| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>font color="blue">SailorChibi: Damn! When I saw you'd updated, I thought they'd finally get on with it! But they didn't! ~bursts into tears, Anime Style~
Himeko {A.K.A Yami S.C}:Don't worry, she really does like it. It's just all the NC-17 fanfics being gone from ff.net is stressing her.
S.C: Especially when I really need them as stress relievers, something I can read that will take my mind of stupid High School!
But it really is good.....
Himeko: ~pats her crying hikari's head~ Yes, it was. Do update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: October 18, 2002 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, I loved Yami. "Damn, Yugi always handles the emotional stuff..." lol |
Reviewed By: Ryoko On: October 18, 2002 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finaly this has been updated Yipee |
Reviewed By: shader On: October 13, 2002 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
cmon write more plesase |
Reviewed By: Hikari_no_Yami On: May 11, 2003 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic! You make Yugi seem UNinnocent unlike other ppl...-_- |
Reviewed By: Lydia NightShade On: October 11, 2002 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I thought that it was sweet and ctually realistic for once. Most people don't bother to mention that most virgins aren't willing to go all the way the first night, even if it IS the love of thier life. Hats off to you! |
Reviewed By: squee On: October 07, 2002 23:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
squee:*stares at screen* Unfinished?! Wot the fookin' hell...Where's the porn?!
Lemon Muse: There, there. These things take time...
squee: But, but...aw, yer right! But Miko no Hoshi, get writing! Cuz you got skills! ^-^
Lemon Muse: You can't force art...>_ |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wheeeee!! You've got a Yugi/Yami one too!! ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter. Get it up soon, onegai!! ^.~ Ja ne, minna-chan! |
Reviewed By: ryoufan843 On: October 06, 2002 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you got 11 reviews! So, when are you gonna write more? Cause you said you would if you got 5, and you got more than twice that, so keep your promise! |
Reviewed By: Cassie On: October 06, 2002 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. I've actually been waiting for the 2 nd part of this ever since i read it on ff.net. Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: Don't apologize. I absolutely loved this fanfiction. I nearly melted when Yami decided to take his light's feeling into consideration. It makes this peice of work even more beautiful and wonderful.
SilentDarkness: I must agree with you, aibou. Rushing into mindless sex, is unworthy when you are unsure of yourself.
BleedingAngel: *nods* Please, continue this. My Yami and I will await the next chapter.
SilentDarkness: Take care.
BleedingAngel: Yep! *waves enthusiastically* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Midnight Phoenix On: October 05, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MP:Mwahahaha!!! I LOVE YamiXYugi stories. Especially NC-17 ficies. Curse FF.net! They shouldn't have taken them away! -_-
YP: Aibou! Your 15! You're not supposed to be reading this sort of thing...
MP: Well, I didn't see YOU looking away!
YP: ** Shuts up **
MP: And PLLLEEEAAASSSEEE continue! Need... chapter... three!!! |
Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan013 (on FF.net) On: October 05, 2002 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, you've got 11 reviews! will this convince you enough to write a second chapter? (heeheehee, I hope so. I love yaoi stories!) You promised you would if you got 5 reviews, and you got more than twice what you asked for, so you should keep your promise like a good author. |
Reviewed By: Zheryta On: October 04, 2002 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: squee On: September 30, 2002 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
squee: Gimme my porn! I mean...eh, more please!
Lemon muse: You're insane...
squee: Well...I *like* YamixYugi lemons! Yay!!*waves yaoi banner proudly* Yaoi and...yuri! Whoo!
Lemon muse: Uh...right... |
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