| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: December 26, 2002 01:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I think 6 year olds no more about the...a-"deed," than she does. What about porn? How could she be so smart, but yet so dumb? This was a really sweet lemon. I espcially like the end. "Love, Tina" Never seen that before. Nice work.
I knew it was Vegeta! No, I didn't. It could have been Goku, for all my sick mind was thinking. But~I wasn't thinking that. Thank you very much. And I do not think jealous is cute. No way, I'm jealous kills. Killing isn't cute. Unless you dress your victims up like Barbies... |
Reviewed By: Kandy (not signed in) On: December 26, 2002 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Now sex "just happens" really smooth. Nice work. Although, what Bulma/Burm.. said in the begining had me off a little. Like she was talking to herself in past tense.(?) weird. Other than that, pretty good! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, what a wonderful ending!!! I LOVED this story...from start to finish. Don't you DARE give up writing fanfics...I'll have to hunt you down and force you to write at gunpoint! LOL...you have a lot of talent girl and I look forward to your next fic! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 09:53 EST
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VampireGoddess=
**put water on her eyes to make them look like she
is crying** That was soo beautiful! bravo*whistles* excellent woohoo! *audience stands up**claps** you go! that was superb, excellent, whoa! it was..there isn't a word for it! what an amazingly amazing fic! One of the top best I've ever read! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: December 24, 2002 09:50 EST
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I loved it great lemons and very funny, merry christmas. Thanks for a great read. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 05:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was original..... i think i nearly had a coranary cause i as laughing so hard about yamcha lusting for vegeta...... god that was funny.... lol great job ^_^ |
Reviewed By: CherryKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 07:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color
please update soon! |
Reviewed By: *~Pixie Dust~* On: December 06, 2002 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very nice story...BUT THAT IS SO UNFAIR!!!!!By reading what you've wrote so far...I think I can guess what's gonna happen. |
Reviewed By: *~Pixie Dust~* On: December 06, 2002 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you have to make that happen? That wasn't nice. You beter make Vegeta come back. that's so not fair!! Anyway I really liked the chapter. Keep doing a nice job. |
Reviewed By: TrunksGirl On: December 05, 2002 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 04, 2002 09:47 EST
Comment/Review:
I really really really REALLY wanna kick Bulma's fat ass right now!! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 04, 2002 09:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sob...you got me to crying woman...sob...not fun..
this aint a feary tale, but for dende's sake, please make it a happy ending...I cannot wait until the next chapter...I love this story...your a great writer.. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: December 04, 2002 09:15 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Por Vegeta! I've never wanted to slap Bulma so bad in my entire life!!!
Another great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Mai On: December 03, 2002 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story another great chapter.Please make the next chapter a happy ending. |
Reviewed By: moonshine On: December 03, 2002 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, can't wait to read the end!! |
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