| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 21:41 EST
Comment/Review:
evil!! evil!! whyyyyyy!! noooooooo!!!!! hehe it is too a fairy tale!! i want happy ever after! oh well...looking foward to the next chap! ~.^ |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grinds teeth while pondering if she should throttle the author* *sniffle* That was very moving and EVIL I tell ya. It can become a happy ending and fairytales aren't the only things that have happy endings. PLEASE REMEMBER HAPPY ENDINGS DO HAPPEN NOT JUST IN FAIRYTALES, I HAVE SEEN IT MYSELF. SO PLEASE MAKE A HAPPY ENDING. *begs on her knees with big eyes* Anyway I loved this last chappy as usual. Oi go ahead and make plenty of angst but remember B/V belong together!! ^_^ Great jobs as always and good luck. Bura-chan fellow fanfiction author and artist |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: November 27, 2002 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Awesome job! |
Reviewed By: nikeie On: December 06, 2002 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really is great. this could have happened, but most unlikely. But it still is a really really really kewl story. but bulma shouldn't put vegeta through that... he really is a very kewl person! (as u can tell, my fav.) but i h8 peeps calling him veggie, if u wanna shorten his name it's geta, plz peeps!!! :) |
Reviewed By: nikeie On: December 06, 2002 16:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
sorry!!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 25, 2002 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAH! a fantasy dream.who would of thought that was coming..lol aggh!! new chapter needed badly!! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 19:33 EST
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wonderfully done, as usual!!!!! good luck with ur new boyfriend...*see unlike other ppl, i read AN's and like to offer encouragement!!!* now what about MY celibacy streak? but that can be dealt with, i'm still battling with bio hw. LOL great great great chapter, now i HAVE TO GO REVIEW on the 'she hates me' songfic, cuz it is just sooo funny!!! ~ciao, cya in the next review. keep up the good work. I'm assuming this means that the fic is almost finished? |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love the suspense!! hehe, well great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: CherryKitty On: November 23, 2002 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE GET THE NEXT PART UP!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 06, 2002 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my kami! you lil evil person!
If I knew how to cry I would because that was so sad! but so good! I mean well written!
But sonce I can't cry and i never will
I hope that vegeta comes back to his love,
bulma. I really hope so.... |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 17:36 EST
Comment/Review:
wow, you've gotten more reviews over one fic, than i have in ALL of my fics, can you say *pathetic?*, apparently ppl like kinkiness more than they like angst. i wish it really wasn't so. whatever. great chapter. that was the weirdest thing though, puar and Yamcha...ew...ciao, g2g...be looking around for the rest for ur fic soon!!! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 09:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shudders* The more we find out about Yam-baka the more scary it is.......Keep it up :D. This is a well written story but I HATE the last cliffy. You are so evil. When I came across that cliffy I felt like shakin' some sense into you. Hmm so Puar's feelings are revealed, ne? I always knew the freaky flying rodent had it for Yam-baka like the pale doll thing has it for Tenshihan. Hmm anywho PLEASE PUT OUT THE NEXT CHAPPIE FAST FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI! Bura-chan
PS- Okay maybe I misunderstood your review K-chan but the little V/Y interludes are the sicko Yam-baka's fantasies for the delicious, delectable Veggie. *shudders* Hmm maybe you can have Veggie ACCIDENTLY castrate Yamucha with a ki blast, Tina.
ANYWAY your story is pure genius. ^_^ more please. |
Reviewed By: WH Y ME!!!!! On: November 18, 2002 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT AND LEAVE ME AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT. IM SO MAD AT YOU. DAMN IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON. IM PRACTICALLY FALLING OUT OF MY CHAIR |
Reviewed By: K-Chan14 On: November 18, 2002 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I think you are doing a great job. I thought this was pretty original since it kinda has that little y/v hinting on the side. LOL! Don't see that very often. But I thought it was pretty different for a B/V. Keep it coming I don't like being left hanging like this... :p lol anywayz...c-ya later.
K-Chan14 |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good thing I have good bladder control...I was laughing so hard I would've wet myself otherwise! Great Chap. |
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