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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVE this fic!! Please update as soon as possible!! I'm going to keep thins story on my favorites list so i can read it as soon as you do. So write another chapter!! Please! ::borows Yugi's famious puppy dog eye look:: okay, i can't do it nearly as well as he can,but you get the idea. anyway, please update! ^_^
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Title: Grr on you Tranquility Goddess
Reviewed By: The warrior of SPORK Goddess On: April 04, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mer~ I have been searching on and on for the perfect little story with the Yami/Yuugi, Joey/Yuugi kinda light Anzu bashing story.. and I do believe I have found it ^_____^ The Goddess of Spork would be pround of you, Miko-dono! And, as I, Warrior for the almighty SPORK (Muahahahahaahh!!) am a tad bit weird, I make it a habit for reading the flame-ish reviews... And I know she said that she wouldn't care, but I have to say... That Traquility Goddess lady person.. she's wrong! If ya don't care about Anzu (Tea.. Tae... uhm, whatever her english name is >
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Reviewed By: Cody -San is being lazy On: February 07, 2005 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thinking since it has nearly been 2 years since you've updated this story that perhaps, just maybe, you have decided to stop writing it. This isn't good. I LOVE this story sooo much Miko, if I beg and plead and be really really good, will you update it or write a finishing chapter? please? pretty pretty pretty please? I need more of my favorites and This story is one of them!
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:15 CST
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This is a great story. I would really like maybe a side-fic with Joey/Yugi/Yami together. Yummy! Thanks very much.
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Title: Don't even think of this as a flame; when I flame, I flame.
Reviewed By: Tranquility_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:27 CST
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GODS I don't know why I keep noticing this and not telling you, but it's Téa not Tae! Can't you even spell a character's name right? I've read your explanation, but please, please, can't you edit the last chapters to show that you really DO know how to spell her name? Now I know I sound harsh, but that's how people are in the real world, honey. You've got to prepare yourself with the harsh things that reality has to bring to you, and some of my reviews come as that. Then there's the fact that you're somehow overusing Joey's Brooklyn accent. Yeah. You are. Now for Tea in chapter eight and nine, she's too OOC. I now she likes Yami and all, but she doesn't have to go all out just to slap Yugi and get him to know that she likes Yami, too. Fluff. Fluff. Between Joey/Yugi, I'm not fond of it, but you seem to make it look nice. . . Now for the lemon with Joey/Yugi, I just don't see Yugi as the type to cheat on somebody, moreover Yami. I mean, Yugi cheat on Yami?! Well. . .it's what I've said so far. It's good, but not good enough. Update. I need to see what happens next, and I don't care what your other readers have to say about what I have to say. I can state my opinion and I can state it however I want to state it, but please don't take these the wrong way. I'm trying to help you by giving you a review on how other people in the harsh outside world are. I need you to know how it feels like here. Update, onegai desu.
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Reviewed By: Tranquility_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:10 CST
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This isn't the kind of reviews I usually give, but now. . .hold on a minute! A few typos here and there, and your chapters are short. Yeah. That's what bothers me the most; I like this pairing, but I like it with more action, not just *Snap!* Yugi's older. I want to see the progress he goes through, more angst, more feeling. It's good, but it's not good at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story, good cliff hanger. Write more though, please. I'd love to see the story continued!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is good. I love all the twists. I hope you continue this soon..
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Title: me again...
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 15:42 CDT
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oh yah and i would really like a jou/yami/yugi thingie!
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Title: waaaaaah...
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
finish finish finish finish FINISH!!! i love this fic please finish!
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Reviewed By: Uchi no Bakura to Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lookie lookie lookie! *points at self* miko-sama has a new reviewer! ^_________^ *beams* please update soon! this ficcy is really, really good! ja!
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Title: FINISH
Reviewed By: flying pig On: April 10, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is really top notch, plz finish it.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOh! Me like! Who's Joey gonna end up with? Me like this ficcy. U update soon, ok? And give more lemony goodness please!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: March 06, 2004 11:21 CST
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SQUEE^^ Awwwwwww, angtsy-licious! I love you're fiction^^ Please Hurry and update! Onegai desuuuuuuuu!
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Title: Good Fic
Reviewed By: Yami-1 On: February 18, 2004 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
same as title very good story longer lemons needed please write more
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