| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jamers On: March 09, 2003 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure what they mean by style but yours is nice. You have pretty good spelling and I've only spotted two mistakes in grammar through the nine chapters. It's an interesting plot twist with Tae. I really like this story. |
Reviewed By: Kat & Rose On: May 04, 2003 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
K: *Sniffles* that was so beautiful, i love it
R: Personaly i dont like Yaio lemons, but my Aibou does, so i wll let her read them
K: just cuz im unger than u doesnt mean u get to boss me aro-
R: Shhhh, i meant no offe,ce, getting back to the ficy though. Plz
Both: FINISH THE STORY!!
K: its really good, finish plz!
R: Ja Ne! |
Reviewed By: Aya On: February 23, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I loved every minute!
ALMIGHT MIKO NO HOSHI, I PRAY TO YOU!
Thanks for writing this, and I hope the lemony goodness comes soon |
Reviewed By: hunter On: February 22, 2003 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
continue. as. soon. as. possible. please.
sorry the story just made me all emotional. it's great! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: January 26, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greedy Miko!!!You have over 100 reviews, so update the damn story already!!!!I need more, more I tell you!!! AAAaargh! I love this story. |
Reviewed By: crystal tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't go for Yami x Yugi, but this is definitely an exception. In fact, you've inspired me to write one myself. That is, once I've finished the fic I'm writing at the moment. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: ashleystarfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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you are tooo funny its humor beyond humor I love it. please email me when the next chapters up ashleystarfighter@aemail4u.com |
Reviewed By: Ash On: January 24, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading it |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 24, 2003 22:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh Miko just one small request please?
As a very faithful reviewer, who loves your work,
I beg your supreme omnipotence for just one small thing.
KILL TEA! Please kill Tea!
Stop with the bashing it isn't enough anymore!
I want her dead!
Just freakin' kill her already!
She is sooooo irritating!
I don't care if you hit her with a bus,
or if she contracts a rare and deadly disease
that is only contagious to very annoying people.
Maybe Kaiba or Joey could just break her neck.
Or You could write me in the story just to kill her.
Oh wait I just had a great idea!
Have her kidnapped and raped by demon posessed
penguins who then sacrifice her as a blood offering to their leader.
A singing, dancing, brainwashing purple dinosaur named Barney who keeps her soul for all eternity!
They deserve each other!
(I just realised that if I ruled the world
tortures like this would be commonplace.
Ok now I'm even starting to scare myself.
Not good. Must be time for my meds.)
please Miko kill Tea? For me?? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 24, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Miiiiiiiko, where's that beautiful lemon you promised us?
Are you still writing it?
We gave you your 100 reviews like you wanted.
You have so many people anxiously awaiting
the newest creation of that yaoi mind of yours!
We want lotsa lemon! Don't keep us in suspense!
luv ya always! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke On: January 23, 2003 12:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Where is the gratuitous sex? Where? I want it NOW! {BTW: Loveing the story ^_~ } |
Reviewed By: ITSAME On: January 21, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! New Chapter! *SMILES* Man..Anzu...what a biotch.. -___-;; Heh..that Jounouchi/Yugi thing was cute... ^_____^ Keep on writing the good stuff! You are the best! ^____^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF there's no more?!!? *sighs annoyedly* You had better get writing. I just read
this all in one shot! AND YOU LEAVE ME WITH THAT?!?!? That's just plain cruel. Very
very cruel.
^^ Keep up the awesome work. |
Reviewed By: KisaandherDuoplushie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Kisa: LOOOOONNNNNGGGGGGG Time fan of this fic! But it's tru...you do need a lemon....
Duo: Oh yea! OO I'm ready... where is it!
Kisa: Please write it B 4 my henti plushie has a spaz attack! |
Reviewed By: Gypsy the Dark Angel On: January 17, 2003 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK ok you forced it out of me.
Here's a wonderful review for a wonderful author.
Did we hit the 100 mark?
I hope so because I want more of this story and soon.
Continue writing, your work is really really good. |
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