| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: December 15, 2002 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
::pounces Tea and skins her alive with a cheese grater:: Evil Tea! Evil evil evil! ::jumps up and down on the bloody mess that was once Tea:: Great fic! Keep writing! I hope Yami kicks Tea's ass for smacking Yugi! |
Reviewed By: lee On: December 15, 2002 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Tea must be punished...preferably with something sharp and pointy. |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
WAHOO! I L-O-V-E this fic! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 15, 2002 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far. I like the way you've added problems for Yugi and Yami to overcome. Are you going to do Tea bashing or just have her really upset with not being able to have Yami? |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 06, 2002 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi i am Fox_Demon form fan Fic.net any way i love ur story and u are so mean to leave it at that. cant wait for next chapter |
Reviewed By: kel On: December 05, 2002 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was great!!!!!!
let it snow, let it snow, let it snow!!!!!!
sorry, we just got snow here. please write more soon!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: Kari aka the ever-lover of Tomo On: November 28, 2002 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mean, these are supossed to have critism right? But there's nothing wrong with this story. It's...so good. Well any who. Let's go over again.
"Tamahome"
"Miaka"
"Tamahome"
"Miaka"
"Tama- BLOW"
::has just killed Miaka with a shotgun::
I ever tell you I HATE Miaka. But your story...that I love. Continue soon or I will blow up. No, I might have to send my sister to make you write more...cause ya know...she doesn't want me to blow up.
Kari |
Reviewed By: Emi Rodri On: November 26, 2002 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love love love your story. it has a feel that i haven't seen for quite a while. I feel so bad for yugi though yami too. i really want to know whats up next i mean the story has been real good and i really dont have a clue of what is to happen. just please don't seperate them make them work through a lot of crap or sumthin or make yugi do things to yami... these are just some suggestions but im sure the story will come out great!^_^ much love..keep writing...
Emi |
Reviewed By: Emi Rodri On: November 26, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love love love your story. it has a feel that i haven't seen for quite a while. I feel so bad for yugi though yami too. i really want to know whats up next i mean the story has been real good and i really dont have a clue of what is to happen. just please don't seperate them make them work through a lot of crap or sumthin or make yugi do things to yami... these are just some suggestions but im sure the story will come out great!^_^ much love..keep writing...
Emi |
Reviewed By: CasualOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 00:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Waah!! Poor Yugi, poor Yami, *smacks Joey* Joey no baka!! *sighs* Okay, now that that's out of my system...
I can't wait to see how this turns out. I've read all 7 chapters at one sitting. Since I see it's working out, I won't chew you out (too much) over what happened in the janitor's closest.
Please make Yugi-kun, happy! He deserves to be happy! How can you resist that face? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 24, 2002 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really great so far! I'm glad that chapter seven ended on a happier note. Please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Katmon: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
Kurai: Hikari, calm down, please...
Katmon: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!
Seiji: *smacks Katmon* You love the fic, you want to read more, and you're acting like an idiot, correct?
Katmon: *nods, blinking* How'd you understand me?
Seiji: Practice...
Kurai: Baka... Anyway, I liked it too and would love it if you continued!
Seiji: I'll be nice for once. It actually was very good, & I'd love to see more of it. We'll watch this one, neh?
Kurai and Katmon: *nod continuously* HAI!!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^=
Kurai!
Seiji!! |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 23, 2002 10:22 CST
Comment/Review:
WEll this is definately interesting and I can't wait to see more if you're willing to write |
Reviewed By: ITSAME... On: November 22, 2002 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh...I already reviewed once, but I wanted to tell you...your wonderful fic inspired me to draw a fan art for it! Wah! I look at it and I cry 'cause I think of your fic! It is a yaoi pic... *nods* nothing graphic...they're under the covers. Yami is asleep (looking happy and content) and Yugi-taichi is awake and he looks all sad and he is crying and has his hand over his heart and stuff. SO SAD!!!!!! And his other hand is gripping the covers and he looks angry and sad and confused all at the same time. Ahhhh..too bad for me. I have no scanner!!!! WAH!!!!!!!! Just wanted to tell you though that your fic inspired me!!!! ^_________^ |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: November 22, 2002 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up I'm really enjoying this!!!
FYI Tae is spelled wrong, it's Tea.
:-) |
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