| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 14, 2003 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE WITH LEMON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC AND I SOOO WANTED MORE OF IT! ^_^ MORE MORE MORE REALLY REALLY SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!! ONEGAI?!! ARIGATO! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh... so u want 100 reviews? hmmm, ur greedy, but this fic is definetly good enough to get that. cant belive i gave u all 10's without the lemon to an nc-17! very good. tea sucks. update soon, love this fic! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 13, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
That was an interesting chapter. Joey loves Yugi?! That was definetly unexpected. Please post the next chapter soon? |
Reviewed By: Yugi_king_of_games [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari Raye: i LOVE your story so far :) Yami/Yugi 4ever!! i especially like the tea bashin' i ha8 her so much *GRRRRR*
Yami Raye: i agree w/ you hikari i ha8 Tea also i like your story so far as well! i like the way you seem to set up parts of the story keep goin' you are doin' a great job!!!!!
Yami and Hikari Raye: PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Mary-ohki:WRITE MORE! NOW! LEMON! NOW!
Ryou:*tries to hold the mental one back* Please hurry! She's addicted, and if you don't hurry, she'll write some of her own! Bad thought!
Mary-ohki:Tea must die!!!!Bakura! Get Tea NOW!!!
Bakura:I really don't take orders, but this would be my pleasure.*walks out, and comes back a few minutes later, dragging in a corpse of what used to be Tea, with several knives in her* Good?
Mary-ohki:Thank you*huggles Ryou and Bakura* |
Reviewed By: blah On: January 08, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Games On: January 02, 2003 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:: stares in mute shock. ::
Kitty: She can't describe her opinion towards this story, but I can assure you that she likes it. ^_^
:: holds up a sign that has her nodding in agreement. ::
Kitty: And she wants you to continue this as soon as possible. :D
:: nod nod! ::
Kitty: You'll hear from us again! B-bye now! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: December 30, 2002 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
vegakitty: *gasps!* she hit him!?
Duo-muse: uh oh.... *holds her back*
Vegakitty: I'll rip her tonsils out!! *struggles* leggo!
Duo-muse: i suggest you finish before she bites me...
Yami: she hasn't had her shots yet.
Vegakitty:: hey!
(it's very very very good! me like! ^_^ ) |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 03:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Uhm, is Yuugi actually gonna let her do that? Is Yami actually gonna let her do that? Is... Oh, f*ck it all... BEAT UP TEA/ANZU!!!
Ja! *runs to hide from crazy Tea/Anzu fans* |
Reviewed By: Little_Manga_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear was I drooling? That first chapter was so...yum! |
Reviewed By: Ro A. M. On: July 19, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa. When I started to read Chap. 10 ,I was like, 'Hey, what's going on here?' But then when it said it was only a dream, I was like 'Whew. Was going to say. Didn't think Yugi would be that relaxed w/ Jou when he wasn't w/ Yami.
It's July, summertime. Please update soon, okay? I want to read more!
Oh great, I sound like a hentai! Oh, well, this story's hentai, and there's, like, 130 reviews for this thing... |
Reviewed By: ITSAME On: December 19, 2002 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee Hee. That was both funny and deep. ^___^ My three favorite parts. (1) when Yugi's jii-chan tells them "not in the kitchen" (2) Jounochi going "good for you." (3) Anzu getting mad! Ha! What is she...a homophobic?! Sheesh! -__-;;
Well, great chapter! I am so glad you updated! Can't wait for the next one! You are number one! ^___^
Now you make me want to go out and buy a scanner...that is...if I hadn't already spent all my money on X/1999 manga... ^____^;;; Heh...heh..*SIGH* I wish I could scan that fan art for you. -__-;; Well, I could always borrow my dad's scanner for a while...no wait..he'd freak out if he saw THAT picture! o__0 Somehow I don't think two naked men in a bed would appeal to him.... o___0 |
Reviewed By: Tea_Sucks On: January 14, 2003 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is reaaaally good! Write more! Write more! BTW:
Tea sucks! Yugi is the best! |
Reviewed By: Lancer Monna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fight between Tea and Yugi. However I do believe she should get what she deserves for hurting Yugi like that. She should know better than think of him the way that she did. Otherwise great story. It was just what I needed after a rough day of exams. Please write more soon. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 16, 2002 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bring on the lemon! ^_________^ Grr... Anzu/Tea I hate her... Yuugi&Yami Kawaiiness! Yay! PLEASE HAVE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEE REALLLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!! ^_^ Pwease?! ^_~ Arigato! Ja ne! |
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