth about as large as my own. Yohji, needs to learn Aya-pet is relating to the fact he's in a BEDROOM more than the fact he's actually scared. He was trained as a sex-slave Yohji-kun, bedrooms are not the safe havens for him that they are to us, so whenever you put him in one he will fall back on behaviors that he has been mentally trained to result in the least amount of harm to him. if you want him to really start getting better Yohji-kun, keep him out with others for longer periods of time, let him stay mostly in the living room or kitchen, and if you all need to discuss something sensitive send him to the other room, not the bedroom. perhaps make him a room of his own, he'll relax a bit more if his master isn't always in the room with him. This room can either have a couch that turns into a bed, or a twin, something which would only fit a single person comfortably and Aya wouldn't immediately equate with sex occurring in it. place the bed in the corner so he has a sense of having some protection and nothing can sneak up on him from that side. Give him a set of inside window locks so he can control if he wants the window open or not and give him thick blackout curtains so he knows that no one can look in and watch him. maybe even a simple locking doorknob when he gets a bit better will also make him feel more secure. I love this story Miko san and thank you for all the fast updates!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 23, 2010 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My wife kidnaps the computer for two days and I get to come back to FOUR lovely chapters of my beloved Miko's writing! It will take QUITE a bit to make me have anything even remotely resembling a bad day after that! I'm so glad the outing went relatively well, I KNEW Aya-pet would find that sweater. Yohji-kun admit it, Aya wouldn't be Aya without the hideous thing. Although, I doubt it's the actual COLOR he loves so much as the warm, thick, comfy softness. So maybe if you are very sneaky about it, you could either darken it to red and from there to violet or black, or lighten it to yellow or even cream if you tried. There are ways around any ugly sweater situation.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 20, 2010 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, if Yohji hates the collar so much, he might have more success at getting it off by replacing it. Buying or even making a new collar for Aya and explaining to him that that was the collar from the old master and his ownership, and since that relationship is over he has no more need to wear it since he has a new owner, and Yohji's collar is a symbol of his new start. Many willing dom/sub relationships have a collaring ceremony of some sort, it can be very special to the couple.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: May 20, 2010 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I wonder how THIS is going to go, being out in public and all. I must admit I am rather worried. I hope it goes well.
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Reviewed By: Cody-san the sleepy On: May 18, 2010 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh awww Yohji I could cuddle you for how nice you're being... I think I will *tackle hug glomp* I think there is a slight bond forming here, can't wait to see it progress!
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