| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 23, 2004 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I understand about stragling the muses! I love your fics! Update ASAP! I love your fics! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!!!! A good story, with plot, with good grammar, and a cliff-hanger...damn you! ARGH!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: megumi-chan On: August 21, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, please update, want to see lemony goodness ^^ |
Reviewed By: nonya On: June 19, 2003 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
so evil to leave it there. must....read.....eleventh.....chapter.....can't. can't ...hold out...much....longer. Need....writer....to.... update. PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE! |
Reviewed By: ChibiChula On: May 08, 2003 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ChibiChula: This fic rocks! Drama at it's best!
Kuroneko: That means she really liked the angst.
ChibiChula: The rivarly was intense!
Kuroneko: She liked the subtle Tea bashing.
ChibiChula: The extreme emotion in each bit of physical contact!
Kuroneko: She really got off on the lemon.
ChibiChula: Write more please?!?!
Kuroneko: Err... I think you can figure that one out for yourself.
ChibiChula: Stop translating what I'm saying and get back to work! Honestly, what does a girl have to do to get some inspiration from her muse? *grumble*
Kuroneko: How about you take a closer look at your own work ethic before you comment on mine. You spend more time reading fics than writing them!
ChibiChula: ...
Kuroneko: Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Neko On: May 05, 2003 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...so....much...yaoi!! WHEEEEE!! I LOVE THE FIC!! *dance*dance* I love yamis and their lights pairings, do you plan to do a Ryou/Bakura fic? CAUSE THEY'RE MY FAV PAIRING!!! ^_____^
Continue to write more lemon goodness!!
HAPPY WRITING!! |
Reviewed By: ITSAME On: April 15, 2003 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Confusing... ^^;;...but nice. XD Ahh...lemony goodness. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 09:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
good fic. plz continue it |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: April 14, 2003 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*YAY*!!!!Finally!!!!!The Miko updated!!I've been waiting for soooooo long! Now she leaves us with a Ra-damned cliffhanger! Just when I was getting all hot and bothered, too!
Can you tell I *love* this story? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. I feel sorry for Jou though. Are you going to make a three-some with Jou as well? Anyway, post soon! |
Reviewed By: EvenStar On: April 12, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemme just say that... THIS FIC IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it! thanx for the lemon scene.. although it wasn't yami/yugi it was still good...^-~ hehe... and more yami angst i know its mean but he's so cute when he's worried lol!!
Tsukasa(my yami): ur mean!
EvenStar : quiet you! chaces tsukasa
Tsukasa: help me! hey! you know that your the yami i'm the hikari!!
Evenstar: ... so..whats your point?
Anyway Great fic!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 12, 2003 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... sad. ;_; PLEASE UPDATE FASTER THAN BEFORE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FICCIE! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_^MORE! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Ki On: April 11, 2003 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time! ^_^
I think I get what Yami's thinking of though. Can't wait for the next chapter - hopefully, you'll publish it before July. O_x |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: *glares at author*
Karen: That would be the "how dare you interrupt what should have been a perfectly good lemon" glare. However, from Yami's reaction there is not going to be a "good" Yugi/Yami lemon for quite some time. How much torture are you going to put them through?
LD: *still glaring*
Karen: And the funny thing is she doesn't even really like Y/Y parings. She just likes the sex.
LD: *now glaring at Karen and the author*
Karen: So what made Yami stop? Inquiring minds want to know. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chappie. Update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: stormdragon On: March 17, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one I haven't seen any like it yet, please update soon |
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