| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenn On: November 12, 2002 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! That was a harsh lemon. Please continue! You can't leave poor little Yugi like that!
Icz |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 10:37 CST
Comment/Review:
arrgh!! update soon!! please!!! |
Reviewed By: Kisa and Her Yami and Duo Plushies On: November 06, 2002 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Kisa: I want a lemon!
Yami Plushie:Me too!
Duo Plushie: *rolls eyes* You would.
Yami Plushie: *blushes* |
Reviewed By: Kisa On: November 06, 2002 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ need i say more? :: hugs Yami plushie thoughtfully:: |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 05, 2002 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Go Yugi! How daring! :D
Please continue to write this sugarysweetsourinagoodwaylemony cake! |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 05, 2002 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: *mouth agape, staring at the screen with wide eyes* ...
SilentDarkness: aibou?
BleedingAngel: *blinks hard* That was... amazing! I crave more! This is wonderful! But, Yugi seems slightly hesitant. I hope he's absolutely sure about this...
SilentDarkness: *nods* My concerns are the same. Yugi shouldn't simply give himself to Yami for the mere reason of not being looked at as a child.
BleedingAngel: I agree. Believe me, I know how it feels to be treated like a five year old. *eyes her Yami*
SilentDarkness: *arches an eyebrow* I have treated you in no such way. Well... not that I'm aware of, anyway.
BleedingAngel: And you admit it! *ahems* Moving on from that prospect. Please, continue! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Djehuti [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn! *drooling all over keyboard* Yugi in tight leather! Woo! It's warm in here lol. Just picturing Yugi and Yami dancing all sexy in a night club is enough to make me faint! I hope the rest of the lemony goodness is coming soon! Don't forget to put lots of icing on the lemon cake! *smacks lips* LOL :D |
Reviewed By: Krys On: November 04, 2002 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must write more or else I'll go crazy. I like the story and I want to read more of it! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 04, 2002 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
MUST HAVE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE!! I LOVE YUGI&YAMI! KAWAII! This is sooooooo good I need more NOW!! Bring out more chapters pronto; Post haste woman really! LEMON Soon! ME WANT LEMONY HENTAI FUN!^_~
Please pretty please! Onegai?! Fast! Fast!
~AngelicMouseGirl~ |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
More... lemmmooonn... more! Please, don't leave us hanging!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 02, 2002 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing! Really! Just keep going! :D |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 11:34 CST
Comment/Review:
What are you planning for Yugi to do? I hope that Yugi isn't over his head. If Yugi will indeed go over his head, someone will have to be there to give him support. I hope that Yugi will calm down. By the way he is thinking, I feel that he could seriously hurt himself and that Yami needs to be there for him. |
Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan013(ff.net) On: November 01, 2002 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwww! Did ff.net take your story off or something? Cuz I couldn't find it when I was looking for it on their site... stupid NC-17 ban.
Hope you get the next chapter up real soon! I like it! |
Reviewed By: Djehuti On: November 01, 2002 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am liking this fic so far! I think I remember this back on FF.net! I love the new chapter -- excellent set up for the lemons to come. And oh man can you ever feel the tension between Yami and Yugi - who wants to do yummy things but can't infront of friends! Teehee, it's going to be a nice relief for them laters! Hehe Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: ChibiYuki&TheBunny On: October 29, 2002 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! ^_^ Please continue very very soon! I love really! Yugi/Yami rock! =P Bishounen Forever!
~You say I'm a Yaoi Obsessed Fangirl Like it's A BAD thing.~ ^_~ |
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